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Fanfic: Traum oder Wirklichkeit? Charakter+Teil1
Chapter: Dream or reality? Character + part1
Hi, I'm new here and this is my first FF. I would look forward to a few Komis and tips on what I can do even better.
Dream or reality?
Character:
Name: Katharina Frank
Nickname: Kat, Kitti
Age: 15
Family:
Stepmother: Jannika Frank (dead)
Stepfather: Günther Frank (dead)
Step brother: Michael Frank (25)
Race: Human (Unknown)
Birthday: 25. 06
Origin: Earth (from another dimension)
Description: she has golden blonde hair up to her knees, blue-green eyes, is 1.65 cm tall. She likes to wear baggy clothes and mostly always dark colors like black or blue. She is mostly a loner. She often builds a wall around herself because she doesn't want anyone to know her feelings. She only shows her feelings to her best friend Tamara. Her parents died when she was 2 years old. She is a very shy, courageous, calm and helpful girl.But she can also be rebellious, cheeky and stubborn. She would do anything for her best friend Tamara. She can't stand it when you annoy people who can't defend themselves. She often messes up with Tamara or they mess with boys. She doesn't get along very well with boys because she just thinks boys are stupid and horny. She goes into karate and is one of the best in her year. In school she is one of the best so it happens that she is called "nerdy" even when she fucks up at school. She is also very often ripped off by her classmates. She never got along with her stepparents (died when she was 10 years old)
Name: Tamara Feldmaier
Nickname: Tammy, (field mouse)
Age: 15
Family:
Mother: Monika
Father: Harald
Sister: Melanie (20)
Brother: Manuel (14)
Race: Human (Unknown)
Birthday: 05/05
Origin: Earth (from another dimension)
Description: she has shoulder-length brown-black hair, brown eyes, is 1.60 cm tall.
She wears tight-fitting dresses that go well together in terms of color. Like her friend Katharina, she is a loner. She is mostly like an open book, she is a real chatterbox and so it sometimes happens that she says something that is actually secret, her friend often gets upset about it and sometimes yells at her. Tamara is a very bright girl, she often messes up with Katharina and sometimes messes with boys. As for the boys, she has a different opinion than Katharina, she thinks boys are great because you can have "fun" with them. Like Katharina, she goes into karate but is not as good as she. At school she is mediocre but thanks to Katharina she also writes good papers. She is the only one who has stood by Katharina from the start and that's how they have become best friends.
Legend:
"talked"
* Thoughts, noises *
((my comments))
~ telepathic ~
***** Another time, or dream
Dream or reality? Part1
Earth:
"Tamara, hurry up, we're still late for school," cried Katharina, like every morning. As is usual with Tamara, she overslept again today. When Tamara was finished, the two girls ran off to get to school on time. They came into the classroom just before the class teacher. In the first lesson they had German, which was mostly used to do the homework that they had forgotten to do the day before. In the middle of the lesson, while the teacher is explaining something, you can hear someone whispering. "Hey Tamara, don't you want to do something with me this afternoon?" Asked Stefan, who is sitting right behind Tamara. Tamara looks back, grimaces and says: "With idiots like you it is certainly not," and sticks out her tongue.Katharina had to laugh softly as a result, which is of course noticed by the teacher. Mr. Kunz: "Katharina what is there to laugh about or do you find my lessons so funny?" "No, Mr. Kunz * laugh * it's just ... * chuff * oh forget it". "If that's so funny, feel free to go outside". With that he points at the door with his finger. Katharina gets up and replies, "But please, Mr. Kunz" before she slams the door behind her and in the hallway can no longer hold out laughing because the teacher looked rather stupidly out of the laundry because of her reply.
DBZ world:
"Hey Goten, how do you like our new classmate?" Trunks asks Goten during class. "Let's talk during the break, I don't want to get into all the trouble like last time", Goten replies.
