So here is my story. Please tell me what maybe I should change.




"..." - someone says something


* ... * - someone thinks something


<...> - dreams


(...) - stupid comments from me






Prolog:


The planet was about to explode when a small group of Saiyajin made their way to some space capsules. After they had reached the capsules, the Saiyan jumped in and took off, but as soon as they left the atmosphere of Vegeta-sei, the planet exploded with a huge bang. The shock wave hit a couple of space capsules, which immediately burst under the strong pressure. This made Freezer aware of the fleeing Saiyajin and hurled a huge ball of energy at the space capsules. Then he started laughing like a madman: "Hahaha, you stupid Saiyan shouldn't have underestimated me. Now it's too late and almost all of your obnoxious races have been destroyed."

In a field of rubble, full of the parts of the space capsules, something could be seen, one capsule was left badly damaged. Her occupant had been lucky, but he gasped and groaned, blood leaked from gaping wounds, sweat ran down the Saiyajin's body and wherever he got the injuries, the owner felt a terrible stinging. The young Saiyan was barely older than 16 years. Breathing heavily, he shouted: "FREEZER, YOU DOG, ONE DAY YOU WILL PAY FOR IT!" Then he leaned back in the seat with a painful face and let his thoughts wander: * I hope the prince is still alive. Ha! Actually, we should get him and hide him from Freezer so that one day he can kill this tyrant. ... The capsule is pretty damaged, it won't last long. I have to make my way to some planet, otherwise I will, like the others, still go on it. Easier said than done, the navigation system is down and I am drifting around helplessly in space.... DAMNED!!! How I hate doing nothing, afterwards I'll die in here, even though I escaped Freezer. I would have rather fought than run away like a coward anyway. * A heavy moan could be heard, after which the Saiyan fell into a deep sleep, but even now he could feel the terrible pain in his body.


Day after day passed, hardly a sign of life could be heard inside the space capsule. Yes, the Saiyajin was still alive, death wouldn't get him into his cold hands that easily, he vowed to fight to the end. He was a warrior, a Saiyajin, belonged to the strongest people in the universe. No, just giving up was out of the question for him.


Then finally the capsule raced towards a planet. It got closer and closer to the atmosphere and as it entered it fell towards the ground. Closer, closer and closer, the space capsule came closer to the surface, with a huge bang it struck. But it was not over yet, because the capsule exploded a few seconds after the impact.

In the mixture of smoke and dust you could make out two figures, as they came closer, you could see that they looked like people. "What was that?" One of them broke the eerie calm. "I have no idea. It could have been something like a spaceship, but whoever was in there must have been dead long ago," the interviewee replied absently. He was still staring at the heap of rubble. Suddenly, a hand seemed to have moved, the two beings reacted immediately and rushed to the injured Saiyajin.


His whole body ached, he felt that his injuries were being taken care of, the bandage around it, probably smeared with a healing ointment. In any case, it felt comfortably cool, just right for his burning wounds. At last the Saiyan dared to open his eyes. He looked around carefully, first to the ceiling, then his eyes wandered further, a very large room. The Saiyan himself was lying in a huge bed when he finally looked to the side, he saw her.Next to the bed sat a young girl, hardly older than himself, her face hidden in her arms, she seemed to be asleep, had she taken care of his injuries? (Note: Sorry, I know that this scene is very reminiscent of Bulma and Veggi, but I found the picture just too cute. I just had to write that now. ^^) Suddenly she looked up a little sleepily, the Saiyan didn't notice that he was staring at her the whole time and was startled as if he had woken up from a dream. A stabbing pain ran through him, which immediately forced him to fall back on the pillow, panting. "You should lie still," she said in a soothing voice, "you are very badly injured, it is a miracle that you are still alive. When you were found, you were more dead than alive. I am really impressed "You must have been through a lot." "Where am I here?" he asked in a whisper, almost in silence. He just didn't have the strength to get out any more, just breathing was agony for him."You are on Cyrillius-sei. My name is Berenice, I have taken care of your wounds. You better rest, you will get back on your feet soon enough. What's your name?" Asked the young girl and smiled at him at. "Breado." he replied curtly and closed his eyes.





