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Fanfic: Gedankenwelt
Chapter: World of thought
My new FF, I'll post the beginning ...
In the meantime already has two forewords ...
So, I wrote a new FF, but it has no plot yet ... well, that would come now. Just post a few ideas, I'm open to anything. The text above ... I wrote something underneath it at the beginning every time I finished something. She's very crazy, but ... I think I needed something like that, my first FF really only got criticism, now I've stopped, and the constantly criticizing person says I should keep writing ...
So, my new FF. Should be a "Me in HDM" story, but I don't know yet ... yes, "I" am no longer in my world, but where then? Do I meet Lyra and Co? I have no idea and would be happy to receive suggestions.
Well, at the moment it seems to be more of a confused-thinking-FF, but ... I don't bother other people with my trash any more. I'm really trying to put in a story, but ... to no avail.For this I write fast and much like never before ...
Other people come along and I have no idea who they are ... This FF is the exact opposite of The Magic Knife, everything was so well thought out there ... a, it didn't exactly look like that, but ... it was so. And here? I sit down and write without thinking twice. Yes, I had a plan, but I threw it overboard while I was writing.
It occurs to me that the FF doesn't have a name yet ... * think * no idea, maybe they'll publish it on the board first, they'll be able to give me tips ...
Mushroom picking, I hate it! My mother woke me this morning to tell me to come with you, half an hour later we were here ... in the forest. The fucking heavy hiking shoes pull on my feet, I much prefer to run barefoot. But what the heck ... I'm way too good-natured. I stomp after my mother morosely. Yes, the bag is slowly filling up with chanterelles, but ... I'm tired, I want to go back to bed.Oh, I'm pointing the knife at myself again ... if I fell now ... so what then? Better not think any further now, knife blade down, and catch up with my mother.
We broke up, she discovered a nest of small mushrooms, I want to go to the car ... Since it first rained and I'm no longer walking on one path, I can only make difficult progress, everything is slippery and smooth, and now it gets steep too ... really very steep! There's a mushroom under me, I can't reach it, I want to jump deeper ...
I can no longer brake, slide deeper and deeper, my pants are muddy ... Something like that had to happen when I put my pants on, they always have to be washed when I put them on. Last time someone taught me about it, and I prefer not to think about the time before. But I like the pants ... my sister once brought me black velvet or something similar for 10 marks from the Bigstar factory. In the meantime, she looks pretty shabby; my mother has forbidden me to wear her any more at school.
School? It's vacation, just don't think about it ...
Finally, the slide is over, I want to stand up, but ... wasn't that a movement next to me? I stop ... nothing. But when I want to straighten up, I notice it again ... there is something! This time I know the spot, keep straightening up ... No, that can't be! I slowly sit down again, my eyes still on this spot ... is it possible? I crawl closer, bent over, I don't want to lose my job. But then I'm sure I've discovered a window, a window between the worlds. The movement that I thought I perceived at first was only the view of the other world, which changed when I tried to get up.
The window is big enough that I would fit through ... but should I really? I don't know what to expect, where I'll end up ... What if I end up in a place like Ci`gazze? Am I too old for ghosts to eat me?How does it feel ... what will happen to you? I remember my fan fiction, I got Vegeta through the ghosts ... Well, I let her attack him. What is wrong with him? Probably a reason why I didn't write any more, I have no idea. What if I was right in my FF, and the worlds of DBZ and all the others we have ever imagined also exist?
I notice that I am still kneeling in front of the window. Maybe I'll get a dæmon ... what shape is it? I'm crawling through, I want to go to this other world. But first I take a branch and stick it in front of the hole ... it's already marked on one side, now I just have to make sure that I come back in the other world. Does time pass just as quickly in this strange place? Or as with DBZ in the space of spirit and time? I don't have a watch, so I have no way of checking. What if the time in there is running out fast, and when I go back everyone's gone, moved ... dead?Installed the window?
I'm still in front of it, I checked it in the meantime ... should I?
What the heck, it can't get that bad, I'll dare. Mom, Dad ... my sister and everyone else ... wish me luck, I hope to see you again.
I'm through ... I think. Everything looks the same, I can't tell the difference. But when I look back, I see part of the branch that I rammed into the muddy ground. Speaking of the muddy ground ... I'm wet, dirty and absolutely smelly. I get up ... the window cannot be seen from up there, and if you come from further away, the tall fern and the mound of earth are in the way. How am I ever going to come back? First I look for a branch in this world too, and stick it in the ground. But I don't think that will be enough. but I still have the knife ... I go to the trees around the window and cut a 1cm wide ring in all of them at chest height.If I search long enough, I should find it again. But now the next problem ... where to go now? I have no sense of direction, what do you have friends for? But here I am alone, nobody who knows ... just me.
I've made up my mind, I'm going out straight away, so when I'm out the window, just ... well, straight. The path is relatively flat, I'm on the edge of a steep slope like the one I slipped down. If I had noticed that earlier, I could almost have saved myself the carving.
Is my mother looking for me yet?
So, I won't post the rest of the things here, if you're interested ... here:
http://www.eyeboards.com/showthread.php? s = & threadid = 48558
and here:
http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php? storyid = 936282
you can always find the new one ...
Why do I post the beginning here after all?
