The trip to Jusenkjo. (the rest is no longer true)




10) The village




Ranma followed Colonge halfway through the village. "Tell me, can you do something for Akane? She is badly wounded and I think she is in a coma!" A small tear ran down his cheek. “Don't worry, it'll be fine!” She opened the door of a large hut.


In the house, Ranma put shampoo, ryoga, and mousse on blankets on the floor. He gently laid Akane on a bed. He looked at her and didn't notice for the first time how beautiful she was, it looked like she was sleeping but he knew better, she was on the verge of death.


"Ranma! Talk to her !! That helps!" Colonge stood in a room that was filled with thousands of plants. Ranma mumbled words softly in Akane 's ear.


"Hm which one was it? Oh that one!" She reached into a flower pot and pulled out some herb. She rubbed it in her hand and poured some water on it. She went to Ranma who was still leaning over Akane."Ranma, I have something here that could help her !!" - "Honestly ?? Thank you !! You know I'm sorry that I always called you a witch and that!"


- "It's okay, now let's get started !!" She dripped some of the medicine onto Akane 's forehead.


"That's it, stay with her, I'll take care of the others!"


- "Thank you !!" She left the room. Colonge nudged shampoo, she was just exhausted, she was doing just fine. "Shampoo help me with the others !!" - "Yes, grandmother!" She went to get more herbs and bandages. Colonge studied Ryoga's arm. "Hm looks bad! Broken 5 times." She took a few more herbs and rubbed the mass on her arm. “Well, that'll be fine in a week.” The mousse was only very slightly injured and he was able to get up again after an hour. The door to the room in which Ranma was watching Akane was closed. Ranma had her head on Akane's stomach and was sleeping. Colonge doctored everyone else, but no one other than Akane appeared to be seriously injured.The evening came and everyone went to sleep ...


11) A prince at the end


Vegeta landed badly injured on his planet. "Prince Vegeta is back !!"


The king had him brought to him on a stretcher. "Ehm King there is ... a problem!"


"His hand?" - "No that's not it, it's ... eh ... see for yourself."


King Vegeta got up and went to the bier, the servant lifted the blanket.


"What is that? Who did this? My son is a woman? Never !!"


It was decided that Vegeta could never become king, so the king was forced to create another heir. And that son was also called Vegeta.


(This is the Vegeta we know now, so the story does not take place 13 but 33 years before DBZ. Well, that's kind of stupid now, but I couldn't think of anything better.)


Is a little short but it will go on soon !!


So now again to the Ranma / DBZ stuff. Now I probably only write about Ranma, so I want to ask again whether I can write this down here or whether I specifically refer to Ranma.de must register. I mean these are network pages. And I would rather post it here because there are more readers here !!


PS: A friend of mine wrote a story: Cold from DH


Has anyone even read it? If so, then tell me what you think of it !!


Ryo