So this is my first FF that I upload here ^^
I ask for a review so that I know whether it is worth continuing to write ^^

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>> Zetsu-san what are you doing there? <<, annoys Tobi, as always, fully turned up.
Since he's really curious what he's doing!
>> Tobi don't annoy me! I have to concentrate <<, he said, slightly annoyed.
>> Come on, Zetsu-san, tell me. Tobi is a good boy. Tobi is allowed to know <<.
>> Boy, stop annoying me ........ Get out of the way <<.
>> Oh, but Zetsu-san, Tobi just wants to know what you are doing <<.
[Man Zetsu, if you don't answer right away, you're still sorry].
>> .............. <<
[Just ignore him Zetsu, it won't be that difficult]
>> Zetsu sannnnnnn <<
>> Get out now <<, so he grabbed Tobi by the arms to throw him out.
But he struggled, so that a glass with some strange liquid fell into the kettle where Zetsu was standing all the time.
>> You did very well again, you annoying creature <<.
[Whom does he call creature here? Has he ever looked in the mirror], Tobi got upset in his thoughts.
The liquid that was in the kettle began to boil and eventually it exploded
whole boiler!

>> Itachi, I think Tobi screwed up Zetsu's experiment <<, Kisame said to Itachi. This only answered with a nod.

>> You did a great job again, you nerve-wrench <<
[Has he gotten stronger? ]Zetsu wondered.
>> Uhhh who are you and where is Tobi? <<
>> Uh what? <<
>> Hello! I asked you where Tobi is <<
>> ................. <<
The stranger said nothing, just looked around and slowly walked towards the door.
>> Tell me, do you enjoy ignoring me? Who are you and where is Tobi <<.
The person asked stopped and turned to Zetsu. He was more than annoyed.
>> Mhhh. You probably won't leave me alone before I've told you?
I am Uchiha Madara, the founder of the Uchiha clan, the first to own the MS, the founder of theAkatsuki ...... blablabla <<
>> Uhhhh ok, I got it, I actually just wanted to know who you are and not know everything you did.
Stop did you say Akatsuki founder? <<
>> Uhh yes <<
>> Oh man ......... I'm speechless <<
>> YES ...... beautiful <<
>> But where is Tobi? <<
>> God, stop annoying. Look that's lying there <<
>> Well, then I know! But where are you from <<
>> Oh people can you let them ask? <<
>> No! I want to know now! <<
>> I am the next Uri Geller <<
>> ........... are you kidding me now? <<
>> No <<
>> Tell me the truth now <<
>> NA well, I was in Tobi <<
>> How now? <<
>> Don't act so stupid, you are not otherwise either <<
>> So can you say you've taken possession of your body? <<
>> Jop! You got it <<
>> Isn't he dead now? <<
>> No <<
>> Oh <<
>> Jop! If he's awake, let me know! <<
>> Um. OK. Where are you then <<
>> I can't see the future yet! You will have to look for me! <<

[Oh man Uchiha Madara! It's really cool! OK. First take care of Tobi]

So he was already gone.


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So cape is done. See you next then !!
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