Thank you guys for your clerks! One more thing to explain:



The frame of the story plays about it, but some things are very different. There are a lot of conscious parallels that I've built in. It is easier for me to write about something that I have experienced myself, because then nobody can come up with "man, such nonsense". There won't be that many scenes that are almost identical to my experience. Much will be different, but I don't bother to say anything. There will be 1-2 more scenes where I'll tell you again that they are important. I don't mind, because afterwards nobody can say what really was and what belonged to the ff. For example, I don't have a biological brother. But Trunks takes on the role because he should be the "bad" one. * fg * (the bad guy in my eyes, but I still portray him well! * g *)



I see the ff as the end of last summer and besides, nobody here knows me anyway * hehe *


and again: please don't think that all of this has happened for real now. Only the 1-2 scenes (after this one), otherwise it will just be a similar story. As I said, I actually just did it out of boredom and thought nothing more about it, but that it would be so well received !!!!



And one more thing: I portray Bra much too ... dearly. I don't know, but maybe Trunks really had every reason to be angry with her, of course I'll leave that out in the story * g *, I want me don't downplay yourself. ^^



So, read the ff as if it were a completely normal made-up story, you will see from my comments that some things really happened. (E.g. that about smoking weed - it was a completely, or almost completely different situation ^^ - but I just had to write a Kommi because it is part of it and you would not believe me otherwise. * g *)





ps. In the end, maybe everyone knows the Goten character inside out (maybe), but I don't think Bra.



I would also like you to tell me your thoughts in the clerks, if you don't like something then I can at least react to it and rewrite it if I can.





Sooo, now it goes on:





"Um ... if you think so."

"YES, the mosquitoes are really too annoying for me." Goten was already in the air and took off, bra sighed deeply and flew after him.



When they got back to the came house, all the lights were off. They opened the door quietly, Bra heard Marron's whispers every time.



"It was set once in a long-forgotten country ... there were still terrible demons ... they came out of their hiding places at night ... and ..." Bra understood, scary stories were told. Only one candle flickered in the middle of the room. That's why the sleeping bags of the others were. She came up with Goten and spread out her sleeping bag. Goten his too.Bra lay down next to Marron. Trunks was on the other side of the big circle. Goten lay down with him. Trunks didn't seem to care. Marron had just finished her story. The others protested.



"Oh come on Marron! So unrealistic." Marron defended himself loudly. Meanwhile, Bra was looking for her friend Kerry. There, she was lying outside the group and making out with Paul as always. It was getting on Bra's nerves. However ... she would have liked to take this place there with Goten. Well, what is not can still be. (Author: nice saying right?)



She lay down comfortably and listened to the story of Andrè. Andrè, she thought it was a nice name. She only knew him from seeing. He seemed very "nice". But Bra wasn't all that into "nice" guys.



"The fog was particularly bad that night. We drove in the car, my girlfriend with me in the back, my parents ..." "There were protests again in the group.“Parents? - man, how boring!” André defended himself. "Man! Now listen first! I was then ... 13, it was ... my first girlfriend." The giggles started again.

"OK! I'll leave it right away!" Goten joined in.

"No! Speak already! We're listening to you!" there was a slight sarcasm in his voice.







"Well, ... it was dark night. Our author drove through the thick fog. My father saw almost nothing. He slowed down his speed. The road was cleared. Only our car drove on the country road. We crossed a layer of fog again When the blood ran up in our veins! I could no longer move, was rigid with fear. On the right side, 2 green eyes suddenly blinked at me through the window pane, but as soon as I saw them, they were suddenly gone again Then my friend crawled up next to me. She could hardly contain herself from panic, she cuddled up with me fearfully.But I was just as upset as she was ...... "

Bra listened wearily to the story. She snuggled into her sleeping bag and her mind wandered. She dreamed that she was this friend and that she had saved herself in Andrés embrace, seeking protection. Her dream was strange. She woke up. It was funny because Goten would have been there all of a sudden and she would have had to choose. Bra was breathing quickly and looked around the living room. Everyone was asleep. But suddenly there was a hand on her shoulder. Bra had a glimmer of hope it was Goten, but it was Kerry.



“Bra, I have to go to the bathroom, are you coming with me?” Bra nodded, she couldn't sleep now either.





Soo, I'm sorry it's so short, but I haven't got much time at the moment ^^

Please write to me again clerks!