During the break:
"And Goten tell me how do you like them." "Man Trunks, you can't think of anything else except these chickens that have nothing in their pears."" Yeah, just because you hate girls doesn't mean I don't like them. And besides, not all girls are like you say you are. "" Just tell me a name of a girl who ain't like those chickens. "" Our new classmate, she's standing there all alone without these chickens, as you call them. "" Then go to her, what was her name again ... ah yes Meike right? "" How forgetful are you Goths anyway? I'm definitely going over to her now. I'll see you again later in math. "* This idiot only has these stupid women on his mind. No wonder that he is not so good at school when he always goes out with girls instead of studying * Goten thought to himself. After the break, Trunks, Goten and Meike met in the classroom to get the last lesson over with.
After school:
"Hey Goten wait, I want to introduce you to Meike. Meike this is Goten, Goten this is Meike." "Nice to meet you, Trunks told me about you," greeted Meike Goten."Yes, I'm happy too," and turned to Trunks, "we can go now. Your mother is definitely waiting for us." "Goten go before I want to accompany Meike home." Goten makes his way to the CC while Trunks brings Meike home.
"Hello Bulma, where are you?" Goten called into the CC. "I'm in the Gothenburg kitchen, where's the Trunks?" Bulma called back. Goten enters the kitchen and now speaks at normal volume. "Trunks is bringing Meike home, she is our new classmate," Goten replies to Bulma 's question. "Aha see, can you be so nice and get Vegeta then?" "Vegeta certainly won't listen to me." "He'll eat that anyway." "Okay." Goten makes his way to the GR. Once there, he knocks first. Vegeta, who has noticed that it is Goten, opens the door and snaps at him first: "What do you want here?" "I should get you to eat." Immediately afterwards Goten turns around and walks towards the kitchen.Vegeta stops for a moment, wonders what that was and then makes her way to the kitchen. There the two Sajajins start to eat, just like Sajajins.
A short time later, Trunks comes and sits down with them and eats just like the others. Bulma just watches and keeps wondering how many Sajajins can eat.
So that's it for now, I hope I get one or two Komis with tips or criticism.
Bye mouse
Dream or reality?
Character:
Name: Katharina Frank
Nickname: Kat, Kitti
Age: 15
Family:
Stepmother: Jannika Frank (dead)
Stepfather: Günther Frank (dead)
Step brother: Michael Frank (25)
Race: Human (Unknown)
Birthday: 25. 06
Origin: Earth (from another dimension)
Description: she has golden blonde hair up to her knees, blue-green eyes, is 1.65 cm tall. She likes to wear baggy clothes and mostly always dark colors like black or blue. She is mostly a loner. She often builds a wall around herself because she doesn't want anyone to know her feelings. She only shows her feelings to her best friend Tamara. Her parents died when she was 2 years old. She is a very shy, courageous, calm and helpful girl.But she can also be rebellious, cheeky and stubborn. She would do anything for her best friend Tamara. She can't stand it when you annoy people who can't defend themselves. She often messes up with Tamara or they mess with boys. She doesn't get along very well with boys because she just thinks boys are stupid and horny. She goes into karate and is one of the best in her year. In school she is one of the best so it happens that she is called "nerdy" even when she fucks up at school. She is also very often ripped off by her classmates. She never got along with her stepparents (died when she was 10 years old)
Name: Tamara Feldmaier
Nickname: Tammy, (field mouse)
Age: 15
Family:
Mother: Monika
Father: Harald
Sister: Melanie (20)
Brother: Manuel (14)
Race: Human (Unknown)
Birthday: 05/05
Origin: Earth (from another dimension)
Description: she has shoulder-length brown-black hair, brown eyes, is 1.60 cm tall.
