Oh, folks, this is the 3rd fanfic in the series! Thank you for the comments that were not written! Have fun with this chapter too! In this fanfic there are 4 new Caras, I'll steal another picture from them) For information:

Ami, 19, long red hair always tied in a braid, always wears wide clothes, big sister of Zorro, ´ll Brutale, is a more powerful form of the dungeon winner and princess of the country, she is very strong and has the four elements fruit seen. Can read minds and has the most powerful magical powers, belongs to the 4Firebirds, always has 11 dogs with him, is very brutal, parents died, lives with grandmother also ´ll brutals, loves the luziel roses (a kind that ll´ Bred brutal things)

Diogenes, 21, shoulder-length red hair with a headband held off his face, has a crush on Ami, also has magical powers, is the son of a dungeon Victorious Prince, is also one of the 4 Firebirds, has seen the fruit of fire, womanizer.Amigus, 21, shoulder-length black hair, is also pounded in Ami, son of Diogenes' best friend and Denethor's father, is one of the 4 Firebirds, has seen the fire fruit, womanizer, also has magical powers.

Denethor, 22, (looks like Anaken Skywalker in Attack the Clone Warriors) is actually the captain, but Ami takes it off often enough, feels responsible for taking care of Ami and plays her father, is also a cook, is the most sensible and strongest the 3 boys, he also ate the 4 element fruit, is also a Firebird.

The 4 Firebirds, Ami, Denethor, Diogenes and Amigus, are very feared and make every pirate and navy ship that is on their way knocked out, are considered invincible.
A bad fight

Vice had just climbed into the crow's nest when he saw two ships approaching at high speed, and the first bullets fired at the two ships that were tied together, "Alarm, we are being attacked!" Direction from which the ships came, which were already getting ready to board, except for Ace and Zorro, who were still sleeping and Sangji, who was being chased by Luffy because he wanted something to eat, but as the two weren't careful, they stumbled and flew there, Luffy landed in the water and Sangji on Zorro.Since Luffy couldn't swim, Ace jumped after him out of reflex.
Fortunately, he was able to swim again because he had then drunk from a medicine that enabled him to swim again and saved Luffy. Zorro, on the other hand, hit Sangji first.
When the other two ships finally boarded, they were all ready to fight, they also managed to defeat the 100 or so men they were attacking, only 2 people troubled them. The two had also eaten some devil fruit. One named "Snake" had eaten from the snake fruit and the other named "Speedy" had eaten from the speed fruit.
The snake ran up to Zorro and bit his arm before Zorro collapsed, he hadn't seen Snake fast enough to avoid it. When the snake wanted to bite Luffy, Ace stood between them and turned his outstretched arms into fire which made the snake shrink back, with this action Ace had saved Luffy's life, the snake yelled: "Let me bite you, let me poison you. He will." then die straight away, that's our job to eliminate straw hat boys and swordsmen. ""But only over my corpse," Ace yelled. Speedy replied, "You can have them," and raced at Ace with two swords stretched out in Ace, and at a mad speed!
Ace struggled to praise all attacks at such a fast speed, so Nico Robin grabbed her arms and clenched Speedy's arms, choked off his breath and held his legs at the same time, Snake wanted to bite into the arms but Ace stabbed one of his swords died fast enough in her neck and snake.
They put the bodies of the two on their ships and burned their ships. Then they carried Zorro downstairs into the boy's room and Chopper was already busy looking in his books for the poison that Zorro had been given, but he didn't think it was maddening.

