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Fanfic: Pan-total verliebt (Teil 1)
Chapter: Pan in love (part 1)
IT was a beautiful morning when Pan opened her eyes. The sun's rays blinded them. She squinted at the alarm clock ... oh no, it was already 10 o'clock. Pan was on her feet in one jump. She quickly ran down the stairs and raced into the kitchen. Her mother was already fully dressed and was cutting onions. Oh, already awake, little one? , she asked. Pan took a deep breath. Is he there yet? Did i miss it? Don't worry, her mother smiled at him. We're not going to Bulma until 11am. Your grandpa will come there with Oob. At least that's what he said. Oh, this Oob had taken away her beloved grandpa. For that she hated him. She could hardly remember him. She was only four then, after all. What's wrong? asked Videl. Oh, I think it's great that we're having a welcome party for Grandpa, but why also for this stupid guy that Grandpa had to exercise? Videl leaned down to her. Pan, what's that supposed to be? This stupid guy's name is Oob and he's very nice.Both crossed their arms. Well, if you mean ... Pan! called her mother. You will not do anything, you understand, just because you are jealous! Jealous, Pan shouted. Not true at all, said Pan, offended, and ran back to her room.
After an hour Videl called upstairs: Come on Pan, let's go, we're going to Bulma's. Pan slowly came down the stairs. Don't look so offended, you're happy, said Videl in a soft voice. Pan blinked at her. But actually she was right, she was really looking forward to her grandpa. And then she smiled and shouted: You're right, Mum, and then she hugged her Mum tight and ran quickly to the car. Her father was already in the car, Videl followed her daughter in a hurry and got into the car as well.
After 10 minutes they arrived at Bulma. Pan immediately opened the car door and ran into the garden. She looked up at the sky. Nothing to see yet. Well, you're waiting longingly for your grandpa, she heard a voice behind her.It was Bulma. Pan smiled and nodded. But I guess it will take a while. First come in and help us get the things out. You are not a strong girl? ....
After 1 hour all the gardens were gathered and staring at the sky. There they are, shouted Chichi. She was especially excited because she saw her beloved Son Goku again. After a short time two figures landed on the meadow. Chichi ran up to Son Goku and fell into his arms. Son Goku blushed slightly and said: Why did I deserve this stormy greeting? Pan ran up to her grandfather too and hugged him. After the stormy greetings, Son Goku said: May I introduce you to Oob, I hope you still know him ... Pan turned her head to the left and ... she couldn't believe what she saw. Wow, Pan thought. It's really nice. No, what am I talking about, he's totally cute ... tanned skin, a beautiful shy smile ...
Pan, Pan ... Hello?Hey what, called Pan. This is my niece Pan Oob, said Son Goku. Oob held out his hand to her. Their hands touched for the first time .....
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