Coma Part 4 by SSJTrunksFan




Sodele, it's me again to terrorize you guys. And I have to say, I'm really disappointed. I don't think my story is necessarily bad, but if there is no one who will confirm it to me, I see no reason to continue writing. I am now setting a limit for you: 4 comments! That is not asking too much. If only four people give me praise or criticism, at least I have the incentive to keep writing. If no one bothered to read this, I don't have to bother to keep writing, do I? Sorry if that sounds bitchy now, but it's really hard to type and type and then nobody cares. So PLEASE write something down for me!




"Hello, my friend," said the Dark Kaioshin and smiled wickedly at Trunks.


Trunks whirled around in a flash and looked suspiciously into the stranger's eyes.


"How can you see me?"


"With my eyes, of course," replied the Dark Kaioshin carefree."I'm not like the nomads you met on Osery'ahn. I'm perfectly capable of observing the astral plane you are on right now."


"And who are you?"


"Your prison guard."


“What ?!” Trunks was suddenly surrounded by fine white stripes that slowly joined together to form a grid. A few seconds later he was surrounded by a shimmering white wall that looked like milky glass. Unfortunately it wasn't.


"This is a dungeon for thoughts," explained the Dark Kaioshin. "Your spirit is now trapped in my head and is prevented from returning to its body. Be glad that you do not need food in this state. I would certainly not feed you."


Desperate and angry, Trunks threw himself against the wall of magic, but that spell was impenetrable to a Saiyan.




Kyoko desperately tried to move forward, but unlike a memory dungeon, her prison was not solid walls, but absorbed her powers and magic the closer she got to the border.She collapsed exhausted. A heavy load seemed to be on her shoulders and her legs were heavy as lead.


From afar she could see Trunks being locked in. And this time there was nothing she could do.


"TRUNKS!" She yelled as loudly as she could. Though she knew he wouldn't hear her. Unbridled anger rose within her. There was nothing she could do! You! Self-doubts were pushed aside, her conscience vanished in a sea of ​​hatred for whoever did the same to her family.


She knew what she was doing. She knew that she would play into the hands of the Dark Kaioshin if she freaked out now. Nevertheless, she could not control her desire to destroy. The ground shook and some chunks rose and began to float. The sky continued to darken. Now brilliant white lightning flashed over the vault of their future.


Cold anger flickered in Kyoko's eyes as the last of the moldy logs on the ground ignited and lit the ground.Like an angel of vengeance in the middle of the inferno stood a young woman with flowing brown hair and bright green eyes, whose pupils shimmered red in the fire.


She felt her strength growing. How could she have been good for so long when the dark side gave her so much more power? Why hadn't she accepted the offer when she was young to consolidate her power?


Love, whispered a little remnant of Kyoko's self. Love made you stronger than hate ever could. But immediately the whisper was drowned out by the raging emotions.


"DAAAAAARK KAAAAAIOOOOOOOSHIN!" Shouted Kyoko.


The mountains on the horizon trembled.


The man with the evil eye appeared before her.


"My future right hand called?" He asked.


"To destroy you," Kyoko replied, smiling diabolically.


The Dark Kaioshin was thrown back with the force of the blow of a whole mountain and hit hard against a stone that happened to be hovering at the height of his neck.He fell to the ground. Only after a few seconds did he get up again.


He stared at Kyoko in disbelief. "Where did you get this power from? I put a spell on you. You can't be that strong."


"And what does that look like?" Asked the young woman, reaching out an arm and closing her magical grip around the man's throat.


He tried in vain to shake off the magic. Slowly but surely, his neck was crushed. Kyoko laughed eerily when she saw how the once so powerful magician writhed and twitched.


"You should never have challenged me. Now I'm tired of your little game. It's very unhealthy."


New waves of hatred washed over Kyoko's sanity. Slowly the trail to her former self was lost in the sand. And then the way was blocked.


"I'm angry," Kyoko whispered, her eyes flashing dangerously. And this sentence was the trigger for a catastrophe that not even the Dark Kaioshin could have conjured up.



