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Fanfic: New Supersayajins Teil 1
Chapter: New Supersayajins Part 1
My story takes place 100 years after Dragonball GT. The main characters are Gokuhan a descendant of Goku, Vegerro a descendant of Vegeta, Burari a descendant of Brolli and Ragnar and Terrak the two sons of Piccolo.
It was a sunny day on the planet Dartum in the southern galaxy. Gokuhan was once again busy with his training and field work and was already working up a sweat. He went to the nearby well to take a sip of water when he suddenly noticed two huge auras that were rapidly approaching the planet. And a few minutes later he saw a small space capsule hit a few kilometers away. Gokuhan immediately took off and examined the crater. A Namek who looked a lot like Piccolo stepped out of the capsule, but he was wearing white combat uniform. When he saw Gokuhan, he called out to him: "Come on, get out of here, he's about to be there! And a second capsule landed a few hundred meters next to Gokuhan.A Namek also emerged from her, but he wore black combat uniform and had red bracelets. He floated over to the other Namek, ignoring Gokuhan and said: "Come on Terrak, give up you will never defeat me, join me or die"! "I'd rather die than help you Ragnar" Immediately Terrak turned into an SNSJ 1 and attacked Ragnar. He hit him in the stomach with his elbow and it was thrown back a few hundred meters. Ragnar got up again and now he turned into an SNSJ 1. They fought bitterly but you could tell that Terrak was inferior to him. Ragnar hit Terrak on the floor and now stood on his chest: "Well then I just have to destroy you". He raised his hand and formed a ki ball. Gokuhan couldn't watch any longer. He turned into an SSJ5 and attacked Ragnar. This saw him coming, teleported behind him and released a huge charge of ki energy.Gokuhan turned back and lay next to Terrak. Ragnar rose into the air and was about to destroy them when suddenly a fist hit Ragnar's face. Gokuhan looked up and was startled. He saw Cell, only it had the color yellow and black instead of dark green dots on his head. He shot two small ki beams at Terrak and Gokuhan which gave them some energy back. "You ... can't you finally die, Ragnar cried." He let out a huge scream and concentrated an enormous amount of energy. He let go of a huge ball of energy and shouted: "Die"! A huge ball of energy raced towards the three of them !!!
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It was a sunny day on the planet Dartum in the southern galaxy. Gokuhan was once again busy with his training and field work and was already working up a sweat. He went to the nearby well to take a sip of water when he suddenly noticed two huge auras that were rapidly approaching the planet. And a few minutes later he saw a small space capsule hit a few kilometers away. Gokuhan immediately took off and examined the crater. A Namek who looked a lot like Piccolo stepped out of the capsule, but he was wearing white combat uniform. When he saw Gokuhan, he called out to him: "Come on, get out of here, he's about to be there! And a second capsule landed a few hundred meters next to Gokuhan.A Namek also emerged from her, but he wore black combat uniform and had red bracelets. He floated over to the other Namek, ignoring Gokuhan and said: "Come on Terrak, give up you will never defeat me, join me or die"! "I'd rather die than help you Ragnar" Immediately Terrak turned into an SNSJ 1 and attacked Ragnar. He hit him in the stomach with his elbow and it was thrown back a few hundred meters. Ragnar got up again and now he turned into an SNSJ 1. They fought bitterly but you could tell that Terrak was inferior to him. Ragnar hit Terrak on the floor and now stood on his chest: "Well then I just have to destroy you". He raised his hand and formed a ki ball. Gokuhan couldn't watch any longer. He turned into an SSJ5 and attacked Ragnar. This saw him coming, teleported behind him and released a huge charge of ki energy.Gokuhan turned back and lay next to Terrak. Ragnar rose into the air and was about to destroy them when suddenly a fist hit Ragnar's face. Gokuhan looked up and was startled. He saw Cell, only it had the color yellow and black instead of dark green dots on his head. He shot two small ki beams at Terrak and Gokuhan which gave them some energy back. "You ... can't you finally die, Ragnar cried." He let out a huge scream and concentrated an enormous amount of energy. He let go of a huge ball of energy and shouted: "Die"! A huge ball of energy raced towards the three of them !!!
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