Hi, is my first fanfic and also has something to do with ranma abissal, actually more with shampoo. Request for clerks. Criticism is also welcome. Can I at least improve it. Oh yes: Goku belongs to the elite. Plays in the time in the ... wait a minute, it plays in no time at all. Surprise yourself:




Vegeta, who had grown up in the meantime, lay comfortably in his bed and slept. He was twenty-two years old and was going to be crowned today. He slowly woke up and changed. Because he was in a good mood today, he killed everyone he saw. (Understand his morals * shake his head *.) When he finally arrived in the great hall to have breakfast, he felt more than a thousand strong energies. He already suspected what it was and ordered his army of elite warriors to prepare for an attack, but it came too quickly. The owners of these energies were already outside. There were over a thousand women on beautiful white unicorns outlined with light purple.The women were all in armor that showed a lot of skin. They were led by a splendidly mature and beautiful woman who was sitting on a black gypsy horse with purple eyes. She herself had the same eyes. The woman had Polange black hair and three long, broad highlights on each side of her face. The first hang down to her chin, the second a little lower, and the last to her chest. Thin, shimmering purple streaks shone between her smooth, silky hair. Her name was Anexa. This army of women were Amazons. As a sign of this they wear a silver spiral on their right arm and a pentagram on their chest (you shouldn't get that wrong. Not in the middle of the chest, but something above). This allows you to give Anexa energy if necessary, which it then collects in the pentagram and strikes with full force. Not a single "living being" has survived the attack. Most of these women became Amazons because they were humiliated by the men, the others because they just wanted to fight.Anexa has or was given the gift of killing men, however strong they are. It's not always that easy, but still manages to do it in the end. Elite warriors and Amazons have long been enemies. Vegeta in particular hates them. He still thinks that women are only good for cooking, cleaning, washing, serving men, having fun (of course for men. How could it be otherwise?) And having children (* bad eye *). So back to the spectacle:


When the elite warriors finally danced downstairs, Anexa and Vegeta stood across from each other and looked hateful into each other's eyes. Anexa wanted to torture him and get revenge for what he did to her: One day Anexa should get something from the prince for her father. So Bardock gave her the letter so that they would believe her. She had to put on a dress that had a slit on both sides that ended just before her bottom. Plus it had a V-neck that ended under her navel (* g *). To make matters worse, she had to wear makeup.So she just looked irresistible. The princess made her way to the castle. After she got there she had to find the room of the kings. She arrived in front of a huge silver door. There was a guard there. He asked about the invitation and she gave him the letter. He let him through and let her in. When she was inside there was a lot you lock the door. The room was pitch dark and it was impossible to see anything except for the king's chair which was lit from above. Suddenly Anexa felt a hand on her shoulder and a shiver ran down her spine. The lights came on and Anexa had to turn around. She looked straight into the prince's eyes. But who was looking somewhere else. She gave him the letter. Then he gave it back to her. "So you're Bardock's daughter?" He asked, still looking elsewhere. Anexa got shit, she knew something that he didn't know. She shook her head and pointed to "yes". He grinned and said: "You will still be my guest tonight!My guest of honor! Can even sleep in my bed! ", and with a similar grin he pushed her into his room ...




So, done. I meant the first part. If you want there is a sequel. The next part will definitely be longer. Because I made it so short because he's the first. Well then, see you.