Translation
Fanfic: Sehnsucht nach Freiheit
Subtitle: Mariks wunsch nach Licht
Chapter: Odeon's and Marik's separation
In this FF, the events after Marik's grave guard ordination have been changed a little so don't be surprised ^^ I wrote this FF out of boredom and wanted to know if it was any good. So far there are 2 chapters and if I get enough commis I might write more ^^
longing for freedom
Chapter 1: Odeons and Marik's Separation
It had been more than a month since Marik received the consecration of the tomb keeper. But even after this long time, his back has still not healed completely, but he couldn’t and didn’t want to wait to finally see the outside world. Knowing that Ishizu and Odeon would forbid him to go outside with his injuries, the 10 year old boy waited until his brother and sister were busy before sneaking away. He knew that he had to hurry because his big brother Odeon looked after him every hour to make sure that he was okay or is still there because he had tried to run away several times since he could walk again without falling over in pain.When Odeon came about 5 minutes ago to check on him, Marik thought that this would be the best time to run away. He loved his sister and his brother very much, but he simply couldn’t and didn’t want to be locked up in a grave and perish there until his death.
"Only a few more meters then I'm free," Marik hoped in the thought that had already sneaked up to the stairs to the outside world. The little one climbed the stairs and opened the door to his freedom. But before he could go all the way up some servants who had just fetched fresh food from the city came back, noticed Marik.
"Master Marik what are you doing ?! You know that you are forbidden to go into the outside world, so what's that?" Said one of the servants in a very strict tone. But before Marik could defend himself another servant grabbed him and dragged him back down towards the burial chamber. "Let go of me! Ouch! You should let go of me" he yelled and tried to fight back, but the diner was stronger.Marik knew what would happen to him. He knew that he would be brought straight to his father and that he would get a huge punishment and a lot of beatings from his father and that was what he was most afraid of.
Fortunately for him, Odeon came, who had been looking for him the whole time, and saved him from this fate: "Odeon! Please help me" cried Marik, "You hurt me!" "What did he do that you dragged him along" he asked the servant who was holding Marik's arm. "Master Marik broke the sacred rules of the Ishtars by daring to come to the surface." Then said this "and now we bring him to Master Ishtar as it should be!" the servant replied and handed Odeon over to the weeping Marik.
Odeon then dragged Marik into his room and closed the door behind him.
"What did you think of just running away and going to the surface ?!Haven't I told you a thousand times that the outside world is taboo and so is Master Ishizu ?! Now I can't help you to escape your father's punishment either! "scolded Odeon." It ... sniffed ... I'm sorry but buhuhu ... I only want to see the outside world once, only once! "whimpered Marik." I know and I can understand you! But you can't just run away from that! In addition, Master Ishizu and I have promised you that you will be able to see the world up there once, "said Odeon gently and stroked Marik's head and banished his back and anointed him, then covered him and wished him a good night's sleep to check on you again "" Yes, ok "answered Marik and fell asleep, then closed the door behind him and went to his adoptive father and prepared for a severe punishment because he gave Marik the chance to run away.
Mr. Ishtar was already boiling with anger when he heard the news and wanted to call for Odeon but he read it when he saw him at the door.Immediately he sent all the servants out and ordered Odeon to come to him with a harsh "Come here". "Master I ..." but he didn't get any further when he got a resounding slap and was knocked down with a stick. "How dare you try to talk yourself out of it ?! Through your fault, Marik has come to the surface and has broken the highest rule of our family." After these words, he hit Odeon again and he slumped to the floor and read the torments (give the word ??) endure yourself. "I will not allow you to continue to be by Marik's side! I will ban you forever. Pack up your things, in an hour you will leave us." Yes, Master, "Odeon gasped sadly.
longing for freedom
Chapter 1: Odeons and Marik's Separation
It had been more than a month since Marik received the consecration of the tomb keeper. But even after this long time, his back has still not healed completely, but he couldn’t and didn’t want to wait to finally see the outside world. Knowing that Ishizu and Odeon would forbid him to go outside with his injuries, the 10 year old boy waited until his brother and sister were busy before sneaking away. He knew that he had to hurry because his big brother Odeon looked after him every hour to make sure that he was okay or is still there because he had tried to run away several times since he could walk again without falling over in pain.When Odeon came about 5 minutes ago to check on him, Marik thought that this would be the best time to run away. He loved his sister and his brother very much, but he simply couldn’t and didn’t want to be locked up in a grave and perish there until his death.
"Only a few more meters then I'm free," Marik hoped in the thought that had already sneaked up to the stairs to the outside world. The little one climbed the stairs and opened the door to his freedom. But before he could go all the way up some servants who had just fetched fresh food from the city came back, noticed Marik.
"Master Marik what are you doing ?! You know that you are forbidden to go into the outside world, so what's that?" Said one of the servants in a very strict tone. But before Marik could defend himself another servant grabbed him and dragged him back down towards the burial chamber. "Let go of me! Ouch! You should let go of me" he yelled and tried to fight back, but the diner was stronger.Marik knew what would happen to him. He knew that he would be brought straight to his father and that he would get a huge punishment and a lot of beatings from his father and that was what he was most afraid of.
Fortunately for him, Odeon came, who had been looking for him the whole time, and saved him from this fate: "Odeon! Please help me" cried Marik, "You hurt me!" "What did he do that you dragged him along" he asked the servant who was holding Marik's arm. "Master Marik broke the sacred rules of the Ishtars by daring to come to the surface." Then said this "and now we bring him to Master Ishtar as it should be!" the servant replied and handed Odeon over to the weeping Marik.
Odeon then dragged Marik into his room and closed the door behind him.
"What did you think of just running away and going to the surface ?!Haven't I told you a thousand times that the outside world is taboo and so is Master Ishizu ?! Now I can't help you to escape your father's punishment either! "scolded Odeon." It ... sniffed ... I'm sorry but buhuhu ... I only want to see the outside world once, only once! "whimpered Marik." I know and I can understand you! But you can't just run away from that! In addition, Master Ishizu and I have promised you that you will be able to see the world up there once, "said Odeon gently and stroked Marik's head and banished his back and anointed him, then covered him and wished him a good night's sleep to check on you again "" Yes, ok "answered Marik and fell asleep, then closed the door behind him and went to his adoptive father and prepared for a severe punishment because he gave Marik the chance to run away.
Mr. Ishtar was already boiling with anger when he heard the news and wanted to call for Odeon but he read it when he saw him at the door.Immediately he sent all the servants out and ordered Odeon to come to him with a harsh "Come here". "Master I ..." but he didn't get any further when he got a resounding slap and was knocked down with a stick. "How dare you try to talk yourself out of it ?! Through your fault, Marik has come to the surface and has broken the highest rule of our family." After these words, he hit Odeon again and he slumped to the floor and read the torments (give the word ??) endure yourself. "I will not allow you to continue to be by Marik's side! I will ban you forever. Pack up your things, in an hour you will leave us." Yes, Master, "Odeon gasped sadly.