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“It's coming towards us. Do you feel the Gohan?” Piccolo looked to the east. "Yes" Goten, Trunks, Vegeta and Goku also showed up soon. "What's this?" Trunks asked, alarmed. "I don't know, I just know that if we can't think of anything, it will kill us all," Piccolo replied calmly. “I'd rather get some magic beans.” Goku said and was gone in the next moment. After 5 minutes he was back with a serious face "Master Quince won't have new beans for 2 months!" he said. "What?!? Then we are as good as lost!" Piccolo gasped, startled. "We still have the Dragonballz!" said Trunks. "Apart from the fact that we have all died before, the Dragonballz will only be active again in 4 months!" said Piccolo again."That means we don't have a single trump card!"


"Well, great! What do we do now?" sighed Goten.




A few minutes later they heard it. The being sat down and slowly moved towards her. "Who are you and what do you want?" asked Goten. "I'm Karoon!" "What do you want here?" "I want to fight you. Right now! Otherwise ..." "What else?" Trunks asked challengingly. "Otherwise I'll kill you first and then the rest of humanity!" replied Karoon calmly. "Well, fight me first!" called Vegeta. But Goku held him back. "I'll fight first!" he said firmly. And then went to Karoon with a decidedly casual approach. “So you want to fight, OK!” Son Goku got into fighting position and looked at his opponent. > It doesn't look particularly strong. Even if you should never rely on the looks of a fighter. His combat strength is 5000. But he can probably increase it ...
In the next moment he knew. Karoon was above, in the air. A blue aura surrounded him and then, as if from that, Goku was hit in the back by an energy beam. Karoon stood behind him. Goku turned around and began to cover the misshapen creature with punches, kicks and small ki attacks. Few of his attacks hit because Karoon always dodged so quickly. Goku tried to transform to SSJ - his attempts were unsuccessful - he could not transform! What kind of being was that? Goku jumped back to avoid the attacks Karoon now made.


He flew high in the air, then let himself fall, flipped, he used the momentary teleportation, all just to avoid Karoon`s attacks. But Karoon was at least as fast as Goku. The unknown opponent was gaining the upper hand more and more. Goku`s strength diminished and Karoon`s blows, of which he only parried a few, rattled on him more and more and faster.One last time the mightiest warrior in the universe gathered energy for a Kame - Hame - Haah. The attack hit Karoon with full force, and a huge cloud of dust and fire surrounded the scene. After a while, a shadow became visible in the dust, which slowly but inexorably moved towards Goku. Goku`s grin was cold as ice and his expression was hard as stone. He wasn't afraid. Which Piccolo couldn't say of himself. He was terrified of this monster, Pan clung to his leg. He would have loved to run away and on the faces of the other Z-Fighters he saw that they felt the same way. While everyone stared spellbound at the fighting, Goku was at the end of his strength.


Again Karoon stood behind him and put him out of action with a targeted blow in the neck. Goku didn't have time to evade or block and he didn't want to. The fight had been decided well before it began.

Karoon stood for a while, apparently undecided whether he should kill his victim or not.


He decided against it and slowly walked towards the others. "Goten, Trunks. Turn into Gotenks! Gohan bring Pan to safety." Piccolo said and everyone did as they were told. “Vegeta.” The Namek now turned to the proud Sajajin. "Do you have an idea?" Vegeta was silent, the wind was pulling his hair and he looked at the monster from the mountain on which they were standing. Gohan had taken Goku with him. Then he said slowly, "No, what about you?" That was the first time Vegeta spoke to him without the slightest trace of mockery or hatred in his voice. Piccolo shook his head.


Gotenks slowly approached Karoon. This time there was only a very faint blue aura around him. Gotenks also did not manage to maintain the SSJ status and so attacked his overpowering opponent. He had even fewer chances than Goku, just when he wanted to use his super ghost kamikaze attack, the blue aura around Karoon`s body flared up again.Immediately Goten and Trunks parted again. "That couldn't have been half an hour." Vegeta said quietly. “It's because of the blue aura, it stops all transformations.” Piccolo thinks. Vegeta had thought the same, but he didn't even want to think that sentence. If he had to fight without SSJ status, he had no chance ...


In the meantime Karoon had knocked Goten down and in the next moment Trunks hit the ground unconscious.


Vegeta drew in a sharp breath. He was desperate, they had no chance.


One more time he tried to avert fate. "Karoon! Give us just one day. Then we'll fight you." Vegeta's voice trembled at these words. He was afraid of Karoon. "Well, well. You have 24 hours. Then you're back here. These two," he pointed to Goten and Trunks. “I'll keep it here as a guarantee.” He grinned coldly and then turned away from the two fighters.





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