OK, this is a first DB fan story, I hope you like it and you can give me a few tips :):




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* An old man and 3 young Saiya-jins are sitting by a large campfire and the man


starts to tell: *






It was the same day as ever about 280 years ago when Son - Goku, a Saiya-jin, and Son - Goten, his son, trained in front of the house.


A voice rang out from the house: "Come in, the food is ready." That was ChiChi, Goku's wife. Wiest you she was from earth and a beautiful woman. * The children looked at the old man in a fascinating way. *


The two went in and were about to sit down when suddenly Master Kaio said to Son - Goku: "Goku, it's terrible, you have to come ..." Then he fell silent again. Master Kaio was the god of this galaxy. * The old man takes a drag on his pipe and then he starts again: * "What's wrong papa?" Goten said, but by then Goku had teleported away.

Once there, he saw a kind of ghost beating the man with the barbels over and over again. Goku rushed to help him immediately but the ghost just turned around, laughed at him and hit him so hard in the face that Goku passed out immediately.


When Goku woke up he saw Bananas, Kaio's "house monkey" in front of the man and cried. Goku couldn't feel his energy anymore and knew that he was Kaio dead. * The man pulled again, grinned and said: *


Our hero, Goku, screamed so loud that even the Kaio of the West could still hear the scream.


He swore to take revenge on those who did this to his old master.


Goku remembered the killer's face. He couldn't place it. It reminded him of many enemies he had defeated years before.


Goku took the dead kaio and bananas to Muten Roshi.


"HELLO ?? Anyone there?" Goku shouted loudly and the old one, formerly known as Jackie Chun, who looked at the loo almost fell off it.The old man ran out quickly and saw Goku, with the dead Kaio in his arms, and Banans, who was still crying. "What happened Goku?" asked the old man, horrified. Goku told him the whole story and they put the kaio in an old hoipois coffin that they still had from Muten Roshi and Kuririn's death.


"I have to find the killer," Goku said as a tear ran down his cheek. "A ... But where do you want to find such a being?" replied the old man. "I don't know yet, BUT I MUST" shouted Goku and flew away so fast that the old man couldn't even see him fly ...




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So that's it for the first time when the story arrives I will continue writing immediately ... cYa soon kan3da