Chapter: A weak point?

Hi! this is my first ff and i hope you like it !!
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so, to explain: Son-Goku had two daughters, Chana (16) and Son-Gota (15). Vegeta and Bulma also had 2 children, Vegetan (15 years old and together with son-Gota) and Vegeto (around 11 years old). Chana was born when Trunks was around 18. Then there is Kijo (16) and Konseki. Kijo is Konseki's son and, Kijo is with Chana. T.K. is Vegetan's best buddy. Oh yes, Kijo flew into space with his father to train.
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so, i think the story is pretty understandable now !! have fun while reading!! I ask for Komis !!!!!!
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A weak point?
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'Arrived. Wow, a new record! 9 minutes 36! But I could have done better. 'Chana thought when she had finally reached the Kame House of The Lord of the Turtles. She wiped the sweat from her forehead with the back of her hand because it was really hot.That's why she was only lightly dressed, with white hot pants and a crop top. You could see that she was not wearing a bra. Chana knocked on the front door and waited to be opened. "Yeah! Come on!" One could hear Muten-Roshi shouting. He came running to the door. "Oh Chana! What can I do for you?", He asked and stared into her cleavage. This hit him in the face that he averted his gaze and held the bleeding nose. "What do you want now?", Roshi asked a little annoyed. "I was sent by my father. He actually wanted to come by himself, but was unable to. So he sent me. You have to put up with me. Well, it doesn't matter. I should pick something up.", Chana said first a bit nervous, but friendly again soon. "Aja ...", the master began, "that's right ... He wanted to ... Hmmm where did I get it?" He started rummaging around in dressers and cupboards until he finally held a package in the air. "Here!Here it is! Give this to your father! ", he pressed the parcel into her hand and added," Hopefully it's the right one ... "Chana took the parcel and stepped through the door." Ok, thanks. See you! Have a nice day! ", she called out to him as she started." It's a pretty big package, you could say it is more like a package. What's in there? ", she looked at her watch," Oh no! I'm late again !! I should take care of Sammy !! But now quickly, deliver the package and then I'll jet off to Trunks and Marron. I hope you are not too mad at me! ", Chana said to herself and stepped up a gear. Finally when she got home, she tore the door open and screamed through the whole house:" DAAAAAAAAD !!!!!!!! I COLLECTED THE PACKAGE FROM THE LORD OF THE TURTLE !! I'll put it on the stairs !! I AM WEEEG AGAIN !!! HAVE TO GO TO TRUNKS AND MARRRON !!! SEE YOU LATER!! "" OK, see you later, "Goku said casually as he came out of the living room door.Chana looked at him in amazement. "What is it? I think you have to go?" Said Goku and looked at her questioningly. "I thought you were in the GR and would train ... Well, I'll be gone then ... Bye bye!", She shouted when she started again. She flew to the capital as fast as she could. When she arrived within a very short time, she rang the doorbell. Trunks opened: "Ahh, Chana, there you are at last! It's about time. You are usually so over-punctual!", He said with a grin. "Yes, sorry, but I should pick up another package from the master of the turtles for my father. Sorry!", She said unsettled with a guilty conscience. "Hey, it doesn't matter! It's okay! You're here now.", Trunks said encouragingly and hugged her like his sister. "Chana! Finally! Here is a list with all the important phone numbers, if anything! Trunkto sleeps with Vegeta and Bulma, so you don't have to mess with him too.", Marron said from the living room door with Sammy in her arms kicked.Chana took the little one from her. "Ok, let's go then. After all, we don't want to be late! Trunkto, come on, we have to go!" Marron shouted when she was standing next to Trunks in the doorway. The little one came running. "Hello Chana! And bye!", He greeted her. "Uh ... yes, hello and bye.", She said a bit surprised and looked after the little one who ran out of the house. Now Marron and Trunks went too.
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Suddenly the phone rang. Chana answered: "Hello?" "Chana! I thought that you are already at Trunks and Marron. Are the two gone already?" Asked Bulma on the phone. "Yes, they are, why?" "Oh, just so. I wanted to talk to you anyway" "Oh yes? What's up?" "I wanted to ask you if you know where Son-Gota and Vegetan are? They had Have to be here long ago! Vegeta and I will be late for the opera! "" Sorry Bulma, but I don't know where they are. Sorry! "" Alright. It's just a bit stupid. Oh, wait a minute , the doorbell rings, hopefully they are.So bye! "" Yes, ok, bye! "Both hung up.
