Hello, it's me, tarragon. I have a few questions for you:


1. Did you like my first FF?


2. Should I keep writing?


3. If so, what? Here are my ideas:




1: Saiya-jin wedding (excerpt):


Son Goku stood in the front yard of the CC. Still in hand the strange white envelope with the strange invitation. he looked around bored. He wasn't the only one cavorting on the lawn: All the Briefs, Yamcha, Oolong, Pool, his own family and Videl, C18 (Or is it F21?), Kuririn, Marron and Pan. Even Muten-Roshi, even a ghost, the only one missing was Piccolo.


They all stood together in small groups and gossiped about the impending surprise.


Son-Goku looked over at the door of the CC. And finally, after a good 20 minutes, something happened there. the door opened a little and a blue head peeked cautiously out of the door ...


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2: Through Dimension and Time - HopeII


(ATTENTION! ATTENTION! This FF is only intended for people who know other manga and anime besides DBZ. If this is not the case, I would strongly advise against reading this FF. I AM SERIOUS!)


Karin walked slowly down the gloomy street. The purple cloak fluttered in the evening breeze. Something happened behind the window of the villa and barely a second later the street opened up under her feet and she fell into a black hole.


karin screamed that the impact would be very hard. She pressed her arms to her body ... But the expected impact did not materialize. Instead (my favorite word!) She ended up in the arms of a strong young man. karin opened her eyes. She looked into the azure eyes of a teenager. The light purple hair hung in tears down to the ears ...




Which do you like better? Comments please!