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Fanfic: Ein Cyborg rastet aus (Leseprobe/Prolog)
Chapter: A cyborg is freaking out (excerpt / prologue)
Good morning!
am relatively new here, and this is my first ff, than please net too strict judgments, ok? ;-)
But before I start the story, I have to give you some background information, otherwise you might not get the story ^^
So, me, a good friend of mine (no, NOT what you think, you pigs * g *) and another friend have thought about incorporating their own characters into the story of dbz.
each of these charas has arisen according to our ideas. if there are similarities between other ff - characters through ff - stories or the like, please excuse this!
so, to the charas:
1. name: Dektora; race: Saiyan; Appearance: 1. 63 m tall, long black hair, braided into a ponytail when fighting, green eyes; special features: she is son - goku 's little sister; Call name: Came
2. name: 24; "race": cyborg (actually the main character ^^); Appearance: 1. 84 m tall, "human appearance" (you don't immediately see that he is a cybog), short black - brown hair, green eyes; special features: no aura, his battery supplies him with energy for energy attacks and the like ...
time of the story: during the 3 year training period before the arrival of the cyborgs
24 joined the group shortly before the 23rd big tournament, came a little longer, but these are different stories ^^
and don't be surprised about this supposedly "missing" time span of 5 years, you shouldn't forget radditz, nappa and vegeta, namek, freezer and trunks, who also appear in between ^^
so, i think that's what you need in terms of additional knowledge ^^
If something is still missing, I'll share it with the following (if you want my story at all ... ;-))
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Background / prologue: About 370 years ago, during the reign of terror of Piccolo Senior, a man tried to wrest the world from the clutches of the (then) merciful and merciless tyrant. His name was Akira Toriyama (sorry, but I couldn't think of a better name ;-)), an inventor and scientist.Akira Toriyama was brilliant at converting household robots (common at the time), developing them further and adapting them to individual needs. He decided to convert one of his most reliable and robust robots, which he called 24, into a fighter who would hunt down Piccolo Senior. It took all of his creativity and perseverance to create a creature with such immense power, but in the end Toriyama did the incredible: he had created a warrior strong enough to settle accounts with Piccolo Senior.
In order not to use up the power reserves of 24 unnecessarily, Toriyama always kept it in a kind of "cooling capsule". But then a bad accident happened: Akira Toriyama was on her way to a nearby electronics store to get spare parts for 24. But on the way back he was ambushed by demons Piccolo Senior had set loose to terrorize the people.His body was never found ...
In the course of the many hopeless fights that the people waged against Piccolo Senior, it happened that the house in which the "preserved" 24 was located was destroyed and, since the Toriyama laboratory was located in the basement of the house, it was buried .
It was quiet around the grave of 24 for more than 365 years before children playing found the laboratory by chance. Curiously, they played around with the cooling capsule from 24. Press-
You probably pressed the wrong button, because the capsule was beginning to open. The children ran away in fear. The now reactivated 24 rose from the cooling capsule, but there was a problem with its database: Since the generator that supplied the computer and the cooling capsule with energy long ago gave up its ghost, 24 had to do less and less over time Energy are supplied. This resulted in some of his primary roles being deleted from his long-term storage, including the order to kill Piccolo Senior at all costs.
Bulma and her father, the brilliant scientist Dr. Briefs, did not notice this mistake when they fixed it after the fight against Nappa and Vegeta. The files were quickly found in 24's memory, but they were so corrupt that they could not be repaired or deleted. But so far there was no reason to do so, after all, 24 had worked flawlessly to this day.
Until today ...
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so, that's it for now, a little more follows ^^, and if you want me to put the story in here, all you have to do is write * g *
ps: I am of course happy to receive suggestions for improvement, tips or the like ;-)
oh yes, before I forget: it shouldn't be an insult or anything like that, but ...
Please write in your Kommis something more than just "Son shit!", "Carry on!" or similar. I can't forbid it to you, but I would still be happy ... ;-)
am relatively new here, and this is my first ff, than please net too strict judgments, ok? ;-)
But before I start the story, I have to give you some background information, otherwise you might not get the story ^^
So, me, a good friend of mine (no, NOT what you think, you pigs * g *) and another friend have thought about incorporating their own characters into the story of dbz.
each of these charas has arisen according to our ideas. if there are similarities between other ff - characters through ff - stories or the like, please excuse this!
so, to the charas:
1. name: Dektora; race: Saiyan; Appearance: 1. 63 m tall, long black hair, braided into a ponytail when fighting, green eyes; special features: she is son - goku 's little sister; Call name: Came
2. name: 24; "race": cyborg (actually the main character ^^); Appearance: 1. 84 m tall, "human appearance" (you don't immediately see that he is a cybog), short black - brown hair, green eyes; special features: no aura, his battery supplies him with energy for energy attacks and the like ...
time of the story: during the 3 year training period before the arrival of the cyborgs
24 joined the group shortly before the 23rd big tournament, came a little longer, but these are different stories ^^
and don't be surprised about this supposedly "missing" time span of 5 years, you shouldn't forget radditz, nappa and vegeta, namek, freezer and trunks, who also appear in between ^^
so, i think that's what you need in terms of additional knowledge ^^
If something is still missing, I'll share it with the following (if you want my story at all ... ;-))
-----
Background / prologue: About 370 years ago, during the reign of terror of Piccolo Senior, a man tried to wrest the world from the clutches of the (then) merciful and merciless tyrant. His name was Akira Toriyama (sorry, but I couldn't think of a better name ;-)), an inventor and scientist.Akira Toriyama was brilliant at converting household robots (common at the time), developing them further and adapting them to individual needs. He decided to convert one of his most reliable and robust robots, which he called 24, into a fighter who would hunt down Piccolo Senior. It took all of his creativity and perseverance to create a creature with such immense power, but in the end Toriyama did the incredible: he had created a warrior strong enough to settle accounts with Piccolo Senior.
In order not to use up the power reserves of 24 unnecessarily, Toriyama always kept it in a kind of "cooling capsule". But then a bad accident happened: Akira Toriyama was on her way to a nearby electronics store to get spare parts for 24. But on the way back he was ambushed by demons Piccolo Senior had set loose to terrorize the people.His body was never found ...
In the course of the many hopeless fights that the people waged against Piccolo Senior, it happened that the house in which the "preserved" 24 was located was destroyed and, since the Toriyama laboratory was located in the basement of the house, it was buried .
It was quiet around the grave of 24 for more than 365 years before children playing found the laboratory by chance. Curiously, they played around with the cooling capsule from 24. Press-
You probably pressed the wrong button, because the capsule was beginning to open. The children ran away in fear. The now reactivated 24 rose from the cooling capsule, but there was a problem with its database: Since the generator that supplied the computer and the cooling capsule with energy long ago gave up its ghost, 24 had to do less and less over time Energy are supplied. This resulted in some of his primary roles being deleted from his long-term storage, including the order to kill Piccolo Senior at all costs.
Bulma and her father, the brilliant scientist Dr. Briefs, did not notice this mistake when they fixed it after the fight against Nappa and Vegeta. The files were quickly found in 24's memory, but they were so corrupt that they could not be repaired or deleted. But so far there was no reason to do so, after all, 24 had worked flawlessly to this day.
Until today ...
-----
so, that's it for now, a little more follows ^^, and if you want me to put the story in here, all you have to do is write * g *
ps: I am of course happy to receive suggestions for improvement, tips or the like ;-)
oh yes, before I forget: it shouldn't be an insult or anything like that, but ...
Please write in your Kommis something more than just "Son shit!", "Carry on!" or similar. I can't forbid it to you, but I would still be happy ... ;-)