So, I've finished my ff now. how quickly I publish the story in full is up to you. i can post the entire story here tomorrow, but i want a couple of commis for each part! so, enough talked!








Chapter 3: Far Away




Brolly ran through the ruins of another city. It pained him to see all the corpses, even though he should have been used to it. But here it was an exception. They were his people.


After he set out from earth 2 years ago, he was looking for a new meaning in life, wanted to break free from hatred. Eventually he found a small, green planet that looked a lot like New Namek and Earth. Its name was Vortex, its inhabitants called themselves Vortans. They were slightly inferior to the Saiyajins in strength, but were more human in terms of feelings and thoughts. Their appearance was identical to that of humans, and strangely enough, the language had also been the same.When Brolly arrived, the Vortans were at war with another people who seemed hopeless. In search of new friends, he decided to help the Voraners and single-handedly wiped out the enemy. The Vortans were grateful and offered Brolly to become their new king, because her old one had fallen in the war. He accepted with thanks.


After almost a year and a half, he set off on a diplomatic trip. Now he had returned and found his people dead.


How so ? Who ? How ?


Those were the questions he kept asking himself. He blamed himself for not being there when his help was needed.


But stop ! Who was there ? He looked up, he had felt something cold and dark. Somebody was hovering over the center. Usually nothing unusual, but that aura didn't belong to any Vortan. Brolly rose slowly into the air and flew towards the stranger.


Now he could see it more closely. He was tall, maybe half a head shorter than himself.He was wearing a black coat to match the rest of his clothes. A long, broad sword was strapped across his back. His skin was white as snow, his head was bald. His thoughtful eyes wandered over the extent of the destruction, as if he were looking for something. "Who are you? Answer!" Brolly called to him. Then the stranger's eyes widened. "Got you," he muttered and sent a red beam of energy down to the spot where Brolly had just before felt the aura of a survivor.


Now the stranger turned to Brolly. His face was contorted with anger. "Murderer. The poor soul had no chance. What do you want here?" "You don't care about my name. What I am, you should know yourself, and what I want here can be deduced logically. Think."


“I don't remember seeing anything like you before.” “Okay. I come from the planet Eboron in the southern part of the galaxy. Which, by the way, YOU have completely destroyed. My name is Craven.King of the Eborons. "


Brolly could guess the rest. "And your motivation to wipe out all of my people is revenge? I was your target, not them !! You had no chance! I'll punish you for it !!!" I'm not impressed that someone is floating. "" Neither do I, King Craven! I hereby condemn you for genocide. Your punishment: DEATH !!! "


Brolly transformed into an SSJ2 and took up fighting stance.
















Chapter 4: The Preparations




"Hello, my dear Dende! How are you? Hopefully not lonely up here ..." Dende hugged Seika. "Oh what, I have Mr. Popo. You don't get bored as God that quickly, there is far too much to do for that. What brings you here?"




After the story, Dende asked thoughtfully: "And what do you want from me?"" Two years ago my brother wished that we could all live carefree and without grief. But I have visions again, and they only come when the situation is really serious. What's happening ? "" The only explanation for this is that the Shenlong wish is apparently no longer possible. Your opponent must be really dangerous if that is the case! "


Seika got up from the table. "It's starting again ... I thought we'd finally have some rest. --- --- But if I have to, I'll do what is necessary. Dende, please call all Z-warriors together and do them Source of evil, if you can, I believe we will need all the help.




An hour later they were all gathered in front of the palace. Even Yamcha and Krillin had come. "Hey guys, I don't know what's going on, but if I don't get home alive, you don't have to wish me alive again," Krillin said."I think my wife would kill me again for my irresponsibility ... So what's wrong ?!" "We're allowed to save a planet again, it looks like," said Trunks. "Ooooooch, if that's all ... I already know that," joked Krillin.


Vegeta had reacted to the disturbance not angry, but pleased. "I haven't fought a real opponent for far too long!" "Aren't you a little too old for that?" asked Goten. He never forgot the look he got from Vegeta in his life.


Seika soon got tired of telling her story, but everyone needed to know. Those who knew Brolly had their jaws dropping to their feet, especially Vegeta! "Great! Now we also have a madman in our circle of friends!" Krillin whispered to Vegeta, who still hadn't quite collected himself.


Seika spoke briefly to Dende, then turned back to the others and said:

"Dende has identified our destination. It's a small planet in the western galaxy called Vortex. Everyone touch me now so I can use the TT. Then we should be there any moment." Everyone did as they were told, and just a few seconds later, the group was standing on Vortex in a thunderstorm. The sky was black with clouds, and lightning flashed violently across the scene at one point.


Seika admonished the others: "If you see Brolly, don't attack him! He's no longer an enemy." She turned to Vegeta. “This is especially true for you!” He grumbled something and then followed the others.


They had just arrived at a ruin when Piccolo stopped them. "There's someone here! Keep your eyes open, he's not far ... And he's strong!" Piccolo had barely finished his sentence when a young woman stood in front of them. Her short hair stood on end and blue lightning flashed around her. "Not a step further! What are you doing here?"





so, that was part 2. As I said, you decide how quickly the remaining parts come out. come, come, come!