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Fanfic: Die letzte
Chapter: The last
The last
Hello! This is my first fanfic and I ask you not to comment too harshly. It is based on the Boo saga. And here we go!
The last
Normal everyday life?
After Boo's reign of terror over Earth, everything in Group Z seems to be fine again. Chichi cooks food as usual, Goku trains, Gohan reads, Videl cleans the house, C18, Culilin and her daughter Marron go shopping, Piccolo meditates in Dendes Palace, Vegeta trains in the gravity room, Bulma works on a machine, Goten spends the night at Trunks[They're doing a lot of nonsense, of course]and Pan is staying at Bra's.
Suddenly everyone started up and felt a dark energy. Everyone was on the way to the starting point of this alien energy.
Gohan left his books on the left, C18 and Culilin took off without dropping Marron anywhere. Of course, Goten and Trunks also felt the energy, and they wanted to fly off too, but then the door opened and Bra and Pan came in and said in unison: "We want to come too!"" That's way too dangerous for you ... "Trunks wanted to explain, but Bra chattered on:" It's much more dangerous to leave two small children alone at home than to take them with you where there are so many bodyguards. "[Which is not true, because there are still tons of workers in the Capsule Corp. Plus, Mrs. and Dr. Briefs are still there.]" All right! ", Trunks admitted defeat, took his little sister in his arms and then they flew off. (Pan can already fly) When they arrived everyone was happy to see us again.[Except Vegeta. He's never happy!]" Where does he come from just this energy? ", Goku wondered. Then suddenly a black figure came up to them. They suddenly felt as if they were being swallowed up by the darkness, even though there was sunshine around them. They could no longer think clearly than Suddenly a flash of light struck the creature. Shortly afterwards the figure disappeared. They slowly recovered and Goku could see the outline of a girl about eleven years of age."You'd better be careful," said the girl. Then she was gone. "Did any of you see anything more than the outline of this girl?" Asked Piccolo. "No!" Replied C18. "Who was that?" Goku wondered. "We should be training again. If we can't even deal with such a black jumping jack!" Said Vegeta. "Yes!" Goku agreed.
The new classmate
The next day nobody really wanted to do anything anymore. They were all in thought. But Trunks had to go to school. He asked his mother if he could take sick leave, but Bulma never allowed that! ("Tss! Skipping school because of thoughts! As far as it comes!) To Trunks astonishment, Goten was just like every morning., Trunks thought.
At school:
"Children, we have a new classmate from today. She comes from Greece and is called Erena Serigu or: Elena. Please take her on nicely.You can come in! "Said the teacher. A pretty young girl came out. She was about eleven years old.[In my story, high school students of different ages go to one class.]. She was dressed in black checkered trousers and a wine-red sweater on which gold patterns were embroidered on the sleeves and on the gold metal plate a star shaped. She had brown hair with a few blonde highlights that reached a little over her shoulders, on the right side of the hair she had a ponytail and on the left one Crystalline clasps in her hair so that the pony hair did not fall into her eyes. Many boys stared dreamily at her, such as Goten. "You best sit between Trunks and Goten. Otherwise they will disturb the class again. "said the teacher. Elena started to giggle. Trunks blushed like a ripe tomato.
"How do you know?" Trunks asked. "Let's put it that way!", She said, and pointed with one finger at a poster on the class door. There were all the members of the Capsule Corp. On it. Trunks thought. "Um ... Don't you want to come to me this afternoon? I could show you the Capsule Corp.", Trunks said, confident of victory. Most of the time, when he said this to a girl, they fainted. But her expression hadn't changed. "Thank you so much, Trunks! I really want to see Capsule Corp.! But I don't have time! Sorry!", She said. That hit Trunks like a slap in the face. Never before had a girl turned down an offer like this.Most likely would have skipped a conversation with the king. And you?
On the way home:
"Got a basket, huh?" Said Goten, grinning maliciously. "She hasn't been here that long, she doesn't really know you yet."
Capsule Corp.
"I'm not hungry!" Says Trunks to his mother. "What's the matter with you?" Asked Bulma worried. "Oh, we've got a new classmate from Greece. Her name is Elena. I invited her to the Capsule Corp., but she had other plans.", Trunks explained dejectedly. Suddenly he heard a sneering laugh. "Ohh! The womanizer got a basket!" Vegeta stood in the doorway, grinning maliciously. Bra came out from behind him and immediately sang: "Trunks got a basket! Trunks got a basket!"[Sounds like a little child]"Stop it right away! Everyone gets a basket! It's completely normal!" , Bulma tried to defend her son. But suddenly he winced. "Father!Do you feel that energy from yesterday again? "Trunks asked." Yes! Let's go to the starting point. "said Vegeta.
When they arrived the others were already there.
"Shark!" Said Trunks.
"Hello!" Said Gohan.
Suddenly this dark figure appeared again. "Hey, Vegeta! There's your black jumping jack again!" Said Piccolo. But this time the black fine art ... um ... I mean the dark figure to speak.
She said: "First I will petrify you and then I will use my killer trick. Let's petrify!"
There was that flash of light again! The fine art ... um ... the creature disappears too! , Goku thought. Goten and Trunks kept their mouths open when they saw them! She was about 11 years. She was wearing black-green sweatpants and a black-tinted striped T-shirt. She had hair a little longer than shoulder length. Her hair was brown with blonde highlights inside.She had a small braid on the right side of her hair. In the left she had stuck a crystal bobby pin. Trunks and Goten shouted from one mouth: "Elena!"
How will it go on? What does that have to do with these dark figures, and above all ... what does that have to do with Elena? How could she defeat the dark figure? Question after question. But at some point you will have answered all of your questions!
