Ok, that's my first FF so please complain so that I make an effort, but I would also be happy about a little praise. So I WANT COMMENTS !!!!!!!!! But go now! She sat on the windowsill and looked out the window. The door opened with a soft squeak and for a wonderful moment she thought it was her little sister, but it was just her aunt's cat. Ever since her sister, mother, and father died last month, the world had seemed so bleak and the weather suited it. Since she couldn't think of anything to do anyway, she went for a walk in spite of the rain.


First she was walking through the city and when she was on the beach she started walking as if her worries couldn't reach her like that. When she was back at her aunt's, she realized that she had lost her key.And her aunt wouldn't be home for several hours. Suddenly she heard hasty footsteps on the stairs. A boy of maybe seventeen came up the stairs. He had shoulder-length light purple hair that was pulled back in a ponytail. He wore a short blue jacket and, to Kiara's surprise, had a sword on his back. He grinned at her and said she lost her key and he found it. She replied that she had already noticed that otherwise she wouldn't be sitting in front of the door. Irritated, she took the key, mumbled something that should be a thank you, unlocked the door, went in and when he wanted to follow her, she slammed the door in front of him. “Are you Kiara?” Came a bright voice to her ear. Surprised and startled, she spun around. Then she saw a small creature floating in the air. She couldn't see much because the creature was surrounded by a red light, and the red light made the creature look like an oversized firefly."who are you ?" she asked the little creature. “I, said the creature, am Lilly!” And with these words the glow went out and a small female figure appeared.


The delicate body was dressed in green-brown trousers and a forest-colored top. The long red hair was braided into two pigtails and each of the pointed ears was


Because a round black earring was attached and there was such a stone on the forehead, although it looked quite solid. But most noticeable was the fact that the creature had red angel wings and a halo over its head. Lilly eyed her briefly, then she asked: “You are no longer thirteen, are you?” Kiara, who had still not fully recovered from her horror and was still staring at the halo, could only shake her head in silence. No, she wasn't thirteen in a long time, she had just turned sixteen. In her mind she remembered her birthday again

the candles, the presents, but just before she could cry at the thought of her family, she heard Lilly hissing at her at what she was staring at. When Lilly noticed that she still had the halo over her head, she cursed that it was unbearable. At first the Heilligenschein shone in a slight red shimmer, which quickly turned a deep red until finally the Heilligenschin disappeared with a soft "plup". She then went on to explain that an endangered angel would need something like that in order to be allowed to come to earth. "God did allow me to go to earth and with it into his world, but he is a little annoyed because I did not find everything in three lives. That is why he refused to tell me where you were born and where I had to search myself, since the earth is quite big, it takes a while to find you, but I still think it's mean that I talked to God for three hours without success."Kiara only understood what was being said." What do I have to do with you, God and the three lives? "Kiara wanted to know, still trying hard to imagine Lilly talking to God." You are mine Elf or me your elven-fairy mix. "Said Lilly as a matter of course. Something that should sound familiar to you. I know the guy looks like TRunks and if I don't have a new enlightenment soon he has to be called that too! * Sighs * so I'll keep writing if you want I already have the Storry on my PC. * gg *