Kyoko went black and she sank to the floor, breathing heavily. With one hand she clung to a stone so as not to tip over completely, with the other she massaged her forehead, which threatened to burst in pain. Her heart was beating like crazy too, making her chest cramp. Icy cold settled over her. The magical handle loosened from the Dark Kaioshin's throat. Triumphantly he got up.


"We probably overestimated ourselves a bit. But at least, not bad," he laughed.


Suddenly the cold claw released Kyoko's heart from its deadly grip. Something pulled on her, but she held out. She wouldn't let herself be dragged away, but she felt part of her disappear.


A very great burden was lifted from Kyoko's shoulders. She felt a freedom, a light-heartedness that she had never experienced before. And then Kyoko realized that she would never hate again. Every feeling of anger, every emotion that could arouse hatred in her was as if obliterated.

Confused, Kyoko wiped a few strands of sweaty hair from his face. Although she was still dizzy and suffering from the loss of part of her personality, she opened her eyes. The environment was the same. Nothing had changed. The floor wobbled a little, but the young woman resisted the temptation to find peace in the swoon. Slowly, with controlled movements, she got up and lifted her head. In the middle of the movement she froze. Kyoko looked directly into a pretty face, framed by long brown hair, in the middle of which two green eyes shone alertly. Kyoko saw himself and almost didn't recognize himself.




The face that she saw was marked by sadness and suffering, but also by anger and struggle.


"It took a long time, my sister," Kaori said impersonally.


"W-what?" Kyoko was still staring at the person opposite.


"I didn't think it would take me so long to gain control of your spirit," the young woman continued, ignoring Kyoko's astonished expression."But now ... I am finally free and have been able to separate my mind from yours."


"What are you talking about?", Kyoko interrupted her with a touch of impatience.


"I forget ... you don't even know that you've always shared your body with someone. Then I'll tell you."


The Dark Kaioshin seemed just as astonished as Kyoko and just stared at the newcomer in disbelief.


"Our mother's body was weak. She was unable to bear two children. And she was aware of it. She used a spell to create one of the two souls. Of course the spell failed. It was one of the forbidden spells that never work. Unfortunately fate had chosen us to be twins. So two souls were sent into one body to live next to each other and form a unit. The next misery did not last long wait because the two of us, you and me, we were as different as one could be.We would never have liked each other, let alone shared something as important as a body. To this day I don't know how you managed to gain control over our body. Only in moments when grief, suffering and anger particularly tormented you, I was able to fight for rule. We never lived together, only against each other. I see you didn't know about me, but living in your head for all these years made me aware of your existence very quickly. "Here Kaori paused to throw a snappy look at Kyoko." Well, anyway, now that you've felt so much hatred, I was finally able to take control of the body and get your mind to release me. That is, at the moment there are two souls on this level, only one of which will return to the body. You understand?"


"Does that mean we're separated from each other and only one of us can keep my - uh, our body?", Kyoko asked with a strangely queasy feeling in his stomach.


Kaori nodded. "That's right. And you can guess three times who will be locked up by me on this level."


"May I say something too?" Asked the Dark Kaioshin and made a gloomy expression. "I'm not completely uninvolved either."


"Shoot off, but hurry up. I don't want to waste any more time here," Kaori replied unkindly.


"I tried the whole time to wake up evil in Kyoko. As I see it, it worked and now you are there. The balance between good and evil is thus restored. It is now up to you to put the scales If you help me, I can give you more power than your little hocus-pocus here. You can rule over planets and galaxies ... if you stand by me. "The DK held out his hand. Kaori took it with a suspicious look. She cupped his hand in hers ... and then hurled the magician a few hundred yards away.He hit it softly, after all everything was covered in mud.


Shortly afterwards he got up again. He wiped the slimy earth from his cloak and appeared again in seconds at the two twins.


"That was probably a 'no'", he stated unmoved.


"You have grasped it. I am already much more powerful than you. Why should I enter into an alliance with you of all people? I can get everything you can offer me without help." Kaori laughed scornfully. "Better to team up with a migrating snail. It will be of more use from you than me."


The face of the Lord of Darkness turned red. "You dare to laugh at me? Nobody