Translation
Fanfic: SonGoku und Chichi die erste große Liebe?
Chapter: SonGoku and Chichi the first big love?
So the story takes place somewhere that is not that important so Chichi and SonGoku have seen each other first and Chich is 16 and SonGoku is 18.
Chichi still lives in a small house on the outskirts of town with the beef devil her father. Two years ago today, Chich and Songoku met for the first time. Oh god, I'm excited, said Chichi to her grandfather today, Songoku he promised me very firmly. Oh yes, that's right, replied the devil you fell in love with him when you first met 2 years ago, is he actually in love with you too? I don't know that exactly, says Chich 2 years ago I just asked him if he wanted to be my boyfriend and he said yes back then, hopefully he still sees it today because I'm still totally in love with him, he's soooo cute ! replied Chichi when did he want to be here? asked the beef devil oh that will take a while, I'm going out now to get some fresh air I'm so nervous so see you later Chichi said goodbye.She went to the park in the bank and thought: Oh yes sonGoku when I saw you the last time we were still so small and now we are almost grown up hopefully he still likes me oh yes ... After 1 hour Chichi left when she got home again she went straight to her room because she wanted to get ready, because Son Goku could come at any moment. When the doorbell rang, Chichi was just finished, she opened the door and what she saw was speechless, her eyes glittered like 100 stars when she saw who had come Son Goku ....
What do you think of that? should I keep writing or do you rather dislike the story?