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° .. ° someone thinks


".." someone speaks




A New Hope Future Trunks in its time




Part 1




After Gohan defeated Cell, everyone flew to Dende's palace to find the dead


to bring it back to life.


Trunks woke up and looked around. He


looked into Gohan's face, who was starting to grin. "What happened?" Asked


Trunks. "You were killed by Cell, but


Gohan defeated him! "said Kuririn


(Krelin) "Wow! That's great!" Trunks was happy. But Gohan looked sadly at the ground. ° Father died of my pride! If I had defeated Cell the way he wanted, he would still be alive now! °


The sky was black. And now Trunks saw the dragon Shenlong hovering over Dende's palace."One wish is still free!" said Shenlong. Yamch asked: "


Can you bring Goku back to life? "


"No, unfortunately that is not possible. He has already died twice!"


Suddenly there was a sad mood in the forecourt of the palace! Everyone had hoped to see Goku again! "Shit! What do we do now?" asked Yamcha.




Then everyone heard a voice speaking to their hearts. It was Goku!


Goku: "Hello, Son Goku here! I am speaking to you from beyond. Listen to me!


Bulma once said I pull bad guys


downright on. And if you think about it right, that's actually true. I feel like it's better for the peace of the world when I'm not there. Master Kaio sees it that way too. I'm not angry about it either. Imagine I get


a special bonus for saving the world! That is why I do not exist as a soul like everyone else, but I am allowed to keep my body. And the best thing is that it doesn't age because I'm already dead.Super what?


Master Kaio is staying here, and there are people from the past. So it won't get boring .... Just tell Gohan and ChiChi how sorry I am that I'm no longer with them. But Gohan is stronger than me now. "" Is not true at all! "put in Gohan." So I have to break up! See you again in the afterlife!


FAREWELL! "" SON-GOKUU !!! "shouted Kuririn.


At that moment you saw a picture of Goku in the sky. "He's really happy!


So no need to be sad! "Kuririn said then. At that moment he wasn't sure if he would ever see his best friend Goku again. Then he wished Shenlong that they would."


The cyborg's self-destruct sequence was eliminated.


Then Shenlong disappeared again and the sky became bright again.




A few days later, Trunks was ready to go back to his time. He said goodbye to everyone and promised to visit again soon.



So that was the first part. I hope you enjoyed it. The next part is about trunks.


Hope you write me a lot of comments.


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