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Bulma opened the door. Son-Gota and Vegetan stood holding hands in front of the door. "Hi Mom! There we are!", Vegetan said and grinned hypocritically, "It's about time! Your father and I are still late because of you! I have just called Chana, who is already holding the position at Trunks and Marron and take care of Sammy. And your brother and Marron will come over here and bring Trunkto over. ", Bulma complained. Then she breathed out deeply and added, now calmer, "But now you're here." She turned away, turned around and mumbled something, "I should go on vacation, far, far away ... "Vegetan and Son-Gota entered the apartment. They went into the living room and sat on the sofa. There they cuddled a little. Suddenly they both started. Bulma was screaming like him through the house: "VEGETA !!! WHERE ARE YOU ??? WE HAVE TO GO SOON !!!!!!!!!" Vegeta slowly came down the stairs.He felt pretty stupid in the suit, you could tell by looking at him. Bulma had put on her long black evening dress. Son-Gota and Vegetan came out of the living room to listen to Bulma's last instructions. Suddenly the doorbell rang. Vegetan opened it. It was Trunks, Marron and Trunkto. The boy immediately ran into the house and up the stairs towards Vegeto's room. "Ah, there you are at last! Then we can go straight away!", Bulma turned back to Son-Gota, "You are now the woman in the house. Don't let yourself get down and take good care of my boys!" grinned. "Alright!" "Ok, bye bye !!" "Bye bye bye !!" The four adults started walking. Son-Gota and Vegetan went up to the boys. "Hey, you little farts !!! Just to make it clear: You don't annoy us and don't screw up! Otherwise there will be a set of hot ears !!!", Vegetan yelled at the boys angrily. "We won't let you tell us anything that THAT is clear!" Vegeto yelled back."Hey, take it easy !! So, be nice, then you'll get something too, okay?", Said Son-Gota kindly. "Ok! We are nice!", The boys answered at the same time. "Good! You are good boys!", Son-Gota smiled at her. The boys grinned up and down. Then Vegetan and Gota went back into the living room. "I lent us videos! Look, is that possible?", Vegetan looked at Son-Gota questioningly. ">> 10 things I hate about you <<, >> Sleepless in Seattle << and >> TITANIC << !!", Gota read the titles out loud. "And this one", Vegetan countered her in the video. ">> The aliens of the 12th grade <<? !! You can't be serious !?", she said surprised. "Why? The film should be really good, really bloody, scary and mass murderous !!", enthused Vegetan. "Well, ok, it's definitely a good movie."
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They were watching the end of "10 Things I Hate About You" when the doorbell rang. Vegetan went and opened the door. Chana was standing outside the door with Sammy in her arms."Uh ... Hi Vegetan ...! I hope I don't bother, because Sammy was bored, just like me and we were all alone at home ...", Vegetan didn't let Chana finish, "Hey Come on in! We're watching videos. You can put Sammy in Vegeto's old bed. It's in a capsule in the bedroom. Go to the living room, I'll get it. ", he smiled and then went in Towards the bedroom. Chana checked him briefly and then went to Son-Gota in the living room. "Hi sister!", Greeted Chana Gota. "What are you doing here?", Gota asked surprised. "Nice greeting. We were bored and well ..." Now Vegetan came with the capsule. "Here. The best thing to do is to put it in my parents' bedroom. Hmmm ... do you want to spend the night here too?", Vegetan pushed the capsule into Chana’s free left hand. She went into the bedroom and put Sammy in the cot, then went back to the others.
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You just saw "TITANIC" when someone unlocked the door.Vegeta entered the living room. "Dad ?! What are you doing here? And where is Mom?", Vegetan asked. "Your mother and I argued. She's sleeping with a friend ...", Vegetan said angrily, then turned to Chana, who he had just discovered, "What are you doing here ?!" "I .. . um ... ", Vegetan interrupted her," she sleeps here today and Sammy too. "" Aha. I'm going to the GR, don't be bothered by anyone !! ", Vegeta growled. "Bring Sammy to a guest room, I'll show you which one.", Vegetan and Chana shipped the little one to the guest room where Chana would sleep that night. Then he went back to Son-Gota in the living room. Chana, however, went to the GR. She didn't know why, but somehow she felt sorry for Bulma and Vegeta. They argued all the time. She looked through the window in the door. Vegeta stood in the middle of the room, bathed in sweat and breathing heavily, avoiding a ball of energy that was thrown around by a machine. Suddenly he noticed Chana and looked at her with his I-kill-you-if-you-don't-fuck-yourself-look.Chana felt an ice-cold shiver down her spine. She left immediately. She told Gota and Vegetan that she had already gone to bed because she was tired, after all it was already half past twelve. She went to bed and tried to fall asleep, which didn't work. It was already half past one and Son-Gota, Vegetan, the boys and Sammy were sound asleep. Chana went out to the terrace in her white silk nightgown and sat on one of the garden chairs. She was looking at the starry sky when she suddenly noticed someone behind her. She jumped up in a flash and