In my story, Son Goten is in 11th grade and is firmly with Bra. Son Goten is in the same class as Trunks. Here we go.




Trunks and Son Goten are together at Trunks in the c.c. gone to study for a job there. Bra comes home there too. Son Gotenkisses her briefly and then continues to learn. Suddenly Trunks and Son Goten feel an unknown aura that emits about 18 times as much energy as Gotenks in his triple Supersayajin phase. You immediately stop learning and take off. See there it is Vegata. But something is wrong with him. He's a lot stronger than usual and he's laughing so funny. There comes an unknown girl who can also fly. ´She thinks she enchanted Vegeta and made him so much stronger. (Typical for Vegeta, who has agreed). And indeed he sold her his soul in order to become so incredibly strong. Trunks freaks out and pounces on the girl. But Vegeta ........



I would like to hear your opinion first and whether I should continue writing?