Injured fire

It was a clear and warm day. The sun distributed its rays fairly, so that every spot offered a pleasant place. Every now and then the wind rocked the grass and the leaves of the trees gently back and forth. Some flowers stood in full splendor in the meadows and gave the bees a rich harvest. The forest, which was shaped by huge trees, began a little away. A group of large thornberry bushes hid a saber-toothed elk cow and her cub, who were resting from a long hike. The little saber-toothed elk moved away from its mother and went on a discovery tour. It met a duck turtle and its young, then a frog, who only croaked at the young and searched its way to a river. Suddenly the calf stopped and stuck its nose far ahead to perceive a charred smell that might not bode well. In a moment the boy began to call for his mother. She immediately ran to rush to help.When she got there, she found that there was no danger until she caught the smell as well. The saber-toothed cow instinctively nudged her cub to run away, which it did. His mother stayed close behind him and so the two ran until they could no longer perceive this fiery smell.

In the place where the calf was exploring, a young man was lying on the ground not far away. His face was marked by a long scar that ran from his left ear almost to his nose. He was lying on his back and appeared to be passed out. His hair was short and the young man wore a long red-brown coat that was decorated with some golden symbols. The arms, face and hands had some injuries. It hadn't been there long.

{That was the first chapter. Criticism and comments are welcome! : P}