This will be my 2nd FF. It's supposed to be a Comedy FF, and I hope it's at least a bit funny. I also continue to write the first FF.


So the FF is about life on Vegeta-sei in King Vegeta's castle. The DBZ characters here are K. Vegeta's subordinates.


Characters (their profession):


King Vegeta (King); Vegeta (Prince); Son Goku (taster); Bulma, Chichi; C18 (cooks); Son Goths; Trunks; Bra; Pan; Marron; Muten Roshi (administrator); Son Gohan, Videl (servant); Mr. Satan (speaker); Dende, Popo (sentry); Picollo; Freezer; Cooler; Krillin


(Boo, Cell, Yamcha, Pool; Oolong, Tenshinhan, Chao-zu and the beef devil may also appear)


First something about age:


Son Goten and Trunks are 9 years old; Bra, Pan are 4 years old; Marron is 3 years




1st chapter:




Narrator (Master Kaio): Hello everyone. The story I'm telling today takes place on a distant planet. On Vegeta-sei ... * leafing through a travel brochure * ... Oh, it's much nicer on Namek and besides ...



Vegeta: * vorwutfastplatzt * grrr ... continue now, otherwise ...




Narrator: * wieespenlaubzittert * It's okay. So there was a kingdom on this planet. The kingdom of the Saiyans. Their king was called King Vegeta. He also had a son, also named Vegeta. * in the lexicon of small names * Mmh ... that means something like vegetables * laughing on the floor *




Vegeta: grrrrrrrr ... nobody makes fun of my name ... * prepares FinalFlash *




Narrator: * vegetagarnichtbeannedundwitzseit derzeitungliest *




Goku: We're finally going on now. I'm hungry ... * loud stomach growl *




Narrator: What? ... Oh yes. So the story revolves around the cowardly prince ...




Vegeta: Final Flaaaaasssshhhhhh




Narrator: ....




Bananas, Gregory: * flenn *




Vegeta: * fg *




In the castle (more precisely in the dining room):



K.Vegeta: * screams * Where's my food ...




Taster Goku comes in.




Goku: Get in touch after my work is done. In any case, the food was not poisoned. * Serving plate in front of KingVegeta places and lifts lid *




Only gnawed bones come out.




Goku: * burp *




K.Vegeta: Ahhh ... * passed over *




Goku: ... ???


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