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Fanfic: irgentwas mit Pharao-.-....
Chapter: Phew, I'm not good at making up the title ^^
Hi
I'm going to bother you again with my weird shit stories. I know I know I can't write I'm totally stupid and ugly too, but I was bored so let's go:
Profiles:
Name: Lillien
Age: 17
Appearance: brown wavy medium length hair, green eyes, feminine figure
Rank: Karuso
Name: Ruha-et
Age: 29
Appearance: light brown hair tied in a braid, muscular, almost black eyes, youthful
Rank: Magus
Name: Sa-à
Age: 26
Appearance: Black hair tied in a braid, muscular, black eyes, angular
Rank: Mercenary
Name: Talef
Age: 19
Appearance: Blonde medium-length hair (only Pharaohs have this hair color), wiry, youthful
Rank: Pharaoh
Name: Manila
Age: 16
Appearance: Black long hair, very thin, blue eyes (rare)
Rank: Pharaohs woman
Just like that: The people who are oppressed by Pharaoh
“I would like to go to bed alone!” Growled Manila.
Talef remained completely calm. "Well! This time I'll let you do it, but you'll spend the next few nights with me!"It was highly unusual that Talef's orders were not obeyed, but he didn't care about Manila because he loved her with all his heart and he could still remember exactly how she first met him.
She had long black hair so black that it already shimmered bluish it fell over her shoulders while she picked up a few gold rings that had fallen down. She was very thin and had sinewy arms, beads of sweat ran down her tanned skin from the heat.
When Talef asked if he could help her, she opened her eyes and backed away and bowed. Talef lifted her chin and looked into her eyes. They were large and almond-shaped and, which was very rare in these latitudes, ice blue.
Manila didn't seem to reciprocate Talef's feelings until today, but that didn't matter. Talef was Pharaoh, he could make everyone submissive, Talef was determined to take Manila as his wife.
The Pharaoh himself was still very young (19) because his parents fell victim to a murder plot by the Karusos.Since then, Odion has been a mixture of father and slave.
"Chrm, Chrm ..... my Pharaoh?" Odion stepped into the hall
"What's happening!?"
"Many of the Karusos can't pay the taxes, how should we proceed?"
"Quite simply .. head off!" Suddenly Manila shot out of the corner.
"WHAT! You can't do that Pharaoh! They can't pay the taxes because they don't have any money!"
"Somehow they always get by, otherwise they'd all run out of heads, right?"
"What can I do to give them time ...?"
"You know that Manila you should take me in your heart"
A threatening silence swept through the room, then Manila looked at him clearly
"But I've already taken you in my heart"
That was a lie, Talef knew that but it was enough for him.
Soon after, Talef and Manila married.
"Oh man I hope this Manila brings the psycho-pharaoh to reason." Lillien cursed and pounded wildly on a stone.
"Psscht, otherwise you can hear you ... Oh!" The worker girl was startled."Don't babble, work!" boomed one of the very uh ... powerful overseers.
Lillien rolled her eyes and leaned provocatively against her tools
"What do you want?"
The worker girl gestured wildly that Lillien should shut up but the girl ignored her because Lillien had always been very rebellious and now she was also thinking of the hated Pharaoh.
"Work without a break yourself, dear supervisor"
She made a ridiculous curtsey and threw her hammer at his feet.
"NOW YOU HAVE GONE TOO FAR!" shouted the overseer.
The bystanders pretended to be working but in reality they listened intently.
"Look what happens to you when you refuse to work!"
Lillien put herself in a defensive position but the overseer was stronger than she thought.
He grabbed her wrist and pulled her towards him, and her stomach made a rather painful encounter with his knee shortly thereafter.
When she doubled over, the guard hit her in the cross with full force.Then she lay on her stomach on the ground and a wave of nausea swept over her, she started to gag, the guard kicked her on the head and pressed her face into the sand.
She couldn't breathe and the sand burned her face. Her eyes went black, she heard a distant voice.
"Genava!"
She felt a warm gust of wind hiss over her body and the weight dropped from her head. Somebody grabbed her by the arm and pulled her up, instantly it became clear again, but unfortunately the nausea came with it. And again she fell on all fours and vomited. Lillien dropped completely to the floor from exhaustion and gasped like a fish being pulled out of the water. Everything did her like. A young man stood in front of her, this time he lifted her in his arms.
"Everything OK?"
She hung her head and nodded slightly. She didn't care, she didn't care that she nearly died or who the man was wearing her or that she probably stank of vomit.sequel follows
So in case someone wants to complain about the oppressed people and Egypt in the story of Bloody Destiny (which I hug). No, I didn't steal asks yourself.
