Hi folks, I love FanFics


and always wanted to write my own, which I have now done.


Please please please tell me what you think


and whether I should continue writing it.


have fun ( ? )






As always, Vegeta is training in the CC gravity room


suddenly the door opens and gravity normalizes immediately.


Annoyed, he looks to the door to find out who is disturbing his training.


Trunks is standing in the doorway, he looks very tired.




"What do you want ?"


"Mom said I should get you, she wants to show you something important."


Vegeta thinks - "What can be more important than my training?" -


Vegeta thinks about it for a moment and then says "yes, I'll be right there".


He swings a towel over his shoulders and then leaves the room.


He walks past Trunks who is looking at something with concentration. Vegeta interested


that doesn't continue at the moment, and goes up the stairs where he meets Bulma.



Bulma: "Oh ... who is that man over there? Do I know him? You actually know


when was the last time we saw each other? You're just training ... I miss you. "


Vegeta: "Yeah yeah ... you know I have to train with it ..." Bulma interrupts him,


Bulma: "Yes, of course, of course ... so that you become stronger than Son Goku.


Well ... but that's not why I called you. Take a look at this ...




-Bulma is holding an A4 color printout in her hand- this is a picture of the new Planet Namek.


Vegeta: "Are you kidding me? That's a black picture."


Bulma: "Exactly! The planet is gone. And the inhabitants too. Someone or something


destroyed it, the rubble is still flying around. "


- Vegeta gets a glow in his eyes, he is hoping for a new strong opponent -


Bulma: "Vegeta what do you think of that? Vegeta? Hello?" Vegeta: "What? Um,


Don't know I hope there will be some action again.

Now my training is paying off.


Vegeta grins maliciously and leaves the room-






should I continue writing?


(if there are no comments, I think no)