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Fanfic: evil kakarott saga 1-5
Chapter: evil kakarott saga 1-5
so n couple of you know the FF maybe already from the forum where my name is gnascher * gg * Please Notice: This is an automatically translated article!
I wanted to make a comparison like the ff here and how in the forum
so please write comments
and now the first 5 chapters of my ff: (p.s. everyone who knows dragonballz knows the first chapter it is the beginning of the sayajin saga with the arrival of radditz but from chapter 2 everything goes completely different)
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the evil kakarott saga
Chapter 1 an alien warrior
It had been 5 years since the fight against Piccolo. Son-Goku now had a son named Son-Gohan. The two were just on their way to Muten-Roshi, as Gohan didn't know any of Goku's friends. That's why Goku wanted to introduce his son to everyone.
on the turtle island all his friends Bulma, Kuririn, Muten-Roshi, Tenhsinhan, Chao-Zu, Oolong, Pool, Lunch and even Yajirobi were waiting for them.
Meanwhile, a strange space capsule had landed near Piccolo's training site. a figure somehow resembling Son-Goku got out and looked around. suddenly his expression darkened and his first words after landing were "Kakarott .... you traitor, they are all still alive". he looked briefly at a device that resembled a windshield "hmm ... Kampfkraft 332 there is something like that here too ... that could be Kakarott".
With these words he took off in the direction of the force that he had located with his "windshield".
but this force was certainly no one called "Kakarott". It was Piccolo who was meditating.
The strange person from the space chapel landed in front of Piccolo. "Who are you and what do you want ??" Piccolo asked, startled, `what a power that radiates ... '. "I don't want anything from you ..." replied the stranger. "You'd only get death" grinned Piccolo. With these words he went on to attack but the strange stranger avoided each of his attacks."Well ... not that bad at all, but too bad for me," said the stranger again. "Now it's my turn" he fired a huge blast of energy at Piccolo, who immediately dismantled it. The stranger was just too strong for him.
"So what kind of strength is there ... ah here combat strength 350 that must be Kakarott it is the strongest force on this planet." And again the strange warrior flew away and simply left the remains of Piccolo. only part of his body was unharmed.
The warrior was now on his way to Turtle Island where he hoped to find a person named Kakarott.
On the Turtle Island, Son-Goku had introduced his son Gohan to his friends and they talked about everything about the past 5 years. Suddenly Son-Goku felt the warrior's strength approach. He stood there rooted to the spot. "Di..the..this power .... that is impossible !! There can be no such thing!"But there was something like that ... because the person to whom the power belonged had landed and he looked around questioningly." Ah there you are Kakarott, "he said to Goku." You resemble our father ... but I have to ask you one thing. Why are the inhabitants of this planet still alive? "" Who the hell are you? "Asked Goku." ... what's the matter with you Kakarott? have you lost the memory? "asked the warrior." Well then I want to help you on your way. I am Raditz, your older brother from the planet Vegeta, and you are Kakarott and you were sent to earth to conquer it because you belong to the strongest warrior people in the universe. the SAYAJIN! "
"Saya-what?" Goku asked, visibly shocked. "You want to be my brother?" "Hmm ... let me ask you something .. Did you get a bump on the head as a little kid?" asked Raditz. "Um, a knock on the head? No, I don't!" returned Goku. "That you are not mistaken Son-Goku ..." now Muten-Roshi had also intervened in what had happened, "Your grandfather Son-Gohan once told me that he had found a child in the mountains, it was very aggressive and Gohan just had trouble with him.Until the day the child fell down a ravine and seriously injured his head. It was as good as dead but his incredible will to live saved it. After this event, the child was transformed. Suddenly it was very friendly and helped everywhere when Gohan had work. "And this child ... that was me?" Asked Goku. "Yes, that was you Son-Goku," Muten-Roshi replied. "
Chapter 2 Kakarott awakens
So Goku was really a Sayajin from the planet Vegeta. What caused horror for everyone, because they now knew that their friend Son-Goku originally had the order to kill all inhabitants of this planet.
