Hi!




I have a few things that would interest me. So let's start with the questions. In addition, since everything is different in my FF, you know, read under: "All for love Part 1 / Person description 2" what about the people, the first one was totally lousy, so I'm doing a second one now, as part 2 there is a lot going on in the company ... let yourself be surprised !!




~~~ QUESTIONS ~~~




1. Should I write longer parts?


2. Should I stick to the story more (I'll write down a little difference afterwards)?


3. Should I describe everything well, but it takes longer for the FF to end (it takes forever)?




~~~ QUESTIONS ~~~






In the real story, Bulma would have fallen in love with Vegeta a little later and she would have had to take a test to see if she was still a virgin.


-> Conclusion: Vegeta and Bulma would only have made love later. From now on I can start with the right story or round it off and change it.



The choice is yours. I am waiting for five comments! Hurry up!!!!




by Nath