Thanks for these cool comments, I've written again after all.




The space capsule opened and Kira climbed.


She was on a planet that consists only of stones and it was quite dark and you could hardly see anything.


She took a few steps and felt an energy suddenly she got a hard kick. “Who is there what do you want?” No answer.


But suddenly she heard a growl, she flew up and escaped such a ball of energy. She saw a strange figure, she looked like a person with purple skin and he was quite tall. She had the feeling that she was on the planet of her archenemy, because these suits looked like those of Ginyu Force.


> Shit, I could defend myself well, but if I get stronger than 8000 then .........

Later she woke up on a lounger when someone came in "Our ruler is already waiting for you!"

They came in a small hall in the middle there was a throne you couldn't recognize the person sitting on it (because of the shadow). "Do you think I didn't notice that you fled? But don't worry, you will probably come back to your planet!" It hit her right leg. She fell to her knees and sobbed. Put her in a cell.


Sequel follows.....