Zorro's sister

Everyone sat around Zorro and tried desperately to wake him up, they had almost given up when Nico suddenly shouted: "Chopper, look here is something about the favorite poison of the people who have seen the snake fruit."" Juhhu, that's it, I've been looking for it the whole time! I think that he got the poison infused, a person who ate from a devil fruit dies after 3 hours a normal person dies after a day, I just didn't know the antidote! "" Chopper, here it says that you have to drink the tea from the Dungeon Siegies "Luziel roses", they only grow in Dungeon Siege and were once bred by so-called "'ll Brutals"! "Everyone hung their heads down again, suddenly Luffy asked:" You, how does Zorro die? "Then the doctor explained to the Shanks team:" Well, your Zorro, first falls into a state where he can no longer move but still registers everything and then he falls into a deep sleep, sometimes the dream is over, sometimes dreams the person concerned. "" Oh, so! "
Exactly at this moment, Shanks rushed in: "People, quick on deck, the ship of the 4 Firebirds is approaching! We all have to fight as best we can!" Everyone stormed on deck and got ready to fight.Simultaneously on deck of the Ret-Sky-Flower:
"The two ships are in sight, Ami!" "Thank you, Otto! So you know that we won't board these two ships, Diogenes, Denethor, Amigus and I are going on board the two ships, and you dogs stand here!" The team, which consisted of dogs, turned and continued to do their work. Denethor was slightly angry that she had taken over the command again, but after all she was so young and still had to learn a lot. But Diogenes and Amigus asked as if in chorus: "Why did we absolutely have to steer for the two ships and now we are never allowed to board them, are you completely crazy now?" "No, I am not, only one of the two ships is moored my only brother dying and only we can still help him. He's calling me in his mind! Oh, you don't know yet, I met him on the island where we were last and there I have his dungeon for him Victory power reproduced where mind reading and thought transmission are part of it!"" You could have told us beforehand! "" Quiet now, behave normally, we will simply march through her, I have the Luziel rose he needs with me. "" Yes! "
When the four went on board, everyone was already in a fighting stance, Ami had to suppress a smile, they all probably know our reputation. She walked past them without her historical traits showing what she was thinking, whatever the case, without sawing anything. All of Zorro's team wanted to stop them, but the 3 other people stood in front of the team and so released Ami. When it was over all the other 3 went on.
Nami suddenly saw the light: "They want something from Zorro, what if they want to kill him?" "Nami-darling, you are right, of course we will help him immediately!" Sangji whistled and everyone ran the 4 Firebirds to.
In the meantime the Firebirds had arrived at Zorro's, in the boys' room. Ami immediately knelt next to Zorro: "That doesn't look good at all, he's been poisoned for 10 hours, hopefully the antidote will still help!Somebody please get hot water, I have the rose here! "As soon as Sangji heard this, he immediately fetched boiling water and put it on the floor next to Ami:" Here you go, if you can heal our Zorro again, please use as much as you want, oh yes, here is another measuring cup. "" Thanks!"
Ami quickly took the measuring cup and poured 1/2 liter of boiling water into it, then she took a blossom of the rose and threw it into the water, after 10 minutes she fished it out again and said that Zorro had to drink it, but unfortunately he did it wouldn't have enough strength to drink, but you could ...!
She didn't talk any further, but leaned over Zorro and kissed him on the forehead, whereupon Zorro woke up straight away. In disbelief, Zorro eyed the person kneeling next to him, "You came?" "Yes, Zorro, don't talk, drink the tea here, it's the antidote!"
Zorro drank the tea in silence and then lay down again. He just wanted to ask Ami something but Nami asked her a little differently beforehand: "What did you do to him that he woke up again?"" She has just given him a little of her own strength, she will keep him upright for about 30 minutes, then he will sleep again for about 5 hours and then he will be fit again. "replied instead of Amis instead of Denethor, because the other two were too jealous of Zorro to answer, even though they knew that Ami was Zorro's sister.
Finally Zorro came to talk and asked: "Why, why did you follow my call? I didn't think you would do that at all, because ...!" While he was talking, Ami's index finger lay on his mouth and indicated to him to be quiet, "Quiet, you hardly have any strength in you sleep first, I'll explain that to you when you're awake again, we'll wait so long." That was apparently enough for Zorro, since he closed his eyes again, whereupon Ami and the other 3 returned to their ship.
When they were on their ship, Denethor shouted this time, "Dogs, stay by the side of these two ships, I'm cooking something nice in the meantime." "Thank you, Denethor."The other two wanted to know why Ami had just jumped over her shadow and saved Zorro's life. But she just said you should let Denethor explain it to you and went to her training room.
"Well, Denethor you should explain it to us, Ami said you knew." "Well guys, I have a guess. So Zorro is her little brother and the only person from her family, besides her grandmother who is still alive, she took him to sword fighting school after the others were killed so that he wouldn't be killed too. He just grew very dear to her, which is why if he died her heart would break again. What do you think why she? has become so brutal and never shows her feelings? Of course, so that her heart doesn't break again, because she couldn't stand it. "
With this explanation, the other two were satisfied and also withdrew.

That was now the 3rd and 4th part. Please write me what I can do better and everything else.