Chapter: Can you please read my FF?

Hi dear writers !!!!
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I ask you to read the last two parts of my FF. i think it got a lot better than the first two parts. I wrote 7 pages on Saturday and Sunday. Please read it
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thanks
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VidelZ
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PS: You can download it to Word if it is too long