I just wanted to let you know that this is my first fanfic.




It's been 3 months since the evil Boo was defeated, Son-Goku wants to go on a trip with his sons, but not on earth.


But near Neu-Namek, the fish are as big as you are. But since everyone was exhausted and needed rest, everyone wanted to come along.


"O.K. then we have to tell the Kaioh-shin that he should teleport us there!" Everyone was very excited, except for Vegeta of course, because it should start in 3 days.




In the Capsule Cooperation: One day after.


“Take the machines with you so that I can train too!” “Hey, what do you think of. We want to relax and not train,” she blackens him. He counters back, "Well, what do you care about what you want. I want to train."


"Just do what you want" sighs Bulma "Not a day goes by without you training. Tomorrow it will start. Pack your things, I will not take the machines with me" she continues.



In Chichie's house: At the same time.


"Hey, Gohan, you've packed everything together. We want to leave tomorrow.


As if from one mouth "jaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh"




The next morning everyone met in front of the Palace of God except Ten-shinhan and Chao-zu, who didn't want to.


"How long does that take?" Complains Vegeta, "this Kaioh should finally come." "Kaioh-shin, his name is Kaioh-shin," Piccolo complains vigorously. You didn't have to wait long for him to come. "It was about time," says Vegeta (typically). "Sorry," the Kaioh-shin sneered.


"Then hold on to everyone!" After they had done that, they were already on the planet Tefra. "Please, take it easy and I'll go away now. Bye." And so the Kaioh-shin said goodbye by teleporting away ....






My story ends here, but soon there will be part 2


I am always ready for comments and suggestions.