TO BE CONTINUED
I would really appreciate your comments! If you want, I'll also write a 2nd part! Elena tells where she comes from, what she has to do, etc. By the way, I am also very happy to accept criticism! I have to know what is wrong with my story, and then maybe I can write a better 2nd part! So! As I said! I look forward to your comments!
Hello! This is my first fanfic and I ask you not to comment too harshly. It is based on the Boo saga. And here we go!
The last
Normal everyday life?
After Boo's reign of terror over Earth, everything in Group Z seems to be fine again. Chichi cooks food as usual, Goku trains, Gohan reads, Videl cleans the house, C18, Culilin and her daughter Marron go shopping, Piccolo meditates in Dendes Palace, Vegeta trains in the gravity room, Bulma works on a machine, Goten spends the night at Trunks[They're doing a lot of nonsense, of course]and Pan is staying at Bra's.
Suddenly everyone started up and felt a dark energy. Everyone was on the way to the starting point of this alien energy.
Gohan left his books on the left, C18 and Culilin took off without dropping Marron anywhere. Of course, Goten and Trunks also felt the energy, and they wanted to fly off too, but then the door opened and Bra and Pan came in and said in unison: "We want to come too!"" That's way too dangerous for you ... "Trunks wanted to explain, but Bra chattered on:" It's much more dangerous to leave two small children alone at home than to take them with you where there are so many bodyguards. "[Which is not true, because there are still tons of workers in the Capsule Corp. Plus, Mrs. and Dr. Briefs are still there.]" All right! ", Trunks admitted defeat, took his little sister in his arms and then they flew off. (Pan can already fly) When they arrived everyone was happy to see us again.[Except Vegeta. He's never happy!]" Where does he come from just this energy? ", Goku wondered. Then suddenly a black figure came up to them. They suddenly felt as if they were being swallowed up by the darkness, even though there was sunshine around them. They could no longer think clearly than Suddenly a flash of light struck the creature. Shortly afterwards the figure disappeared. They slowly recovered and Goku could see the outline of a girl about eleven years of age."You'd better be careful," said the girl. Then she was gone. "Did any of you see anything more than the outline of this girl?" Asked Piccolo. "No!" Replied C18. "Who was that?" Goku wondered. "We should be training again. If we can't even deal with such a black jumping jack!" Said Vegeta. "Yes!" Goku agreed.
The new classmate
The next day nobody really wanted to do anything anymore. They were all in thought. But Trunks had to go to school. He asked his mother if he could take sick leave, but Bulma never allowed that! ("Tss! Skipping school because of thoughts! As far as it comes!) To Trunks astonishment, Goten was just like every morning.
At school:
"Children, we have a new classmate from today. She comes from Greece and is called Erena Serigu or: Elena. Please take her on nicely.You can come in! "Said the teacher. A pretty young girl came out. She was about eleven years old.[In my story, high school students of different ages go to one class.]. She was dressed in black checkered trousers and a wine-red sweater on which gold patterns were embroidered on the sleeves and on the gold metal plate a star shaped. She had brown hair with a few blonde highlights that reached a little over her shoulders, on the right side of the hair she had a ponytail and on the left one Crystalline clasps in her hair so that the pony hair did not fall into her eyes. Many boys stared dreamily at her, such as Goten. "You best sit between Trunks and Goten. Otherwise they will disturb the class again. "said the teacher. Elena started to giggle. Trunks blushed like a ripe tomato.
"How do you know?" Trunks asked. "Let's put it that way!", She said, and pointed with one finger at a poster on the class door. There were all the members of the Capsule Corp. On it.
On the way home:
"Got a basket, huh?" Said Goten, grinning maliciously. "She hasn't been here that long, she doesn't really know you yet."
Capsule Corp.
"I'm not hungry!" Says Trunks to his mother. "What's the matter with you?" Asked Bulma worried. "Oh, we've got a new classmate from Greece. Her name is Elena. I invited her to the Capsule Corp., but she had other plans.", Trunks explained dejectedly. Suddenly he heard a sneering laugh. "Ohh! The womanizer got a basket!" Vegeta stood in the doorway, grinning maliciously. Bra came out from behind him and immediately sang: "Trunks got a basket! Trunks got a basket!"[Sounds like a little child]"Stop it right away! Everyone gets a basket! It's completely normal!" , Bulma tried to defend her son. But suddenly he winced. "Father!Do you feel that energy from yesterday again? "Trunks asked." Yes! Let's go to the starting point. "said Vegeta.
When they arrived the others were already there.
"Shark!" Said Trunks.
"Hello!" Said Gohan.
Suddenly this dark figure appeared again. "Hey, Vegeta! There's your black jumping jack again!" Said Piccolo. But this time the black fine art ... um ... I mean the dark figure to speak.
She said: "First I will petrify you and then I will use my killer trick. Let's petrify!"
There was that flash of light again! The fine art ... um ... the creature disappears too! , Goku thought. Goten and Trunks kept their mouths open when they saw them! She was about 11 years. She was wearing black-green sweatpants and a black-tinted striped T-shirt. She had hair a little longer than shoulder length. Her hair was brown with blonde highlights inside.She had a small braid on the right side of her hair. In the left she had stuck a crystal bobby pin. Trunks and Goten shouted from one mouth: "Elena!"
How will it go on? What does that have to do with these dark figures, and above all ... what does that have to do with Elena? How could she defeat the dark figure? Question after question. But at some point you will have answered all of your questions!
TO BE CONTINUED
I would really appreciate your comments! If you want, I'll also write a 2nd part! Elena tells where she comes from, what she has to do, etc. By the way, I am also very happy to accept criticism! I have to know what is wrong with my story, and then maybe I can write a better 2nd part! So! As I said! I look forward to your comments!