Chapter: "Rebirth of a soul" [my suggestion]

"Rebirth of a soul", I don't know if it's phrased correctly, but it should read "Rebirth of a soul".
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Well my english isn't the best either * lol *
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Maybe I'll use a different heading later, but unfortunately I couldn't think of a different one * ggg *
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Okay, stop talking Read the fanfic:
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["........."]/ the name of the person who thinks / = a person thinks
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"....." = A person speaks
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{.........} = My comment
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It was a peaceful morning, the birds were chirping and a light breeze was blowing.
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But it shouldn't stay so quiet ..........
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"HANDS UP, OTHERWISE YOU MAY SWALLOW LEAD!" Shouted a deep male voice from the Satan City Bank.
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A girl named Trash was walking past her.
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But when she heard the man's threat, she stopped and ran towards the bench.
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Trash ran through the door and saw the cashiers being threatened with weapons.<br />
Suddenly the door of the bank opened a second time and Videl entered.
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"Nice to see you again, Videl!" Said Trash and smiled.
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"We can talk later, let's take care of that first!", Videl ran towards one of the robbers and knocked the gun out of his hand.
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["Videl has changed, I last saw her 5 years ago and she was hanging around with a weird guy, his name, I think, was Gohan!]/ Trash /
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"What are you standing around there trash? You'd better help me!" Shouted Videl and punched one of the robbers in the stomach.
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Trash was torn from her thoughts and replied, "Yes, wait!"
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She ran up to one of the gangsters and hit him in the face, then in the stomach so that he wouldn't get up again.
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Videl meanwhile buttoned the other two who had nothing to laugh about.
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Howling sirens, the police were on their way to arrest the gang.
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The police thanked Videl and Trash and took the three gangsters to the station.<br />
The police were happy that Trash helped them, Videl had done that before, but now she was married and had a little daughter to care for.
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Trash knew nothing of this, since she had last seen Videl when she was 9 years old.
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The police car drove away and the police waved goodbye to Trash and Videl.
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"I'm happy to see you again, Videl!", Trash said and grinned, "I'm 14 years old now, and I last saw you when I was nine."
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Videl looked at her and smiled back.
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Her smile was gentle and warm, Videl had always been something of a big sister to Trash.
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"Tell me," Trash suddenly asked, "where have you been all these years?"
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Videl grinned: "Just come along, I'll invite you to my home!"
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"Really?" Shouted Trash.
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Videl nodded and took to the skies.
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"Booaahh!", Trash was speechless, "since when can you fly that, Videl?"
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"Oh, you don't know that yet, I've been able to do it since I was 16 years old!", she came back on the floor," it just goes faster that way! "
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"I understand .......!", Trash still looked at her friend.
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"We should go, I'm expected at home!" Said Videl, taking Trash by the hand.
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"Really? By whom?" She asked curiously.
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"You will find out then!", She replied.
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They took off and after a 10 minute flight they landed in front of a house that apparently belonged to Videl.
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"Come with me!", Videl pulled Trash into the house.
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When Trash was in the so-called "house", she thought["This is no longer a house, this is a villa!"]/ Trash /
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"Come on, I would like to introduce you to someone!" Videl asked her friend.
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They went up a flight of stairs to a room door.
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Videl opened it and Trash saw a young man.
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"Who, who is that?" Trash asked with wide eyes.
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"May I introduce", Videl waved the man over, "this is Gohan, he's my husband!"
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................. Trash didn't say anything, she was just speechless because Videl had always said earlier that she would never marry.<br />
Gohan first devoted himself to Videl, and gave her a kiss that grew deeper and deeper.
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Videl's younger friend was embarrassed, Videl noticed and stopped.
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"Gohan, that's trash, you know! I've already told you about her once!" Said Videl to her husband.
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"Oh yes, your friend who also catches criminals!", Gohan turned to her.
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Gohan looked Trash in the eye, and suddenly he was terrified, so that he stumbled back a few steps.
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Videl and Trash looked at him in amazement.
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What had frightened Gohan so ??? What did he see?
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To be continued ....... ……………… ..
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So, we did it !! Please write a lot of comments !!
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I want to know what you think of this part !! * lol *
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* gia sou *
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_Trash_
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