"Well, there you have Kakarott" grinned Raditz, "and I think I also know how to restore your memory". "What ... what are you going to do?" asked Goku, startled. "Do you see the pathetic traitor?" Raditz then went on to attack. he was too fast for Son-Goku because he disappeared right in front of everyone's eyes and reappeared shortly afterwards behind Son-Goku.He drew back and gave him an extremely strong blow on the back of the head, causing Son-Goku to slump unconscious. "Hehe, try to wake him up and then send him to me" laughed Raditz and flew away in the direction from which he had come. Son-Goku's friends had recovered in the meantime and all ran to his motionless body. "We have to take him to Master Quince there are magic beans" shouted Tenshinhan. Now Bulma took up the word: "Well, I have a pilot capsule with me. Everyone get on, quickly!" Everyone crowded hectically into the plane and Bulma took off at high speed. Piccolo, whose head remained undamaged when he was defeated by Raditz, had now regenerated and was wondering how he could have a chance against Raditz. `I'm just over ... I don't have a chance against him, but how am I supposed to beat him? I don't have a plan ... the only possibility would be if I team up with Son Goku ... even if that is extremely uncomfortable for me, it is the only possibility
While Piccolo was lost in thought, Bulma and co. at the quince tower. "Master Quince please give Son-Goku a magic bean, otherwise he will die" Kuririn yelled at the little cat. "Um, yes, I know actually I shouldn't give you one because you didn't climb the tower, but because it's an emergency I'll make an exception. Start here!" the little tomcat had tossed Kuririn a bean from a sack full to the brim and Kurirn immediately gave the bean to Son Goku. Goku slowly opened his eyes. But something had changed, there was something cold and evil about his eyes. When Son-Goku got up the next shock came, he had a tail again! "So ... Son ... Goku?" stammered Kuririn who didn't know his friend at all. He didn't say a word, just looked around and suddenly began to grin: "conquer earth ... kill everyone ..." "WAAAS?" Tenshinhan shouted in shock, "that's not Son-Goku ... at least not the one we know" "Yes, I see that too," Muten-Roshi agreed.Goku still had that evil grin on it. he began to speak again: "Why do you call me Son-Goku? My name is Kakarott!" "He actually has his old identity again ..." you could see the shock on the faces of Son-Goku, or rather Kakarotts, ( Clearly recognize former¿) friends.
"I'll start with you guys ..." said Kakarott as he got into fighting position. "You won't have it that easy with us," Tenshihan replied. so did the other fighters, with the exception of Yajirobi. went into fighting stance and the fight on the quince tower began. Everyone beat up like crazy, but totally unfocused, on Kakarott who was therefore able to block each of the attacks.
Meanwhile at Raditz:
`` Very nice, so my brother really got his memory of his assignment back. His strength should now be about as high as mine` he looked quickly at the scouter and then went on in thought `Well, 1100 very good that will be an easy game against the Earthlings`.
back on the quince tower:
Kakarott had meanwhile started to fight more offensively and was clearly superior to the others. Gohan watched the spectacle in disbelief ... "Papa .... this is supposed to be my papa? I don't think so ..... DAD STOP"
And Kakarott actually stopped fighting. "Son ... you want me to stop?" Kakarott asked, but this time not with his evil eye. But shortly afterwards he had his nasty grin again and continued: "I'm a Sayajin, I live to kill. And if my son opposes me then I'll kill the" "You probably won't kill your own son, Son -Goku !! " shouted Kuririn. "SHUT UP" shouted Kakarott and fired an AI beam at Kuririn which immediately pierced the heart. "KURIRIN !!!" Tenshinhan looked shocked at the dead body of his friend, "You killed your best friend, you pig. Now you are on your collar." "You want something to me? 5 years ago I defeated you without any problems .And then I wasn't as strong as now "" You will see what I can do ..... "
Chapter 3 Kakarott versus Piccolo
Tenshinhan went furiously at Kakarott who could still block every blow without any problems. `Damn Son-Goku is just too strong for me, I have to come up with something ... with the Kiku cannon I would have a chance, but I can't use it here. ah got it! `.
