Forbidden love

No picking for the last chapter? Am I that bad??? No matter I keep writing because I enjoy it. but also improvements and everything else is welcome.

In the next few days, Alaine rarely came to Valnar, but she was able to look under his eyes. Asgar was on better terms with her. But valnar couldn't bear to see Alaine in someone else's arms. She noticed this and soothed him by secretly giving him a kiss or tender winking eyes.
It was surprising that Asgar had not yet noticed anything about their relationship. But if he found out, he would kill Valnar in cold blood and lock Alaine up and abuse her until she was just as crazy as she ended up in Shannar and worse. The two of them didn't want to imagine it. To get out of there they had to come up with something.

On a fine spring day, a thunderstorm was approaching.
Valnar and Alaine were in the lobby, talking in whispers."Maybe we should flee." said Valnar, lifting her chin with one hand and giving her a quick kiss. Alaine shook her head.
"That would be of no use. Asgar is your creator, he can track you down and will find you. And if I flee with you, the same will happen as if we tell him that we are in love with us we just do? "
She leaned against his strong torso.

Suddenly there was a thunder near the castle and at the same moment Asgar came around the corner.

"Well, Alaine. Have you just been so frightened that you seek protection in Valnar's arms? Aren't my arms good enough for that? He laughed and stretched out his arms."
At first they thought their last hour had struck, but the thunder had saved their lives.
Alaine smiled mildly and immediately ran to Asgar, who still held his arms outstretched.
"I thought you weren't afraid of thunderstorms, darling." said Asgar with a smile."I was just so scared." Alaine stuttered. She hadn't quite gotten over the shock yet. Asgar stroked her red hair tenderly. When Alaine buried her eyes in his shirt, Valnar felt a stab in his heart. He wanted to go to him and tell him why Alaine had been in his arms. But he had to suppress that feeling. On the one hand Valnar knew how strong Asgar was and on the other hand his master could read thoughts.

That same evening Asgar and Alaine took a short stroll around the castle. Asgar tried again and again to kiss her, but just as often Alaine came up with something new to distract him. Si only played this double game because she was afraid for valnar. They sat down on a bench and looked deep into each other's eyes. Asgar gently stroked her cheek and started kissing. This time there was no excuse to stop him. When he kissed her she winced. His hand and kiss were the exact opposite of Valnar.He noticed and looked at her seriously.
"My darling, is there anything you want to tell me?" Alaine pulled him close and whispered in his ear:
“Just that I love you.” But after saying the words, she bit her lip.
"I love you too."

They fell into a long hug. After a few minutes, Alaine couldn't take it anymore. She jumped up and turned around.
"I'm sorry, but I don't feel so good. I'll have a drink and then go to sleep." She left. Asgar looked after her and his eyes darkened. He felt Alaine getting further and further away from his heart. Was she still sad that she was turned down back then? He had already tried everything. Sighing, he got up and walked towards the crypt. There he only found the opened sagr of her. If she wasn't asleep, where was she? He hadn't seen her in the dungeon either, because you had to go through the dungeon to get to the crypt.

He wanted to ask Valnar if he knew where she was when he suddenly heard voices from Valnar's room.He hid and listened.