Hello @ all!


Here I am!


Today (May 11th, 2002) I wrote a poem for Mother's Day for my mother and I didn't want to withhold it from you. I don't know if I'm good at writing poetry, but you can let me know in your comments. ^^


I would really appreciate your comments !!!!!!!!!






Dear mum




For your mother's day you want me to write a poem


I sit here and think


But I wonder from which point of view


I will leave you to write.




Should it be about wishes, dreams, requests?


There is so much I could write to you.


I think about it, but don't want to change it


There's only one thing I really want




satisfaction




Satisfaction with what i'm doing to you


You should be proud of me


And that I laugh again for you


And no matter how small what I do.



I want to improve


But that doesn't happen overnight


And no longer gossip about you


I'm sure I still give you a lot of worry.




You wanted a poem


But is that even one?


It was written from my point of view


Maybe it's not after all.




I did not write you any wishes, dreams, requests


It is an extraordinary poem


Such are my customs


I write what I think and do it from my point of view.




But I wish you a nice mother's day,


Be carefree for a day


This is what I always tell you


And it's all the other way around.






So, that was the poem, I just don't know when to put a comma ashamed


I hope you liked it.




Elite girl ^^