In the meantime it was dark and freezing cold, I had put on my coat and tied it up to the top. The cold didn't really bother me, but I didn't hope to be recognized immediately for what I was. Only a few steps separated me from my goal, I had stopped, in front of me the huge walls that surrounded Sunagakure. Nobody had noticed me until now.
° They don't seem to be particularly vigilant here ° Okay, it was pitch dark and I couldn't hear a sound, but still it would have been easy for me to get into the village unnoticed. But I thought it wouldn't make a good first impression ..
I cleared my throat quietly, but loud enough to draw attention to myself. "Hey, who are you and what do you want?" It came from above the walls.
"I'm Suki and I'm here because I would like to live in Sunagakure for a while", I answered calmly and tried to make my voice sound less sonorous and melodic, I was used to coming to a village and knew it how best to behave so as not to attract the entire attention of the villagers. "Wait a minute", a flap in the gate was opened so that the guard could see me better. "If you want to live here you have to-" he paused as he looked at me more closely. Unfortunately, my coat didn't help for long either, as I found out every time. He hadn't had a chance to help me. My golden hair and golden eyes gave me away instantly.
° why always me..Every man, why can't a man act normally in my presence? ° But I just smiled at him, which only upset him even more.
° Yes, I'm a vampire, God again. ° With a greedy look he looked my body up and down, which I didn't quite understand, after all, because of the coat, not much of me could be seen. He seemed to have completely forgotten that I wasn't just here to let him gaze at me. Again I quietly cleared my throat. Startled, he winced and remembered who or what was standing in front of him. "II don't know if I can let you in, miss," he said nervously. I quickly suppressed an annoyed sigh, the same thing over and over again. "Please just take me to the Kazekage, I won't cause any trouble either," I promised him with a friendly smile, this time so that he couldn't see my sharp teeth. "O-Okay," he stuttered. No man could turn down a wish, one of the few advantages of being a vampire.
The large gate opened slowly and noisily, and immediately the guard appeared behind it.
The man was tall and strongly built, you couldn't see anything of his face because of his headscarf, except his eyes, and these scurried fearfully from one point to the next. He wore the usual Suna vest and had tied a coat to protect himself from the cold.I could clearly see from his posture that he was scared and insecure.
“Please follow me, miss.” With a certain distance, I followed the man through the narrow pass between the high walls that surround Sunagakure. Far above I could see the clear starry sky, the walls were impressive! After a few minutes we entered the village. With a smile on my lips I looked around, it was really nice here, it was dimly lit and hardly anything could be seen, but everything was easy to see for my eyes. Since it was night, the village was deserted, I could only see individual figures scurrying past in the corners and alleys of the streets.
I looked at the security guard, he had been watching me the whole time and even now that I had caught him he couldn't take his eyes off me. "Are we going on?" I asked him quietly. He nodded quickly and stumbled on. Although it was dark and there were so few people around, I could feel the looks that were being thrown at me through the window. ° Is it really that obvious? ° I actually asked myself this question every time, because I was used to those looks too. It was dark and yet people felt the aura that emanated from me and that will probably never change.
A large building came into view in front of us, and we ran straight towards it. The guard walked a little ahead of me and stopped at the entrance. When I got to his place, two more guards stood in our way. One was quite small and very broad, he also wore a headscarf, which was supposed to protect him from the sand, he looked combative and slightly aggressive. The other one was actually exactly the opposite, he was huge and thin, he also wore a full body bandage, at least that was what his outfit looked like, if I’m honest it was quite similar to a mummy
"What's up?" Asked the little one. "She wants to go to the Kazekage", said the guard who had accompanied me, with a nod in my direction. The other two guards looked at me, looked my body up and down ° pigs ° and finally took a step backwards. ° Ohh please! There are three of you, armed from top to bottom, and me? A little girl without a single weapon, I thought to myself.
I just gave them a friendly nod. "I would like to live here in Suna for a while and therefore would like to talk to the Kazekage.", I said with my soft, beguiling voice and a friendly smile again so that they could not see my teeth, that would only make them even more worried . They continued to stare at me, I would have liked to wave to them, but after a few more minutes of silence they nodded and took a step to the side. I followed the guard, who was a few steps ahead of me.
We entered the big building and walked down a long hallway, it was brightly lit and somehow inviting, we didn't meet anyone on the way.The guard stopped in front of a door and knocked. A soft 'yes? 'came from inside and my companion then carefully opened the door. "Sir? You have a visitor.", He bowed and stepped back as a sign that I should enter.



Here is the second chapter I hope you like it, also with regard to the revision and you leave a few commis ((:
Greetings from Kiira-chan