Translation
Fanfic: Engel+Blut und ein Fluch
Chapter: Angel + blood and a curse
Hi guys! ^^
So thanks to Laura for taking it from me. ^^ Thanx! ^^ And a big compliment to everyone who wrote in front of me. And now I've written part of it myself. ^^ But I don't think it's that good. Hardly pushed the plot forward and it's short on top of that. I hope you still like it a bit and you write me your opinion on it. But now I've gossiped enough. ^^
Let's start:
I couldn't see the man's face. That was not only because it was already quite dark, but even more because he had pulled the hood of his jet-black coat quite strongly over his face. With quick steps he walked towards both of us. I quickly looked over at Talius, who looked just as surprised as I did. Shortly before us he stopped, made a fleeting gesture of greeting and began to speak English to Talius. English of all things. I wanted so much to know what the two of them had to talk about, but I still didn't really understand this language.I could only catch a few scraps of sentences that I could also translate. They seemed to disagree and began to argue aloud under my curious gaze. The only thing I understood was: "Angelique ..... not right ..... village ..... Immortal ..... Talius ..... angry ..... and Naturinus.". Apparently it had something to do with our escape from the village. But I could only guess. When Talius had repeated the same sentence at least 3 times to make his point of view clear to the man, the stranger quickly trudged past him and disappeared in the direction from which we had come. He seemed angry, but I could only guess as he pulled his hood even further over his face. When he had finally disappeared into the black of the night, I looked over at Talius questioningly. When he didn't notice, I asked him about it. "And? What was going on?" "Nothing! Best to forget it!", He waved him off. "Do you think I, the daughter of a pirate, let me shake off so easily?Come on! "I said for fun and smiled. However, he seemed very worried." What's going on? "" He's after us. "" Can you express yourself clearly and distinctly for a change? "" Naturinus got quite angry when he realized that we actually managed to cross the bridge. He won't let that sit on him. He wants to catch us and lock us in the village of the immortals until it is our turn to go to TirNaNog (I do not guarantee correct spelling ..... ^^ °). "" Has the old one still not understood that a girl of the seas cannot be locked up in a village? " "Seems so. But Naturinus is smarter than he looks. He will want to get his way through by all means. He won't let us go that fast. "" If only that is. " "How do you mean? "" I mean it as I say it. ", I said happily." You don't know Naturinus as well as I do ..... "" But I know someone else who might be able to help us get rid of him."I interrupted him in mid-sentence. He looked at me in surprise.
"Don't look like that. As a pirate you get around a lot. Besides, he's an old friend of my mother's" "Ahja ....." was the only thing he got together and looked at me skeptically. "Trust me." I tried to calm him down. "But Naturinus is the most powerful magician I know ..." "You see. There lies the mistake in your consideration: 'THAT YOU KNOW'. I know a better one. Trust me only once." I interrupted him again. "You are good. A pirate says: 'trust me'.", He said and rolled his eyes a little. I had to laugh a little. "Do you have a better idea? Or do you want to go back to the village voluntarily?" "Well ..... it wasn't that bad at all .....", he started jokingly but broke off and grinned as he did saw my gaze. "TALIUS!" I admonished him and looked at him reproachfully. "It's okay, Anlique. You're the boss." "It's better." I grinned and dragged him by the sleeve the further way to the ship.We decided to stay the night in the bay where our ship was moored. When I woke up the next morning, Talius was still in his cabin and I decided to swim a few laps in the bay. So I jumped into the cold, refreshing water with my head fully dressed and enjoyed the fresh, salty morning air. I actually did a couple of laps until I heard a call from the ship. "Angelique? Angelique! Where did you go?" I couldn't help but scare him a little when I suddenly emerged from the water in front of him and splashed him a little. "Tell me Angelique? Isn't that a little too cold for you?" "Nope," I answer happily, splashing the water around me. "It's fun," I said and smiled happily at him. "What in three devil names is 'fun'?" "Don't say you have never had fun with something?" "But ..... what does this word mean?" "Fun is when you enjoy something." "That life in the village of immortals is no fun.Since I've been there, Naturinus has been the village elder. He is bitter and strict. There is no place for fun. "" And I thought it would be bad if you just couldn't get away and be locked up somewhere. But if I really think about it, that would also be the worst thing that could happen to me. " "Why? "" I am a child of the sea. I always did what I wanted and went where I wanted. If somebody locked me up, he would destroy me ..... suffocate my life at the root. I don't let anyone tell me anything! I think you lack that attitude a bit though. " "Oh no. I had exactly the same idea of life before I came to the village (he wasn't born there, was he? I mean he would have come from somewhere else. If it's not true, you can hit me too ~. ~). You do and leave whatever you want. But if you sit too long in this village and every day you get drummed into how terrible the outside world is for you, you will eventually lose faith in this idea.Only when you are here again do you notice how beautiful the world is. ", he said and looked dreamily out to sea. For the first time he smiled really peacefully in my presence and was apparently happy to be here. I looked at him thoughtfully for a while. I think it was only then that I realized how much he must have missed all of this. I had been feeling uncomfortable after several days and weeks. But he had to stay there for years. It had to be terrible. I slowly got out of the water and squeezed my brand new pirate clothes and hair out to make them something Then we loosened the rope that was holding us in the bay and set sail for the island of Poypoy (very imaginative ..... I know .....-. -) the one who lived my mother's old friend, who was sure to help us against Naturinus.