Tenshinhan wanted to put his idea into practice and slowly became more defensive. He tried to avoid all of Kakarott's punches, which at his pace seemed almost impossible. But Tenshinhan even managed to partially avoid it. Suddenly he jumped onto the roof of the quince tower and Kakarott naturally followed him. "So now I have you where I wanted you" grinned Tenshinhan. He shaped his hands into a square and concentrated his energy in them. "Now it's your turn" "Oh, that slack Kiku cannon again?"" No, not the Kiku cannon. I have an update of this hehe. Now comes the premiere. NEO-KIKU CANNON "" What? "
It was already too late to dodge, and Tenshinhan's neo-Kiku cannon hit Kakarott in full. But Kakarott was still floating in the air and yawned bored
I wanted to make a comparison like the ff here and how in the forum
so please write comments
and now the first 5 chapters of my ff: (p.s. everyone who knows dragonballz knows the first chapter it is the beginning of the sayajin saga with the arrival of radditz but from chapter 2 everything goes completely different)
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the evil kakarott saga
Chapter 1 an alien warrior
It had been 5 years since the fight against Piccolo. Son-Goku now had a son named Son-Gohan. The two were just on their way to Muten-Roshi, as Gohan didn't know any of Goku's friends. That's why Goku wanted to introduce his son to everyone.
on the turtle island all his friends Bulma, Kuririn, Muten-Roshi, Tenhsinhan, Chao-Zu, Oolong, Pool, Lunch and even Yajirobi were waiting for them.
Meanwhile, a strange space capsule had landed near Piccolo's training site. a figure somehow resembling Son-Goku got out and looked around. suddenly his expression darkened and his first words after landing were "Kakarott .... you traitor, they are all still alive". he looked briefly at a device that resembled a windshield "hmm ... Kampfkraft 332 there is something like that here too ... that could be Kakarott".
With these words he took off in the direction of the force that he had located with his "windshield".
but this force was certainly no one called "Kakarott". It was Piccolo who was meditating.
The strange person from the space chapel landed in front of Piccolo. "Who are you and what do you want ??" Piccolo asked, startled, `what a power that radiates ... '. "I don't want anything from you ..." replied the stranger. "You'd only get death" grinned Piccolo. With these words he went on to attack but the strange stranger avoided each of his attacks."Well ... not that bad at all, but too bad for me," said the stranger again. "Now it's my turn" he fired a huge blast of energy at Piccolo, who immediately dismantled it. The stranger was just too strong for him.
"So what kind of strength is there ... ah here combat strength 350 that must be Kakarott it is the strongest force on this planet." And again the strange warrior flew away and simply left the remains of Piccolo. only part of his body was unharmed.
The warrior was now on his way to Turtle Island where he hoped to find a person named Kakarott.
On the Turtle Island, Son-Goku had introduced his son Gohan to his friends and they talked about everything about the past 5 years. Suddenly Son-Goku felt the warrior's strength approach. He stood there rooted to the spot. "Di..the..this power .... that is impossible !! There can be no such thing!"But there was something like that ... because the person to whom the power belonged had landed and he looked around questioningly." Ah there you are Kakarott, "he said to Goku." You resemble our father ... but I have to ask you one thing. Why are the inhabitants of this planet still alive? "" Who the hell are you? "Asked Goku." ... what's the matter with you Kakarott? have you lost the memory? "asked the warrior." Well then I want to help you on your way. I am Raditz, your older brother from the planet Vegeta, and you are Kakarott and you were sent to earth to conquer it because you belong to the strongest warrior people in the universe. the SAYAJIN! "
"Saya-what?" Goku asked, visibly shocked. "You want to be my brother?" "Hmm ... let me ask you something .. Did you get a bump on the head as a little kid?" asked Raditz. "Um, a knock on the head? No, I don't!" returned Goku. "That you are not mistaken Son-Goku ..." now Muten-Roshi had also intervened in what had happened, "Your grandfather Son-Gohan once told me that he had found a child in the mountains, it was very aggressive and Gohan just had trouble with him.Until the day the child fell down a ravine and seriously injured his head. It was as good as dead but his incredible will to live saved it. After this event, the child was transformed. Suddenly it was very friendly and helped everywhere when Gohan had work. "And this child ... that was me?" Asked Goku. "Yes, that was you Son-Goku," Muten-Roshi replied. "
Chapter 2 Kakarott awakens
So Goku was really a Sayajin from the planet Vegeta. What caused horror for everyone, because they now knew that their friend Son-Goku originally had the order to kill all inhabitants of this planet.
