the wolf demon was about to pounce on Kagome again, another young girl walked past the other side of the waterfall and looked astonished at the two figures. The girl seemed to be around 9 years old. She had longer brown hair and wore a red dress.Her big eyes shone with good-naturedness.

That's it for now.
Please write me a couple of commis so that I know if I should continue writing .... 'bussi' fire-angel