Otherwise I am open to any kind of criticism ^^
I'm going to bother you again with my weird shit stories. I know I know I can't write I'm totally stupid and ugly too, but I was bored so let's go:
Profiles:
Name: Lillien
Age: 17
Appearance: brown wavy medium length hair, green eyes, feminine figure
Rank: Karuso
Name: Ruha-et
Age: 29
Appearance: light brown hair tied in a braid, muscular, almost black eyes, youthful
Rank: Magus
Name: Sa-à
Age: 26
Appearance: Black hair tied in a braid, muscular, black eyes, angular
Rank: Mercenary
Name: Talef
Age: 19
Appearance: Blonde medium-length hair (only Pharaohs have this hair color), wiry, youthful
Rank: Pharaoh
Name: Manila
Age: 16
Appearance: Black long hair, very thin, blue eyes (rare)
Rank: Pharaohs woman
Just like that: The people who are oppressed by Pharaoh
“I would like to go to bed alone!” Growled Manila.
Talef remained completely calm. "Well! This time I'll let you do it, but you'll spend the next few nights with me!"It was highly unusual that Talef's orders were not obeyed, but he didn't care about Manila because he loved her with all his heart and he could still remember exactly how she first met him.
She had long black hair so black that it already shimmered bluish it fell over her shoulders while she picked up a few gold rings that had fallen down. She was very thin and had sinewy arms, beads of sweat ran down her tanned skin from the heat.
When Talef asked if he could help her, she opened her eyes and backed away and bowed. Talef lifted her chin and looked into her eyes. They were large and almond-shaped and, which was very rare in these latitudes, ice blue.
Manila didn't seem to reciprocate Talef's feelings until today, but that didn't matter. Talef was Pharaoh, he could make everyone submissive, Talef was determined to take Manila as his wife.
The Pharaoh himself was still very young (19) because his parents fell victim to a murder plot by the Karusos.Since then, Odion has been a mixture of father and slave.
"Chrm, Chrm ..... my Pharaoh?" Odion stepped into the hall
"What's happening!?"
"Many of the Karusos can't pay the taxes, how should we proceed?"
"Quite simply .. head off!" Suddenly Manila shot out of the corner.
"WHAT! You can't do that Pharaoh! They can't pay the taxes because they don't have any money!"
"Somehow they always get by, otherwise they'd all run out of heads, right?"
"What can I do to give them time ...?"
"You know that Manila you should take me in your heart"
A threatening silence swept through the room, then Manila looked at him clearly
"But I've already taken you in my heart"
That was a lie, Talef knew that but it was enough for him.
Soon after, Talef and Manila married.
"Oh man I hope this Manila brings the psycho-pharaoh to reason." Lillien cursed and pounded wildly on a stone.
"Psscht, otherwise you can hear you ... Oh!" The worker girl was startled."Don't babble, work!" boomed one of the very uh ... powerful overseers.
Lillien rolled her eyes and leaned provocatively against her tools
"What do you want?"
The worker girl gestured wildly that Lillien should shut up but the girl ignored her because Lillien had always been very rebellious and now she was also thinking of the hated Pharaoh.
"Work without a break yourself, dear supervisor"
She made a ridiculous curtsey and threw her hammer at his feet.
"NOW YOU HAVE GONE TOO FAR!" shouted the overseer.
The bystanders pretended to be working but in reality they listened intently.
"Look what happens to you when you refuse to work!"
Lillien put herself in a defensive position but the overseer was stronger than she thought.
He grabbed her wrist and pulled her towards him, and her stomach made a rather painful encounter with his knee shortly thereafter.
When she doubled over, the guard hit her in the cross with full force.Then she lay on her stomach on the ground and a wave of nausea swept over her, she started to gag, the guard kicked her on the head and pressed her face into the sand.
She couldn't breathe and the sand burned her face. Her eyes went black, she heard a distant voice.
"Genava!"
She felt a warm gust of wind hiss over her body and the weight dropped from her head. Somebody grabbed her by the arm and pulled her up, instantly it became clear again, but unfortunately the nausea came with it. And again she fell on all fours and vomited. Lillien dropped completely to the floor from exhaustion and gasped like a fish being pulled out of the water. Everything did her like. A young man stood in front of her, this time he lifted her in his arms.
"Everything OK?"
She hung her head and nodded slightly. She didn't care, she didn't care that she nearly died or who the man was wearing her or that she probably stank of vomit.sequel follows
So in case someone wants to complain about the oppressed people and Egypt in the story of Bloody Destiny (which I hug). No, I didn't steal asks yourself.
Otherwise I am open to any kind of criticism ^^