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Fanfic: Eine kleine Lovestory Part 2
Chapter: A little love story Part 2
So that's Part 2. I hope I'll get a few comments soon (I'd be happy about 1-2) otherwise I'm really unmotivated. Ask me if anyone reads them at all. Please, please, I need criticism * pleadingly * But now it goes on:
Maiyaki was frightened. As fast as she could, she ran into the walk-in closet and tried to hide. Then she heard someone open the outer door and someone enter. After that it was quiet for a short time. The girl did not hope to be discovered by the person. But this hope to which she was clinging disappeared as quickly as it had come when the steps approached the closet and the door to it opened. She held her breath and tried to be as still as possible so that she might not be discovered after all. Maiyaki could have done what she wanted ER would have discovered her anyway, because he felt her weak aura; not good but still. For him the aura was too weak to belong to his subordinates.Now he was standing right in front of her, he could feel her aura. Maiyaki could now see 2 muscular legs that stopped right in front of her. Now she knew, she was discovered. Abruptly, the uniforms she was hiding behind were pushed away. In a panic, she held her hands protectively over her head, leaned slightly to the side and pulled her feet even closer to her upper body. The Saiyan couldn't believe what he found in his closet. It was an earth girl with long black hair who was trembling in panic. "I knew someone was there," he said more to himself than to the girl. Then he took her by the upper arms and pulled her up. When she stood on her feet she was still shaking and unable to stand alone, so he held her by the upper arms so that she would not fall to the ground. In the meantime she had started to cry, he noticed all of this even though she was looking at the floor. Maiyaki was scared to death and she really would have expected everything except what was to come.Surprised, she raised her eyes a little and now looked straight ahead. However, she could only see his muscular neck and chest. Maiyaki was unable to see the Saiyan's face because she would have had to keep lifting her head. But she just lacked the courage for that. Now the man spoke to her, "Who are you and how do you get here anyway?" The girl was unable to answer. Less than 2 minutes later she felt how he put two fingers under her chin and pushed her head up so that he could look into her eyes. No sooner had she lifted her head than she saw jet-black eyes in which surprise appeared for a brief moment. Less than 2 seconds later she looked into eyes that were devoid of any emotion. He was surprised about her blue eyes, he had expected brown eyes but not sky blue ones that stared at him in total fear. But slowly he was losing patience. "Tell me what your name is" he ordered her now. She didn't know why but his voice was deep and melodic, somehow she liked it, but she pushed the thought aside with "What am I thinking?"This is a saiyan! If he wants, he can kill me on the spot and I find his voice pleasant. Can I still be saved?
What is he going to do now? Who is the Saiyan? Will he kill her after all? What do you think?
sequel follows
Write comments .... PLEASE !!!!
Maiyaki was frightened. As fast as she could, she ran into the walk-in closet and tried to hide. Then she heard someone open the outer door and someone enter. After that it was quiet for a short time. The girl did not hope to be discovered by the person. But this hope to which she was clinging disappeared as quickly as it had come when the steps approached the closet and the door to it opened. She held her breath and tried to be as still as possible so that she might not be discovered after all. Maiyaki could have done what she wanted ER would have discovered her anyway, because he felt her weak aura; not good but still. For him the aura was too weak to belong to his subordinates.Now he was standing right in front of her, he could feel her aura. Maiyaki could now see 2 muscular legs that stopped right in front of her. Now she knew, she was discovered. Abruptly, the uniforms she was hiding behind were pushed away. In a panic, she held her hands protectively over her head, leaned slightly to the side and pulled her feet even closer to her upper body. The Saiyan couldn't believe what he found in his closet. It was an earth girl with long black hair who was trembling in panic. "I knew someone was there," he said more to himself than to the girl. Then he took her by the upper arms and pulled her up. When she stood on her feet she was still shaking and unable to stand alone, so he held her by the upper arms so that she would not fall to the ground. In the meantime she had started to cry, he noticed all of this even though she was looking at the floor. Maiyaki was scared to death and she really would have expected everything except what was to come.Surprised, she raised her eyes a little and now looked straight ahead. However, she could only see his muscular neck and chest. Maiyaki was unable to see the Saiyan's face because she would have had to keep lifting her head. But she just lacked the courage for that. Now the man spoke to her, "Who are you and how do you get here anyway?" The girl was unable to answer. Less than 2 minutes later she felt how he put two fingers under her chin and pushed her head up so that he could look into her eyes. No sooner had she lifted her head than she saw jet-black eyes in which surprise appeared for a brief moment. Less than 2 seconds later she looked into eyes that were devoid of any emotion. He was surprised about her blue eyes, he had expected brown eyes but not sky blue ones that stared at him in total fear. But slowly he was losing patience. "Tell me what your name is" he ordered her now. She didn't know why but his voice was deep and melodic, somehow she liked it, but she pushed the thought aside with "What am I thinking?"This is a saiyan! If he wants, he can kill me on the spot and I find his voice pleasant. Can I still be saved?
What is he going to do now? Who is the Saiyan? Will he kill her after all? What do you think?
sequel follows
Write comments .... PLEASE !!!!