Chapter: Can you feel the power? (part1)

So first I have to say I'm pretty new here ... This is my first FF ever and I ask for your understanding if it turns out not that great! This is supposed to be an FF that plays about 2 years after Volume 42 has ended. Oki, let's go!
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HOW IT ALL BEGAN:
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On Friday afternoon, Son-Goten, who was visibly worn out, flew home to Jindujun. He told Gohan that even 2 years after Boo was defeated, 96 of 112 pages of his history book still had Mister Satan at least once. Chichi had another fit because she thought Goten should study rather than waste his time doing something like that. He went upstairs to his room and called Trunks[Goten now has a cell phone]to see if he would like to train. Trunks yelled, "Are you coming here? We have a new training room!" !"" Wait ... "Dad, can Goku come here?" "All right!" Vegeta growled. “Okay, Son-Goten, your father can come with you!” “Great, we'll be there in 5 minutes! See you soon!” Son-Goku was just having dinner[what else ...]when Goten stormed down the stairs. "Dad, can we go right away?" "Yes, do you want to ... * munch * ... because not even ... * gulp * ... eat something? * Gulp *" "I'm not hungry[just imagine that before!, a Sayajin and no hunger !!]and no time! I really want to go to Trunks! "" Nagut, * scratch the rest of your plate * then let's go! "" And who will take care of me? ", asked Chichi shrill. "We can call your father if you want?" Said Goku.[Does Chichi's father have any other name besides beef devil? Please to enlightenment! ]“As long as there is someone here and I'm not so alone!” Goku pressed a key to dial the number. "Hello father-in-law! Can you come here please? I wanted to go away with Son-Goten and Chichi doesn't want to be alone!"said Goku." Hello Goku! Of course I'll come over! I wanted to see my daughter again anyway! I'm on my way! Ciao! ", answered the beef devil and hung up.
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A SHADOW IN THE DARK? :
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After the beef devil had arrived and Trunks had called again why Son-Goten was not coming, Son-Goku and his son set off. Goku decided to fly despite being so late and that was a mistake. When they were half way back, Son-Goten noticed a shadow. "A shadow? In the dark? Papa?" Asked Son-Goten and when he wanted to look at his father, he was no longer there. Goten looked around and saw that his father had come to a halt a little way behind him. Son-Goku gave him a warning and indicated that he should keep quiet. Goku slowly looked around, heard a voice call: "SON-GOTEN, YOU MUST COME TO ME!" "Mom?" Shouted Goten. "Be quiet!", only his father replied:" That's not Chichi! "Then Son-Goku felt a ki flicker that definitely didn't belong to his son." That energy! ", thought Son-Goku and before he could transform into an SSJ he was hit in the back. He fell through the treetops and hit the ground hard. Son-Goten, who watched the whole scene and was paralyzed, Only felt his father's aura fade, and then his eyes went black.
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"HAHAHAHAHA !!!", a horrible voice startled Goten from sleep. "What was that nightmare ... and where is Dad?", Goten trembled. "I wanted to go to Trunks with Dad! But ..." "Wait a minute, where am I anyway?" Goten got up and looked around. "Funny, everything is so dark here! You can't see anything! I'll turn on the light first!" So he turned into an SSJ. After Goten had looked around he suddenly noticed ... NOTHING! He was standing alone in a small room, sparsely furnished with his bed and a small bedside table.There is also a pot with water in it. But no door. Not even a window. But, on the ceiling, about three meters above him, there appeared to be a hatch. He squeezed and squeezed, hit it as hard as he could and even let go of a Kame-Hame-Ha on the blanket, with his ki glowing strongly. But nothing happened. Son-Goku's 2nd son only found that the ceiling and the alleged hatch were not scratched. Son-Goten threw himself on the bed and howled. He felt like when he was less than a year old and never saw his father. He had lost his father again. In his loneliness and in the knowledge that he just didn't know how he got here, he finally collapsed and fell asleep.[Sorry about ss and ß, I don't know my way around; and whether new or old spelling does not matter.]
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"SON-GOTEN, NOW YOU ARE WITH ME!" The voice called. "Where are you? Who are you? And where is my father?" Shouted Goten. "YOU WILL BELONG TO ME, YOU WILL KNEEL IN FRONT OF ME!WHETHER YOU LIKE IT OR NOT! "answered the voice." What did you do with my father? Finally answer me! ", Goten shouted again and first fell into SSJ status, then immediately into SSJ2 status." NOTHING HAPPENED TO YOUR FATHER! I JUST WANT YOU! "came the answer." But ... where is my father? "Son-Goten fell to his knees and his hair turned black again. Tears fell to the floor." YOU'RE MINE! I WILL GIVE YOU POWER! YOU WILL BE STRONGER THAN YOUR FATHER! "called the voice." Who or what are you? "howled Son-Goten in spite of his 20 years." IF YOU WANT TO KNOW IT ABSOLUTELY: THREE OF WE ARE! CLOSE YOUR EYES AND YOU WILL SEE US! "
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"But ... rraaaah !!!! You look like ............... look like ............... how. ...............---
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--- Next part is coming soon ---
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Who are the three What do you want from Son-Goths? And what about Goku? You will find the answer to these questions in the next part!
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So! That was the first part!As I said, more will follow. I will try to make this FF as exciting as possible and divide each part into about 2-3 chapters. Please write a few comments so that I can see what I can still improve on my writing style, etc.!
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Cu — Fast_Furious
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