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And I'm sorry about the spelling mistakes, I don't care about the spelling.
Chapter 1: The Second Chance

What happened?
Why did you go?
Why did you leave me alone
Why did you just walk away
What did I do that you hurt me like that?
Why did you break my heart
I have confessed my love to you.
You told me you love me
But then one morning you were just gone.
You did not say anything.
You didn't even leave a letter there.
You just left
I've been waiting for you every day.
I've been waiting for you every second
I looked at your picture every free minute
and tears welled up in my eyes.
I howled after you.
Without break.
But I don't want to cry any more after you.
I can not anymore.
I have no more strength for it.
I take a razor blade and put it on my wrist.
I squeeze it and pull it down.Blood flows down my wrists.
I'm getting weak
My eyes go black.
I fall to the ground and a pool of blood forms around me.
I have satisfied my longing for you.
I put an end to my pain.
Now I'm lying on the floor.
Dead.
I don't notice anything anymore.
I don't feel anything anymore.
No pain.
No longing.
My head is empty.
Set my heart free.
You left me alone then.
Now I follow them with every step you take.
Now I'm watching you from the sky.
You are standing by my grave.
Your tears are dripping down on my grave.
You say something that leaves me speechless.
"Sakura why did you do that? I love you after all.
I am so sorry.
I'm so sorry that I left you alone
But now I can't live without you anymore.
I love you Sakura "
More tears run down your cheeks.
I've never seen you like this before.
I thought you hated me
But why do you say that now?Why are you crying?
I can't stand to see you like that.
I want to comfort you.
But it doesn't work.
You're welcome.
Stop it.
Stop crying.
You're welcome.
You pack in your bag and take something out.
A kunai.
What do you want with that?
You put it on your wrist.
No.
What shoud that?
What you up to?
I am shocked.
Blood runs down your wrists.
Tears run down my cheeks.
You mustn't die.
You have to go on living.
You had a goal.
You wanted to rebuild your clan.
Itachi is dead.
If you die, your dream will be broken.
No.
Please do not.
You shall not die.
I have to watch helplessly as you fall on my grave.
More tears run down my cheeks.
Why does nobody do anything?
Somebody has to get help!
But who?
Nobody is here.
I want to come to you.
Help you.
But it doesn't work.
I'm helpless.
I have to watch helplessly as you die.
My love.
I sink to my knees and bury my face in my hands.I cry.
I just can't stop.
Suddenly I feel a hand on my shoulder.
Who is this?
I can't look up.
My heart is broken too much.
I just keep crying and ignore the person.
I'm pulled into the person's arms and they say
"Stop crying. Please. It breaks my heart to see you like that.
I look up startled and see your blacks, eyes filled with tears.
I push you up to me and ask
"Sasuke .... why?
"because I wanted to be with you. I can't stand it without you. I'm so sorry that I left you alone. But now we're finally reunited"
"but your dream. your goal"
"my dream is to be united with you forever"
"But you wanted to rebuild your clan. What will happen to it now? The Uchiha clan no longer exists. Itachi is dead. And you ......"
"I wanted to rebuild my clan. You're right. But I only wanted to rebuild it with a certain person.You are that person, Sakura. I love you and you are more important to me than anything else in the world "
You lift my head and you seal my lips with yours.
It feels so good.
We broke up again and you look at me with a smile.
Your smile is so cute.
So full of warmth.
I smile at you now and say
"I love you too ... Sasuke"
We kiss again.
Suddenly a bright light envelops us.
It gets pleasantly warm around us.
Then we hear a voice that says
"I love you. I never had the chance to get to know true love. But when I look into your hearts I see that you two have found it. You never had the chance to really live together. You were still too young to understand your feelings. You had to leave life so young. That's why I want to give you a second chance "
"how do you mean?" I ask and wait for the answer, which is also given to me after a few minutes"I mean by giving you a second chance. I'll undo your dead and revive you"
"but who are you?"
"my name doesn't matter. But let's put it this way. I'm an angel who can't bring his heart to part such a young and beautiful love as yours. But now it's time for you to come back to life. Live." well. I wish you all the best. I will watch you from up here and protect you from all harm "
"Thank you" I only say before I see black.
I open my eyes and find myself in a wooden box.
Everything around me is dark.
I try to open the box but it doesn't work.
It is too hard.
I slowly panic and start crying.
I hit the walls of the box and yell for help.
I keep screaming your name
Suddenly the lid of the box opens.
Bright light shines on my face and I have to close my eyes.When I open it again I finally see the person who set me free.
The person is you
You lift me out of the box and hug me.
I return the hug.
I'm so happy.
I cry for joy.
"I love you, Sakura. I will take this second chance. I will never leave you alone again. This time I will do everything right"
"I know Sasuke. I love you so much"
I look at the sky with a smile on my face and say
"Thank you. Thank you for this chance. I promise you won't regret it. This time we'll do everything right"

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