Translation
Fanfic: muss ich mir noch überlegen ^^``` (B/V)
Chapter: I still have to think about it ^^ `` (B / V)
Hi first!
I've been visiting this page for a long time and regularly read the fan fics that are uploaded here.
Now I'm going to try it myself and start, like many before me, with a little love story from Vegeta and Bulma!
I write the story from Vegeta's point of view, and I don't think I have quite hit the character, because you usually identify yourself very strongly with the main character!
So I can definitely incorporate more aggression!
I ask for constructive criticism and many other comments, that motivates!
So, let's go:
Chapter 1
Breathing heavily, he looked around me. Sweat ran from my forehead, my concentration decreased. The hovering robots circled me like eagles their prey. “Bulma did a good job!” I smiled quietly to myself as I thought of the moment I handed her the broken device that I had destroyed.
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“Did you break one again?” She turned the melted, misshapen thing in her hands with an almost admiring look. "You have to work harder woman! The machine is way too slow, my grandma could easily catch the thing! The strength of the ki-balls leaves a lot to be desired!" With an outward look I looked into her eyes. Bulma replied with the same determination. We had already made it our hobby to outdo each other. You with your robots and your "organ" and I with the strength and pride of a Sajajin prince. Bulma started to grin: "You can be prepared for something! Next time I'll catch you! The further development of my masterpiece will knock you off your feet!" - "Well then, let's see how long this thing can hold out with me this time! "
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I was torn from my mind when I noticed one of the machines building a ki-ball.I was able to avoid it just in time. I felt the exertion gnaw at my strength. My temples began to throb. I tried desperately to calm down, gather strength and regain control over my body. I struggle with the darkness ... "I ... I can't ... give up ... now ... no ... not ... now ......." To my horror, I found that gravity wasn't particularly high. “Damn it, why can't I concentrate today ?!” The gravity space began to spin around me faster and faster. "I mustn't give up! Kokarott ... no, not now ... I have to defeat him!" I felt just as helpless as when Freezer killed my father. I staggered, my headache became more and more unbearable, I sank to my knees.
There was a thud.
Silence ... only the hum of the gravitational space could be heard.
So! That was the first chapter!
I already have ideas for the second chapter!
So see you!
Cu surgeon sute
I've been visiting this page for a long time and regularly read the fan fics that are uploaded here.
Now I'm going to try it myself and start, like many before me, with a little love story from Vegeta and Bulma!
I write the story from Vegeta's point of view, and I don't think I have quite hit the character, because you usually identify yourself very strongly with the main character!
So I can definitely incorporate more aggression!
I ask for constructive criticism and many other comments, that motivates!
So, let's go:
Chapter 1
Breathing heavily, he looked around me. Sweat ran from my forehead, my concentration decreased. The hovering robots circled me like eagles their prey. “Bulma did a good job!” I smiled quietly to myself as I thought of the moment I handed her the broken device that I had destroyed.
~~~~~~~~
“Did you break one again?” She turned the melted, misshapen thing in her hands with an almost admiring look. "You have to work harder woman! The machine is way too slow, my grandma could easily catch the thing! The strength of the ki-balls leaves a lot to be desired!" With an outward look I looked into her eyes. Bulma replied with the same determination. We had already made it our hobby to outdo each other. You with your robots and your "organ" and I with the strength and pride of a Sajajin prince. Bulma started to grin: "You can be prepared for something! Next time I'll catch you! The further development of my masterpiece will knock you off your feet!" - "Well then, let's see how long this thing can hold out with me this time! "
~~~~~~~~
I was torn from my mind when I noticed one of the machines building a ki-ball.I was able to avoid it just in time. I felt the exertion gnaw at my strength. My temples began to throb. I tried desperately to calm down, gather strength and regain control over my body. I struggle with the darkness ... "I ... I can't ... give up ... now ... no ... not ... now ......." To my horror, I found that gravity wasn't particularly high. “Damn it, why can't I concentrate today ?!” The gravity space began to spin around me faster and faster. "I mustn't give up! Kokarott ... no, not now ... I have to defeat him!" I felt just as helpless as when Freezer killed my father. I staggered, my headache became more and more unbearable, I sank to my knees.
There was a thud.
Silence ... only the hum of the gravitational space could be heard.
So! That was the first chapter!
I already have ideas for the second chapter!
So see you!
Cu surgeon sute