This is my first FF, so don't be too hard with the comments :-)




The beginning of this story begins on the large platform at Dendes Palace.


Piccolo was busy training again, and Dende watched him curiously, as always. But this time was something different than usual. Piccolo had a strange feeling all day, but he didn't know where this feeling came from. The sun was just at its highest, it was noon when heavy, dense and at the same time deep black clouds pushed themselves in front of the sun. Normally this is nothing unusual, but these clouds gathered into a large vortex, which in the middle seemed even blacker than black. "What the hell is that?" Piccolo called against the storm that had come up quickly. "I don't know, but it seems to me to be a kind of portal.", Dende called back. And he seemed to be right. Because a bright column of light suddenly came from the center of the vortex and hit the center of the platform.For a few moments the light was constant and equally strong, but the next moment flowers began to twitch around the column and a strange being fell backwards from the portal. The creature hit the ground hard and lay motionless. The pillar of light went out, but the vortex remained. Dende immediately ran to the being on the vortex. He hesitated to heal it. First Dende looked closely at the creature and he noticed that the body of this creature was covered with scars. But that wasn't the only thing that was strange about him. As it lay there on the floor, it seemed almost as big as Piccolo, but it looked nothing like the Namek. It was in the shape of a dragon, not like Shen-Long's, but more like humans. It looked like it could walk on its back legs, quite quickly when you looked at all the muscles it had. but otherwise it was also of strong shape. It also had a long tail that ended in a kind of arrowhead.

The kite's scales were a brilliant dark blue. But now the blue, scaly body was covered with many wounds, and the armor, similar to the armor that Vegeta had worn on his first visit to Earth, had huge holes on its belly. "I'll cure it Piccolo." "No, Dende don't do that. We don't know what kind of being that is."


Dende was about to defy Piccolo's order when the kite rose from a sitting position. "You ... you have to ... seal the ... the portal ... before ... before they can ... follow me." "Seal ?! But how?", Dende asked now, almost in despair . The dragon propped itself up on its right arm, rose to its feet, and stood swaying.




Now you have to decide. Should I keep writing or am I writing so badly that I'd better stop?


Make up your mind. Until then.




Your Quel`Thalas