"Well, there you have Kakarott" grinned Raditz, "and I think I also know how to restore your memory". "What ... what are you going to do?" asked Goku, startled. "Do you see the pathetic traitor?" Raditz then went on to attack. he was too fast for Son-Goku because he disappeared right in front of everyone's eyes and reappeared shortly afterwards behind Son-Goku.He drew back and gave him an extremely strong blow on the back of the head, causing Son-Goku to slump unconscious. "Hehe, try to wake him up and then send him to me" laughed Raditz and flew away in the direction from which he had come. Son-Goku's friends had recovered in the meantime and all ran to his motionless body. "We have to take him to Master Quince there are magic beans" shouted Tenshinhan. Now Bulma took up the word: "Well, I have a pilot capsule with me. Everyone get on, quickly!" Everyone crowded hectically into the plane and Bulma took off at high speed. Piccolo, whose head remained undamaged when he was defeated by Raditz, had now regenerated and was wondering how he could have a chance against Raditz. `I'm just over ... I don't have a chance against him, but how am I supposed to beat him? I don't have a plan ... the only possibility would be if I team up with Son Goku ... even if that is extremely uncomfortable for me, it is the only possibility
While Piccolo was lost in thought, Bulma and co. at the quince tower. "Master Quince please give Son-Goku a magic bean, otherwise he will die" Kuririn yelled at the little cat. "Um, yes, I know actually I shouldn't give you one because you didn't climb the tower, but because it's an emergency I'll make an exception. Start here!" the little tomcat had tossed Kuririn a bean from a sack full to the brim and Kurirn immediately gave the bean to Son Goku. Goku slowly opened his eyes. But something had changed, there was something cold and evil about his eyes. When Son-Goku got up the next shock came, he had a tail again! "So ... Son ... Goku?" stammered Kuririn who didn't know his friend at all. He didn't say a word, just looked around and suddenly began to grin: "conquer earth ... kill everyone ..." "WAAAS?" Tenshinhan shouted in shock, "that's not Son-Goku ... at least not the one we know" "Yes, I see that too," Muten-Roshi agreed.Goku still had that evil grin on it. he began to speak again: "Why do you call me Son-Goku? My name is Kakarott!" "He actually has his old identity again ..." you could see the shock on the faces of Son-Goku, or rather Kakarotts, ( Clearly recognize former¿) friends.
"I'll start with you guys ..." said Kakarott as he got into fighting position. "You won't have it that easy with us," Tenshihan replied. so did the other fighters, with the exception of Yajirobi. went into fighting stance and the fight on the quince tower began. Everyone beat up like crazy, but totally unfocused, on Kakarott who was therefore able to block each of the attacks.
Meanwhile at Raditz:
`` Very nice, so my brother really got his memory of his assignment back. His strength should now be about as high as mine` he looked quickly at the scouter and then went on in thought `Well, 1100 very good that will be an easy game against the Earthlings`.
back on the quince tower:
Kakarott had meanwhile started to fight more offensively and was clearly superior to the others. Gohan watched the spectacle in disbelief ... "Papa .... this is supposed to be my papa? I don't think so ..... DAD STOP"
And Kakarott actually stopped fighting. "Son ... you want me to stop?" Kakarott asked, but this time not with his evil eye. But shortly afterwards he had his nasty grin again and continued: "I'm a Sayajin, I live to kill. And if my son opposes me then I'll kill the" "You probably won't kill your own son, Son -Goku !! " shouted Kuririn. "SHUT UP" shouted Kakarott and fired an AI beam at Kuririn which immediately pierced the heart. "KURIRIN !!!" Tenshinhan looked shocked at the dead body of his friend, "You killed your best friend, you pig. Now you are on your collar." "You want something to me? 5 years ago I defeated you without any problems .And then I wasn't as strong as now "" You will see what I can do ..... "
Chapter 3 Kakarott versus Piccolo
Tenshinhan went furiously at Kakarott who could still block every blow without any problems. `Damn Son-Goku is just too strong for me, I have to come up with something ... with the Kiku cannon I would have a chance, but I can't use it here. ah got it! `.
Tenshinhan wanted to put his idea into practice and slowly became more defensive. He tried to avoid all of Kakarott's punches, which at his pace seemed almost impossible. But Tenshinhan even managed to partially avoid it. Suddenly he jumped onto the roof of the quince tower and Kakarott naturally followed him. "So now I have you where I wanted you" grinned Tenshinhan. He shaped his hands into a square and concentrated his energy in them. "Now it's your turn" "Oh, that slack Kiku cannon again?"" No, not the Kiku cannon. I have an update of this hehe. Now comes the premiere. NEO-KIKU CANNON "" What? "
It was already too late to dodge, and Tenshinhan's neo-Kiku cannon hit Kakarott in full. But Kakarott was still floating in the air and yawned bored