Chapter: Love the moment 1

Hello this is my first FF and therefore I would like to ask you to write me criticism or praise.
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your dbangel
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Chapter 1: The Tournament
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Group Z stood in a large hall, where all fighters who had qualified were. Yamcha, who was looking around carefully, nudged Kuririn in the ribs, which prompted him to ask what was going on. Yamcha pointed to a girl between 18 and 19 years of age who was standing near the Z group and said: "Take a look at her, do you think she botched the qualification? I don't think she looks strong enough for the finals ...... "
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While Yamcha continued to talk about the girl, Piccolo became aware of the girl and noticed a detail that the two had overlooked: The girl had a tail !!
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sequel follows
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I'm sorry, this part was a little too short. If a lot of commis come, I'll write the next part quickly and much longer - I promise.