At that moment the Saiyan started. * Oh dear, what was that?I guess I hit my head harder than I thought. As soon as I am fit again, I will disappear from this planet. But how? My space capsule exploded. On the other hand, I am the only survivor, the prince has certainly already been murdered by Freezer. Maybe I should stay a little longer on this planet after all, I'm a warrior, but I can't do anything against this tyrant anyway. I should get back on my feet before I make any further decisions. *


Time passed and Breado recovered from the serious injuries. Often he went to the balcony of his room and breathed in the fresh air. The Saiyan's powers slowly returned, more and more often he meditated or tried to fly. He began to feel really comfortable on this planet, even if he didn't like to admit it. Berenice was also responsible for this, she looked after him with loving care. Breado decided not to mention which race he belonged to, that would certainly worry the inhabitants of the planet.Not that he minded, but Freezer, that damn bastard, as he called him, might notice. He wasn't the type who liked to hide, but he acted carefully and knew that he would not have had a chance against this tyrant at the moment. He soon discovered that, while the Cyrillians did not have high combat strength, they had another great advantage. The young queen of the planet, it was Berenice, possessed mysterious powers. She had the ability to build a tremendously strong protective shield around the planet so that attackers could not get to the surface and conquer it. In addition, Berenice could fly. Nothing special for him, but a great achievement for the Cyrillians. So Breado decided to linger a little longer on this planet.








Several years later, called on the blue planet: Earth




In the building of the Capsule Corp. and simultaneous residence of the Briefs family:



"Come on papa, get Trunks ready, show him who is stronger!", Yelled a pissy voice in the direction of the G-room. However, because the door was closed, the people inside did not hear these cheering calls. Vegeta and Trunks fought again for practice purposes and it didn't look good for the young half-saiyajin, he went down panting. His father shot him a few more ki-blasts, then he walked calmly to the control panel and lowered gravity. Vegeta opened the door and was greeted with joy by his little daughter with a towel and a magic bean. She tossed a second bean at Trunks with the words ´Loser`, who ate it immediately. Then Bra ran to her father's side and smiled at him. He just grumbled at her: “What is it?” Today he was in a pretty bad mood, which suddenly brightened when his little daughter replied, intimidated: “N ... nothing. I just think you're really super strong , Father.I'm sure no one can beat you, you even really messed up Trunks. "Vegeta tried to smile, but only a funny grin came out, which made the little one unintentionally laugh when Bra saw it. Now the normally proud Saiyan prince took his daughter in his arms and whispered in her ear:" You are absolutely right about that, princess. "Bra started to laugh again and Vegeta couldn't help smiling either.


In the meantime Trunks had regained his strength and straightened up. It annoyed him, his father always took these training fights so seriously and Bra was always on his side. He was absolutely fed up with being messed up all the time. Trunks now walked the long aisles of Capsule Corp. along towards the bathroom, now it just had to be a cold shower. Here and there some employees met him and stared at him in amazement. No wonder, he was walking around with totally tattered clothes.

The next morning the sun shone through the window and right into Trunks' face, who turned around so that he could still sleep. Suddenly a soft voice whispered in his ear: "Honey? ... Are you still sleeping, my darling?" He mumbled a quiet 'no', which he shouldn't have done, because his mother began: "Then it is yes GOOD. PLEASE YOUR LAZY BUTT DOWN AND GO TO SCHOOL! "The boy fell from the clouds and looked first at the clock, then at Bulma's angry face and finally Trunks got up to go to the bathroom, still drowsy. Ten minutes later he finished in the kitchen, where Vegeta and Bra were already sitting, to have breakfast. Trunks mumbled a 'morning' whereupon his father only grumbled and