She wears tight-fitting dresses that go well together in terms of color. Like her friend Katharina, she is a loner. She is mostly like an open book, she is a real chatterbox and so it sometimes happens that she says something that is actually secret, her friend often gets upset about it and sometimes yells at her. Tamara is a very bright girl, she often messes up with Katharina and sometimes messes with boys. As for the boys, she has a different opinion than Katharina, she thinks boys are great because you can have "fun" with them. Like Katharina, she goes into karate but is not as good as she. At school she is mediocre but thanks to Katharina she also writes good papers. She is the only one who has stood by Katharina from the start and that's how they have become best friends.
Legend:
"talked"
* Thoughts, noises *
((my comments))
~ telepathic ~
***** Another time, or dream
Dream or reality? Part1
Earth:
"Tamara, hurry up, we're still late for school," cried Katharina, like every morning. As is usual with Tamara, she overslept again today. When Tamara was finished, the two girls ran off to get to school on time. They came into the classroom just before the class teacher. In the first lesson they had German, which was mostly used to do the homework that they had forgotten to do the day before. In the middle of the lesson, while the teacher is explaining something, you can hear someone whispering. "Hey Tamara, don't you want to do something with me this afternoon?" Asked Stefan, who is sitting right behind Tamara. Tamara looks back, grimaces and says: "With idiots like you it is certainly not," and sticks out her tongue.Katharina had to laugh softly as a result, which is of course noticed by the teacher. Mr. Kunz: "Katharina what is there to laugh about or do you find my lessons so funny?" "No, Mr. Kunz * laugh * it's just ... * chuff * oh forget it". "If that's so funny, feel free to go outside". With that he points at the door with his finger. Katharina gets up and replies, "But please, Mr. Kunz" before she slams the door behind her and in the hallway can no longer hold out laughing because the teacher looked rather stupidly out of the laundry because of her reply.
DBZ world:
"Hey Goten, how do you like our new classmate?" Trunks asks Goten during class. "Let's talk during the break, I don't want to get into all the trouble like last time", Goten replies.
During the break:
"And Goten tell me how do you like them." "Man Trunks, you can't think of anything else except these chickens that have nothing in their pears."" Yeah, just because you hate girls doesn't mean I don't like them. And besides, not all girls are like you say you are. "" Just tell me a name of a girl who ain't like those chickens. "" Our new classmate, she's standing there all alone without these chickens, as you call them. "" Then go to her, what was her name again ... ah yes Meike right? "" How forgetful are you Goths anyway? I'm definitely going over to her now. I'll see you again later in math. "* This idiot only has these stupid women on his mind. No wonder that he is not so good at school when he always goes out with girls instead of studying * Goten thought to himself. After the break, Trunks, Goten and Meike met in the classroom to get the last lesson over with.
After school:
"Hey Goten wait, I want to introduce you to Meike. Meike this is Goten, Goten this is Meike." "Nice to meet you, Trunks told me about you," greeted Meike Goten."Yes, I'm happy too," and turned to Trunks, "we can go now. Your mother is definitely waiting for us." "Goten go before I want to accompany Meike home." Goten makes his way to the CC while Trunks brings Meike home.
"Hello Bulma, where are you?" Goten called into the CC. "I'm in the Gothenburg kitchen, where's the Trunks?" Bulma called back. Goten enters the kitchen and now speaks at normal volume. "Trunks is bringing Meike home, she is our new classmate," Goten replies to Bulma 's question. "Aha see, can you be so nice and get Vegeta then?" "Vegeta certainly won't listen to me." "He'll eat that anyway." "Okay." Goten makes his way to the GR. Once there, he knocks first. Vegeta, who has noticed that it is Goten, opens the door and snaps at him first: "What do you want here?" "I should get you to eat." Immediately afterwards Goten turns around and walks towards the kitchen.Vegeta stops for a moment, wonders what that was and then makes her way to the kitchen. There the two Sajajins start to eat, just like Sajajins.
A short time later, Trunks comes and sits down with them and eats just like the others. Bulma just watches and keeps wondering how many Sajajins can eat.
So that's it for now, I hope I get one or two Komis with tips or criticism.
Bye mouse