Hello!


Here is my first FF. There is some humor in it. But also all of the above.


,, ... `` when someone speaks


`...` when someone thinks


[]My absolutely overdue comments on this


Please give your honest opinion on it.


Chapter 1: Son-Goten's girlfriend


Son-Goten came down the stairs. ,,Good Morning! '' he said, half yawning. ,,Tomorrow! '' said Son-Goku, who was already sitting at the table and stuffing several pounds of food into himself.[as we know him],, Good morning my darling! Did you sleep well? '' asked Chi-Chi. “No, actually pretty crappy as always. '' Son-Goten sat at the breakfast table and also pounded mountains of food into himself. A short time later the doorbell rang. ,,I'm going. '' Said Chi-Chi who was actually doing the dishes. “Son-Goths, it's your little friend! '' exclaimed Chi-Chi who had opened the door. Son-Goten looked surprised and then said: “You know what we have rehearsed for in an emergency?'' ', Mhhaamm ...' 'Son-Goku nodded and quickly grabbed the newspaper and pretended to read it. Both of them suddenly ate more slowly. Chi-Chi came in and brought a blonde girl with her, she had an updo and the hair that was hanging out was held back with sunglasses that she had pushed up. ,,Hi! '' said the girl. She was apparently in a good mood. ,, Hi uh ... Sarah! ''[Sarah's English]said Son-Goten, a little uncertainly. “I don't understand why you all say that I'm your little friend? '' And those are true words because Sarah is at least as tall as Son-Goths, if not bigger. Son-Goten just grinned. “Have a seat! '' said Chi-Chi. Sarah sat at the table. "Do you have your tasks? '' asked Sarah. Chi-Chi continues to take care of the dishes. "Mhma. '' ,,German? '' ,,Yes. '' Chemistry? '' ,, Jo. '' Maths? '' ,, Yep! '' ,, What a pity ... '' ,, Why a pity? '' asked Chi-Chi. “It's always funny when he forgets his tasks! `` Son-Goten flew off the chair.[now didn't know what time to use], and when did he forget it? '' Chi-Chi asked confidently. "On Tuesday! '' said Sarah with a grin. “Can't be at all! '' said Chi-Chi, still sure of herself. ,,How so? '' "Well, I made sure he did it, I checked every half hour. '' ,,Funny. '' ,,How so? '' Chi-Chi asked a bit puzzled. “Well, he was eating ice cream with me and went to the toilet every half hour. I was wondering how you have to use the toilet so often. '' I think we have to go! '' said Son-Goten, pulling Sarah out of the room to the door. ,, SON-GOTEN! '' Chi-Chi could be heard screaming all over the house and he stopped. With the right hand tightly around Sarah's wrist[I can't think of a better word]and with the left his school bag. There Chi-Chi stood angry and grim and Son-Goku tried to calm his wife down and Sarah looked the most confused of all. ,, Son Goths? '' asked Sarah. ,,Yes?"" You are crushing my wrist right now! '' Son-Goten looked, then back at her, and then let go. ,,Sorry.''


,, So, little ones then tell me why you were eating ice cream! '' ,, Huh! `` Sarah got a big grin. ,, It was like this: ... We had made a bet! '' ,, And what kind? '' Chi-Chi asked angrily. “At Jenny's party, I bet she'd strip! '' said Sarah rather spitefully! “And what did Son-Goten say? '' asked Chi-Chi with a look at Goten. "Well. He said she is too good that she does that! '' Sarah said with a big grin. “You cheated too! You asked the three best looking guys if they'd fill them up! '' ,, I am not aware of any guilt! '' Sarah said still with a huge grin. ,, SON-GOTEN! `` Son-Goten ran out quickly and Sarah behind. When they got on the bus they met Trunks who was surrounded by girls.[I once gave Son-Goten a new hairdresser. Something like Gohan, but he doesn't have such a power lock.],, Hello Trunks! '' said Son-Goten who squeezed through the crowd and the other half threw themselves on Son-Goten so both were busy. ,, Well trunks! How are the final exams going? '' said Sarah rather spitefully. “I don't need to be told anything from you! But thank you for asking very well. '' Trunks said, pretty cool and relaxed[you have to know, the two of them can't really get away]. Son-Goten didn't notice much of it. He was actually crushed by an avalanche of girls. Sarah didn't seem very enthusiastic about Trunks. She was a year younger than Goten and they are both in a class and going to Satan Orange High School. When everyone got off the bus, many girls gathered around the bus. Son-Goths and Trunks had to squeeze their way through with great effort. ,, Goths? '' ,,Yes. '' Said Son-Goten tightly and both had finally fought their way through and the pack stayed behind them for now."You know that Sarah is not that practical for us? '' Yes, I know! But she is my friend and for that I even let sleep longer. "" I know, but you know that I only do this for you! '' said Trunks, somewhat kindly. ,,You are the best! '' ,,I know. `` Sarah was surrounded by a couple of girls. "Sarah do you think Trunks loves me? '' Sarah do you know if Goten thinks I'm cute? '' Sarah how did you become friends with Goten? '' Come on, girls hiss off! '' said Sarah irritably, scurrying after Goten and Trunks. "Hey guys, can you think of something to get rid of the pack! '' Sarah said when she caught up with the two of them.[You must know these wine parts there! I don't know how to describe it, at least these two tears flow.]


Son-Goten and Sarah went to a class. Marron went to a class among them who was sick today! How terrible. Goten and Sarah came into class and sat down.,, Hello Dermi! '' Sarah said to a red-haired girl who had two braids in her braid. “Don't always call me that! '' said the girl. Sarah smiled.


In ignorance that a threatening danger is approaching for everyone ...




I hope it wasn't too long and not too short either. cu pirate


P.S .: I am also happy to receive tips on how I can do it better and criticism is also welcome. Be as honest as you can.