Zorro can you stop the tears running down my face?

Hi you this is my very first FF hope you like it at least a little * g *
So let's go
"spoken"


It was still early in the morning but one person was already awake and was standing at the railing of the Flying Lamp <... why did she have to die at all or did she only do it for Nojiko and me, why didn't she just tell her? would live alone why only ...> The tears ran down her beautiful face in silence <... if she were only here now she could certainly help me tell me what to do or just hug me or with HIM talk to him, ask if he feels the same as me and if not she could comfort me because I would be sad ...>
But someone was still awake not because they couldn't sleep, but simply because they wanted to train 'a little', he said that yesterday afternoon and then withdrew to his training room and had just trained.He actually wanted to go to sleep but when he heard a faint sob from the deck, he decided to see what was going on.
'' Nami what's going on? Do you have something? "The young woman turned around, startled." Zorro? ! Man did you scare me "she replied to him now played happily" Are you all right? "" Yes, of course, why not? "" Because you have very red eyes because of that "" No, no, everything is really okay " But her thoughts couldn't get any further because he had taken her in his arms and now whispered in her ear "You don't have to hide your feelings They are not a weakness " With these thoughts she snuggled a little closer to the swordsman's strong chest and again the tears came but she did not know why" Thank you Zorro that is really nice from "" No problem is it now again?"" Yes " With these thoughts she fell asleep in the swordsman's strong arms, who lifted him up she just up and carried her below deck to her cabin, where he laid her in her bed and covered her up, then left her room and went to the other end of the corridor in his cabin to get some sleep as well.

So that's it, did you like it, should I continue writing or should I leave it ??? Praise, criticism, death threats ... everything is welcome.
Your lovly_angel