So people! This is my 1st FF! Please don't be too hard on me, okay?



@Dragoongirl: Hello honey! I wrote you a commi under your FF!





Have fun with: FEHLSCHAOS!





A girl was walking down the street. She had golden curls that reached to the thighs, ruby ​​red shining eyes. She wore flared jeans and a backless top in light blue.



"Hey Tokomi! Where are you going?" The addressed turned around and smiled. "I wanted to go to the BeyBlade tournament!> Oh shit! What did I say again <" "What? About this tournament? Oh god! Don't you think that's boring?" Tokomi shook her head sadly. Why couldn't her best friend, Misha, accept that she loved BeyBlades. It was 100% clear that Misha hated BeyBlades. Even Tokomi didn't know why. But before, about 3 months ago, all she wanted was BeyBladen. Something must have happened in the meantime."Do you want to come with me?" Tokomi asked uncertainly. "I never!" answered Misha.

"OK! If you don't want to come with us, we'll see each other when I get back! I'm going to Italy the day after tomorrow! That means we'll see you in 1 ½ weeks. Tomorrow I have no time and I have to get away from them Goodbye guys! "

A little hug and Tokomi disappeared towards the stadium.

Misha looked angrily after her. > The boys !!! She only has these guys on her mind !! The and their BeyBlades !!!


"Hey guys! Sorry for the delay, I was held up!" "Good excuse, Komi!" said one of them with a grin. "Ray! How many times have I said you shouldn't call me Komi!" Tokomi looked at him angrily. "If I counted correctly, it should have been 37 times by now!" grinned Max. "Oh, Tokomi! Don't always take everything so seriously!" said Tyson.

"By the way, where is Kai?" asked Tokomi."He's already gone in! He didn't want to wait for you any longer!" answered Kenny.

Tokomi didn't want to show it, but somehow she was disappointed. She liked Kai. A lot. Maybe she was even in love with him. "Well! We should go in slowly. Otherwise the tournament will start without us!" said Tokomi with a mock smile.

In the stadium:

"About time you came!" Kai grumbled. "I'm sorry, it was my fault!" Tokomi apologized. Kai, who was leaning against any wall as always, just nodded silently.

Suddenly a voice boomed from the speakers.

"Today the Bladebreakers will play against Bloody - Storm! It will be an exciting fight! I can guarantee that! So: The opponents of the first round please go to the tableau!"

"Ok I leave!" said Max and went to the tableau.

The whole fight lasted less than 2 minutes and Max had won.

Ray was supposed to fight the second fight and he too had victory in his pocket.

The 3rd fight:

Tokomi versus Jennifer. > Regardless of whether I win or lose ... we have already won the tournament. But I have to win! For the team and especially for you Kai !!!
"OK! 3… 2… 1… Let it rip!"

Tokomi attacked immediately. "Drastic, Roach Attack!" Tokomi ordered her Bitbeast. Dust whirled up and when it had settled, Jennifer's blade was in the tableau. Disassembled into its individual parts.

"And that's it! The Bladebreakers won the tournament !!!"

Everyone on the team came to Tokomi and cheered her. All but one. Quay. She noticed that, of course, and gave her heart a tremendous pang. Toko smiled sadly and then left the stadium while the others watched her go. She just wanted to be alone now. While she was walking through the streets, she passed a playground. There she sat on the swing. About 5 minutes later, it started to rain, but Tokomi didn't notice.She noticed and felt nothing at all anymore. And that for a very long time. The rain mixed with her tears. Until at last she only felt the cold.

Toko got up and made his way home. Once there, she stood under the warm shower. Then she changed and went to her room to finish packing her suitcase. When she was finally finished packing, she sat down at the computer to chat a bit. But that made her stay again soon. In their favorite chat there were only 2 grandmas in it at this time, who were talking about flower dresses. Tokomi was always amazed that such old "ladies" knew how to use a computer. So she decided to write another letter to her pen pal Laura.



After Tokomi had already torn up 2 drafts, she decided to give up and go to bed.



The next morning, when Tokomi tried to get up, she fell backwards back into bed.She was sick and dizzy. Her mother walked into the room and immediately noticed that something was wrong. She put a thermometer in Tokomi's mouth and waited for this

beeped. "Hm, well Toko, you clearly have the flu. And a fever that is 39.9 ° C. You will probably have to stay at home today!" "When did you come home yesterday?", Tokomi asked softly. "Around midnight! You were already asleep by then! And you should do that now if you want to get well again."

The daughter nodded afterwards, she closed her eyes and was already asleep.

Later the phone rang and a few seconds later her mother came into Tokomi's room on the phone. "It's for you!", She said and pressed the phone into her daughter's hand.

"Hello, this is Tokomi Hiwako!" "Hey, it's Max!" "Hi, how is the training going?" "Pretty bad! But tell me, why didn't you come today?" .Probably because it was raining yesterday! "" Speaking of yesterday! What was the matter with you yesterday? "" ... um ... nothing! Nothing at all! " "If you think! Well, I have to hang up slowly! The others are getting impatient! " "OK! And keep training! I'm sick, but I'll fly to Italy anyway. So we won't see each other for now! "

"I wish you a lot of fun and relax! Bye!" "Ciao!" * Click * Tokomi put the phone on her bedside table and snuggled back into her blanket. For the others:

"How is she?" Kenny asked. "She has the flu! But otherwise she is fine!", Replied Max. "As long as she gets well again, everything is fine!", Said Tyson, who is just a little bit with Ray

fought. * Splash * Tyson had landed in the well and was now

soaking wet. “That means war, Ray!” He grabbed a bucket, filled it with water and poured the contents into Ray's face.So the "little" water fight went on.

"Stop it! Stop it! I give up! I give up!" Tyson who suddenly got a cooling from all sides waved his arms around wildly. The rest of the Bladebreakers who took part in this battle were, like Tyson, completely soaked. Even Kai, who didn't participate at all because it was all too childish for him, got some water. But that didn't bother him.

"I suggest we get changed and then we keep training." suggested Ray. Everyone agreed. Even Kai. So everyone went home.

Around 6:00 p.m. Tokomi was awake again by now. She walked through the five-room apartment in her nightgown. Her mother had already disappeared back to work. > Stupid law firm! Mama is hardly at home anymore! Dad won't be on vacation until tomorrow, which means we'll most likely miss the plane to Italy! <
When she wanted to sit down at the computer, she heard the front door open. She quickly ran into the hallway. What are you doing here Toko? "" Hello Dad! I have the flu, that's why I can't go to training! But tell me, what are you doing here so early? "

Tokomi looked questioningly at her father. "They sent me home earlier! I still have to pack! By the way, where is your mother? Is she working again?" "Yes!" Her father pushed her into her room. "You will go to bed now! Otherwise you will never get well!"

Tokomi went to bed, slightly sad. > How should you be able to fall asleep if you have slept the whole time before! <

Less than 5 minutes later the doorbell rang. Mr. Hiwako (Toko's father) entered her room. "Is for you! Should I let him in?"> Him ??





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H.E.G.D.L. your sweetie Jacky