I didn't get any criticism, and Serran ... please ...
In the meantime already has two forewords ...
So, I wrote a new FF, but it has no plot yet ... well, that would come now. Just post a few ideas, I'm open to anything. The text above ... I wrote something underneath it at the beginning every time I finished something. She's very crazy, but ... I think I needed something like that, my first FF really only got criticism, now I've stopped, and the constantly criticizing person says I should keep writing ...
So, my new FF. Should be a "Me in HDM" story, but I don't know yet ... yes, "I" am no longer in my world, but where then? Do I meet Lyra and Co? I have no idea and would be happy to receive suggestions.
Well, at the moment it seems to be more of a confused-thinking-FF, but ... I don't bother other people with my trash any more. I'm really trying to put in a story, but ... to no avail.For this I write fast and much like never before ...
Other people come along and I have no idea who they are ... This FF is the exact opposite of The Magic Knife, everything was so well thought out there ... a, it didn't exactly look like that, but ... it was so. And here? I sit down and write without thinking twice. Yes, I had a plan, but I threw it overboard while I was writing.
It occurs to me that the FF doesn't have a name yet ... * think * no idea, maybe they'll publish it on the board first, they'll be able to give me tips ...
Mushroom picking, I hate it! My mother woke me this morning to tell me to come with you, half an hour later we were here ... in the forest. The fucking heavy hiking shoes pull on my feet, I much prefer to run barefoot. But what the heck ... I'm way too good-natured. I stomp after my mother morosely. Yes, the bag is slowly filling up with chanterelles, but ... I'm tired, I want to go back to bed.Oh, I'm pointing the knife at myself again ... if I fell now ... so what then? Better not think any further now, knife blade down, and catch up with my mother.
We broke up, she discovered a nest of small mushrooms, I want to go to the car ... Since it first rained and I'm no longer walking on one path, I can only make difficult progress, everything is slippery and smooth, and now it gets steep too ... really very steep! There's a mushroom under me, I can't reach it, I want to jump deeper ...
I can no longer brake, slide deeper and deeper, my pants are muddy ... Something like that had to happen when I put my pants on, they always have to be washed when I put them on. Last time someone taught me about it, and I prefer not to think about the time before. But I like the pants ... my sister once brought me black velvet or something similar for 10 marks from the Bigstar factory. In the meantime, she looks pretty shabby; my mother has forbidden me to wear her any more at school.
School? It's vacation, just don't think about it ...
Finally, the slide is over, I want to stand up, but ... wasn't that a movement next to me? I stop ... nothing. But when I want to straighten up, I notice it again ... there is something! This time I know the spot, keep straightening up ... No, that can't be! I slowly sit down again, my eyes still on this spot ... is it possible? I crawl closer, bent over, I don't want to lose my job. But then I'm sure I've discovered a window, a window between the worlds. The movement that I thought I perceived at first was only the view of the other world, which changed when I tried to get up.
The window is big enough that I would fit through ... but should I really? I don't know what to expect, where I'll end up ... What if I end up in a place like Ci`gazze? Am I too old for ghosts to eat me?How does it feel ... what will happen to you? I remember my fan fiction, I got Vegeta through the ghosts ... Well, I let her attack him. What is wrong with him? Probably a reason why I didn't write any more, I have no idea. What if I was right in my FF, and the worlds of DBZ and all the others we have ever imagined also exist?
I notice that I am still kneeling in front of the window. Maybe I'll get a dæmon ... what shape is it? I'm crawling through, I want to go to this other world. But first I take a branch and stick it in front of the hole ... it's already marked on one side, now I just have to make sure that I come back in the other world. Does time pass just as quickly in this strange place? Or as with DBZ in the space of spirit and time? I don't have a watch, so I have no way of checking. What if the time in there is running out fast, and when I go back everyone's gone, moved ... dead?Installed the window?
I'm still in front of it, I checked it in the meantime ... should I?
What the heck, it can't get that bad, I'll dare. Mom, Dad ... my sister and everyone else ... wish me luck, I hope to see you again.
I'm through ... I think. Everything looks the same, I can't tell the difference. But when I look back, I see part of the branch that I rammed into the muddy ground. Speaking of the muddy ground ... I'm wet, dirty and absolutely smelly. I get up ... the window cannot be seen from up there, and if you come from further away, the tall fern and the mound of earth are in the way. How am I ever going to come back? First I look for a branch in this world too, and stick it in the ground. But I don't think that will be enough. but I still have the knife ... I go to the trees around the window and cut a 1cm wide ring in all of them at chest height.If I search long enough, I should find it again. But now the next problem ... where to go now? I have no sense of direction, what do you have friends for? But here I am alone, nobody who knows ... just me.
I've made up my mind, I'm going out straight away, so when I'm out the window, just ... well, straight. The path is relatively flat, I'm on the edge of a steep slope like the one I slipped down. If I had noticed that earlier, I could almost have saved myself the carving.
Is my mother looking for me yet?
So, I won't post the rest of the things here, if you're interested ... here:
http://www.eyeboards.com/showthread.php? s = & threadid = 48558
and here:
http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php? storyid = 936282
you can always find the new one ...
Why do I post the beginning here after all?
I didn't get any criticism, and Serran ... please ...