Fanfic: Das Feuer in Dir

Translation

Chapter: Decision

So, this is one of my first ff's, I warn you, I haven't had any experience in such matters so far, so if you read this, don't expect too much !.

I know that I don't write too well myself.
So be nice.
I would be really grateful if you would leave me rewievs with a lot of praise, criticism and suggestions for improvement.

If you don't do that, then I can't improve myself so be so nice ^^

so let's go.
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The fire in you

Chapter 1

It was a wonderful and peaceful morning in the little Shinobi village called Konohagakure.
Nothing could spoil this idyllic calm in the well-deserved time of peace.
Every inhabitant of the village was satisfied and happier than ever before, everyone delighted in the peace that lay over the 5 large Shinobi villages since the destruction of Orochimaru and the Akatsuki.
Everyone was in a good mood and enjoyed the bright sunshine that had been shining without interruption for weeks.Everyone but one. That someone was a blond-haired boy who, as he had so often done in his childhood, moved into a large clearing in the nearby Konoha Forest.
In the middle of this clearing, said blond boy sat crouched with his legs drawn up and his arms wrapped protectively around them.
At first glance, it seemed as if he wanted to sleep there, or just to rest, but if you listened to the seemingly peaceful silence, you could clearly hear a quiet sob, which, without a doubt, seemed to emanate from the blonde .
The boy was wearing a long black T-shirt and gray faded shorts.
If you took a closer look, you could see abrasions on the boy's bare legs and arms, long cuts that must have been made by a kunai, and many bruises that apparently ran all over the body of the blonde.
The shirt itself was tattered and dirty, as were his shorts.All in all, the blonde made a poor picture.
Anyone who saw him like that would think it was just a poor child who lived on the street and who had lost his parents to the war and now mourned them.
But they were wrong, it was none other than the blonde chaos ninja number 1 Konohas, Naruto Uzumaki.

Inwardly, the blonde shinobi was getting more and more ready, the indifferent behavior of his "friends" towards him hurt him deeply. His trust in them was now completely gone.

Once again, the villagers had intercepted him on a side street, cornered him, beat him and raped him. As they have done over and over since childhood.
At the memory of it the blond tears welled up again, but he didn't even try to suppress them, nobody would find him here like so, if anyone were looking for him at all.
What an absurd thought.Who would look for him anyway?

the blonde asked himself and looked around when he saw no one he just mumbled softly:
"Hm, I just imagined" and sighed.

In his head he could now hear the harsh laugh of the fox demon.

Immediately the fox cut off the blonde's word (rather thoughts ^^)

the fox whispered in Naruto's head.
Naruto's eyes widened in shock.
After hearing these words from the fox, Naruto lost his mind, he didn't know why, but he believed the fox.

His eyes fell on his bloody arms and legs.

A determined expression came into the blond's eyes.
He clenched his hand into a fist and hit the floor.

Kyuubi did not reply to this nickname anymore. So Naruto got up, his wounds had been healed by Kyuubi in the meantime, and went to his apartment, packed his belongings and just quickly wrote a farewell letter in which he explained everything and apologized.Then he read his gaze again through the now rather empty apartment. His gaze caught on an old photo. You could see 4 people on it. The old team photo of Team 7.
"It will never be the same again," Naruto whispered, walking up to the photo and flipping it face down.
He checked his watch again, just before midnight, perfect time to start a new life.
He put the letter next to the picture, along with his headband and left the apartment, left Konoha.
“We'll see each other again! See you sometime.” You could hear the blond's voice in the wind, until that was gone. Nobody had noticed his disappearance and it was to stay that way for a while. At least until dawn. Even the guards at the gates hadn't paid attention to him.
So Naruto embarked on the new dark path that will lead him into his new life.
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so that was the prologue so far.
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I hope you enjoyed it at least a little. ^^

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