Can it be that nobody reads my FFs anymore ?!


At first it went quite well, but now it has mutated




Son-gohan, your father wants to run away! Part 1-5




To a complete failure !!!!!




Is it my story or my writing style?


Please tell me what I'm doing wrong or what I have to change so that my stories can be read again!


I think it's a shame if nobody reads my stories anymore and I have to stop writing because of that. Just because I really enjoy writing, I think it's twice a shame! Perhaps it is also because there is too much Bavarian in it and that most people don't understand it. Please tell me what I can do better!




I hope someone out there answers me !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!








YOU'RE WELCOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!




A desperate one


tichue