That was it. ^^ As I said, I hope it fit a little and you like it (I still don't like it.-) I chose the next one on purpose and I hope that this time it will do its job. I just have a lot of trust in you and if the part should be very short, just write what you think it could happen. So SuesseLaura. ^^ Make something of it. I rely on you completely. ^^ Whether you conjugate any verbs correctly is completely unimportant. ^^ So please try again. ^^
bye Dreamy-chan =)
So thanks to Laura for taking it from me. ^^ Thanx! ^^ And a big compliment to everyone who wrote in front of me. And now I've written part of it myself. ^^ But I don't think it's that good. Hardly pushed the plot forward and it's short on top of that. I hope you still like it a bit and you write me your opinion on it. But now I've gossiped enough. ^^
Let's start:
I couldn't see the man's face. That was not only because it was already quite dark, but even more because he had pulled the hood of his jet-black coat quite strongly over his face. With quick steps he walked towards both of us. I quickly looked over at Talius, who looked just as surprised as I did. Shortly before us he stopped, made a fleeting gesture of greeting and began to speak English to Talius. English of all things. I wanted so much to know what the two of them had to talk about, but I still didn't really understand this language.I could only catch a few scraps of sentences that I could also translate. They seemed to disagree and began to argue aloud under my curious gaze. The only thing I understood was: "Angelique ..... not right ..... village ..... Immortal ..... Talius ..... angry ..... and Naturinus.". Apparently it had something to do with our escape from the village. But I could only guess. When Talius had repeated the same sentence at least 3 times to make his point of view clear to the man, the stranger quickly trudged past him and disappeared in the direction from which we had come. He seemed angry, but I could only guess as he pulled his hood even further over his face. When he had finally disappeared into the black of the night, I looked over at Talius questioningly. When he didn't notice, I asked him about it. "And? What was going on?" "Nothing! Best to forget it!", He waved him off. "Do you think I, the daughter of a pirate, let me shake off so easily?Come on! "I said for fun and smiled. However, he seemed very worried." What's going on? "" He's after us. "" Can you express yourself clearly and distinctly for a change? "" Naturinus got quite angry when he realized that we actually managed to cross the bridge. He won't let that sit on him. He wants to catch us and lock us in the village of the immortals until it is our turn to go to TirNaNog (I do not guarantee correct spelling ..... ^^ °). "" Has the old one still not understood that a girl of the seas cannot be locked up in a village? " "Seems so. But Naturinus is smarter than he looks. He will want to get his way through by all means. He won't let us go that fast. "" If only that is. " "How do you mean? "" I mean it as I say it. ", I said happily." You don't know Naturinus as well as I do ..... "" But I know someone else who might be able to help us get rid of him."I interrupted him in mid-sentence. He looked at me in surprise.
"Don't look like that. As a pirate you get around a lot. Besides, he's an old friend of my mother's" "Ahja ....." was the only thing he got together and looked at me skeptically. "Trust me." I tried to calm him down. "But Naturinus is the most powerful magician I know ..." "You see. There lies the mistake in your consideration: 'THAT YOU KNOW'. I know a better one. Trust me only once." I interrupted him again. "You are good. A pirate says: 'trust me'.", He said and rolled his eyes a little. I had to laugh a little. "Do you have a better idea? Or do you want to go back to the village voluntarily?" "Well ..... it wasn't that bad at all .....", he started jokingly but broke off and grinned as he did saw my gaze. "TALIUS!" I admonished him and looked at him reproachfully. "It's okay, Anlique. You're the boss." "It's better." I grinned and dragged him by the sleeve the further way to the ship.We decided to stay the night in the bay where our ship was moored. When I woke up the next morning, Talius was still in his cabin and I decided to swim a few laps in the bay. So I jumped into the cold, refreshing water with my head fully dressed and enjoyed the fresh, salty morning air. I actually did a couple of laps until I heard a call from the ship. "Angelique? Angelique! Where did you go?" I couldn't help but scare him a little when I suddenly emerged from the water in front of him and splashed him a little. "Tell me Angelique? Isn't that a little too cold for you?" "Nope," I answer happily, splashing the water around me. "It's fun," I said and smiled happily at him. "What in three devil names is 'fun'?" "Don't say you have never had fun with something?" "But ..... what does this word mean?" "Fun is when you enjoy something." "That life in the village of immortals is no fun.Since I've been there, Naturinus has been the village elder. He is bitter and strict. There is no place for fun. "" And I thought it would be bad if you just couldn't get away and be locked up somewhere. But if I really think about it, that would also be the worst thing that could happen to me. " "Why? "" I am a child of the sea. I always did what I wanted and went where I wanted. If somebody locked me up, he would destroy me ..... suffocate my life at the root. I don't let anyone tell me anything! I think you lack that attitude a bit though. " "Oh no. I had exactly the same idea of life before I came to the village (he wasn't born there, was he? I mean he would have come from somewhere else. If it's not true, you can hit me too ~. ~). You do and leave whatever you want. But if you sit too long in this village and every day you get drummed into how terrible the outside world is for you, you will eventually lose faith in this idea.Only when you are here again do you notice how beautiful the world is. ", he said and looked dreamily out to sea. For the first time he smiled really peacefully in my presence and was apparently happy to be here. I looked at him thoughtfully for a while. I think it was only then that I realized how much he must have missed all of this. I had been feeling uncomfortable after several days and weeks. But he had to stay there for years. It had to be terrible. I slowly got out of the water and squeezed my brand new pirate clothes and hair out to make them something Then we loosened the rope that was holding us in the bay and set sail for the island of Poypoy (very imaginative ..... I know .....-. -) the one who lived my mother's old friend, who was sure to help us against Naturinus.
That was it. ^^ As I said, I hope it fit a little and you like it (I still don't like it.-) I chose the next one on purpose and I hope that this time it will do its job. I just have a lot of trust in you and if the part should be very short, just write what you think it could happen. So SuesseLaura. ^^ Make something of it. I rely on you completely. ^^ Whether you conjugate any verbs correctly is completely unimportant. ^^ So please try again. ^^
bye Dreamy-chan =)