Hello, this is my first FF and I hope it succeeded. I am writing the first part for now, because it will be a long story and I would like to test your reaction first, so I hope for many comments, including criticism. But please not in such a way that I want to jump off the next bridge immediately afterwards. * g * And let's go!


A little more about the story: It first takes place in our real world and I gave the characters Japanese names, but it takes place in Germany.




Mysterious origins (part 1)




"Quick, she needs ventilation!"


"No reaction doctor ... what should we do?"


"Don't stop! She mustn't die! But she has little chance of survival. She has been without oxygen for far too long."


"Doctor! Still no response!"


"Carry on! Don't stop ...!"


-10 minutes later-


"Mr. Sakamoto, unfortunately we were unable to save your child, but your wife survived.We were able to stop the bleeding and she is on the mend. I am very sorry."


"Why? WHY? What did we do? Our daughter is dead, she is dead ... * sob *" Mr. Sakamoto sat down on one of the folding chairs in the hospital and was shocked.


"You have to be strong now. I know it's difficult, but for the sake of your wife. She needs all your affection now, Mr. Sakamoto. She should wake up from the anesthesia in an hour. We had to do a caesarean section, but the bleeding ran out." Everything's fine. ”The doctor sat down next to him and put an arm around his shoulder. The fate of this family, who was happy just a few minutes ago, took him too. "Why didn't my daughter, Sayuri, survive? What happened, was she too weak or were there complications?", Mr. Sakamoto asked more calmly, trying to sort out all of his confused thoughts. "She was in good shape but the umbilical cord was around her neck and she was threatened with choking, so we did a caesarean."" But any help came too late, surely you want to add that now! "Mr. Sakamoto, irritated, interrupted him.


"Yes, you are right. I would have said that. I'm really sorry. You'd better go to your wife now. I'm sorry." With that, the doctor ended the conversation and let Mr. Sakamoto lead into his wife's room.






They were back home two days later because Ms. Sakamoto's health improved and she could no longer stand it in the women's clinic.


They tried to master the pain and grief over their newly born and immediately dead baby. Nobody knew yet that their child had died immediately after birth. You couldn't have used the pity. Not now.




That night, a spaceship with the Capsule Corporation logo landed in the couple's garden. Two figures got out, which no one noticed. In the dark night you could only tell that one person had a rather bizarre hairstyle and the other was a woman with something in her arms.

While the couple was watching TV, the two people suddenly stood in their living room. Mr. Sakamoto stood up as if struck by lightning, and his wife just let out a short scream at her hand. Before either of them could say anything, however, the tense silence was broken by a scream that came from the bundle in the woman's hands. The woman looked normal, except that she had turquoise hair. But she was very pretty. The man had a strange hairstyle that went straight up and immediately caught the eye of the surprised couple. The strange woman immediately tried to calm the screaming something that turned out to be a little baby.


"You don't have to be afraid, we didn't want to frighten you," the woman broke the spellbound silence. "But who are you and what do you want from us?" Ms. Sakamoto asked with a trembling voice.






So that was my first part.I ask for comments, including criticism, so that I know whether it is worth writing on.